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i made my own version of how jake beats up justin

Jake finds Justin the park staring into space while he looks at Justin furiously; Justin turns back at a furious Jake and looks awkward

Justin-Jake! um , how did you find me here?
Jake -your mum told me that you went to park, I don't told her the reason why was looking for you
Justin- oh! ok , but why you are making that angry face for
Jake (angrily) - you are a coward, after what you done, you have the guts to tell me why I'm making this face
Justin - I don't know what you're talking about!
Jake grabs him and throws him on the floor
Jake (loudly) you had an affair with my wife
Justin gets up and looks stunned - how(nervously)do you know
Jake (laughs sarcastically) Becca told me and you know what I'm glad she did because at least I don't have to be in the dark anymore knowing nothing
Justin - look let me explain.........
Jake grabs his throat
Jake - No , Becca told me every detail about your filthy affair and I asked her the obvious questions when? why? how ?and she told me everything .
Justin - what did you do to her?
Jake - why should you care?
Justin - Because I love her
Jake punches Justin and drops on the floor and Justin's nose is covered with blood , Jake pulls him across the floor and hits him and then pours water on him , Justin winces with agony Jake continues to beat him
Jake - I knew you too were up to no good , since the court case I knew you too were to close for comfort
Justin - ok , please let me go!
Jake - you know when I married becca I made a promise that I would be 100% committed but she always made excuses after that because she had you on her mind , I should have known but I loved her too much to notice it because she was obsessed about having a an affair with you, that's naïve becca for you
Justin - please Jake !!
Jake - oh no! Not now mate I've looking forward to do this all day o give you what you deserve
Jake lets go of him and Justin screams with pain
Justin - you may give me all the beatings that you can give me but it doesn't change the fact that becca and me love each other
Jake - after all that you still haven't learned your lesson
Justin (loudly) OK I admit it, Me and becca were having an affair, and yes whatever she said it was true , it started at Christmas day and we had a one night stand but she couldn't keep away from me and nor can I and then we started having an affair for 4 months , we tried to avoid each other but we couldn't , I'm sorry
Jake - Is that the best explanation you can give? You really thought that you and becca were going to live happily ever after without thinking about how much hurt it would hurt people (tears well up in his eyes)I thought me and becca have put all our problems aside and settle down and have a few kids , it may not be the most fascinating lifestyle but at least it's a good married life , but no there is one thing that could in the way and that was you , I bet when you were having an affair you were talking about how poor Jake would feel but no you still went on and did the dirty and ruined my life, I love her so much but right now I'm not so so sure because of hearing this deception(Jake grabs Justin and pushes him hardly against the brick wall )everybody knows about yours and her game and good luck for showing your devious face around the village and relies what you have done(Jake lets go of him while Justin looks hurt and devastated)-im so sorry , (jake turns to him and glares at him and walks off leaving a guilt-ridden Justin sobbing on the floor)oh god! what should I do!


zara
 
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sorri but u must of been really board one day, but ur version sounds ok


One of the many Hollyoaks fans ha ha lol
 
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i made it up


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i make up stories


zara
 
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ya wa :/
 
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thats not bad...but god how bored were you lol
 
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