Ok guys, here's another scene for ya. A bit longer, and it doesn't follow on from the other one. Hope you like it:
Int –The IT office. Roy & Moss are present and are playing some kind of multi-player game.
As they play Moss keeps checking his watch, after a while Roy notices this.
Roy: “What time is it, Moss?”
Moss: (worried) “Oh God…er I mean…good shot”
Roy: “No, Moss. The time? What is it…? You keep looking at your watch”
Moss: (flustered) “Select hours, minutes from watch where time is not null”
Roy: “Moss, are you ok?”
Moss: “Yes, I’m fine. I’m very fine. You know fine...? That’s just what I am, fine!”
Roy turns to Moss with a puzzled look
Moss: “Ok, no! I’m not fine. I’m very un-fine!”
Cut to outside. Low camera looks towards Renholm Ind, a car front wheel stops in our view.
(Music) A dark, sinister tune beings to play.
We hear the car door open and the camera pans round the front bumper to show well dressed mens feet/legs. The car door shuts. The legs start to walk slowly & purposely toward R.I.
Back in IT Office: (no music)
Moss: “Fine is what I’m definitely not!”
Roy: “I thought so. I can recognise the signs…”
Moss: “I went SQL didn’t I?”
Roy: “That’s a sign yes”
Moss: “I don’t know what to do Roy. I’m scared!”
Roy: “Well tell me what’s up? Do you want to talk to Jen…? (shouts) Jen, there’s something wrong with Moss”
Jen emerges from her office
Jen: “Have you tried turning him off and on again?”
Jen laughs but stops as Roy & Moss give her off-ish looks.
Moss: “I’ve done a foolish thing”
Jen: “What have you done, Moss?”
Cut to Outside: (Sinister music continues) Suited man still striding toward entrance.
Back in IT Office: (no music)
Jen: (comforting) “Aaaww Moss, it’ll be ok.”
Moss: “No it won’t Jen. It was very foolish. I thought I was doing something grown-up, doing what a real man would do. But people could die, Jen…”
Moss grabs Jen and starts to shake her
Moss: “…people could die”
Moss lets go of Jen, reaches into his pocket, pulls out his squirter bottle of cold water and sprays his left ear
Roy: “Oh God, he’s really stressed!”
Moss: “Wouldn’t you be if you’d made a date with…. death?”
Cut to Outside: (Sinister music continues) Suited man enters the building & approaches the reception desk.
Man: (with deep gruff voice) “Good morning, my name is Day-ath, spelt d-e-a-t-h. I have an…’appointment’ with Maurice Moss”
Receptionist: Who? (Music ends with a needle scratch)
Mr Death(Day-ath): “Maurice Moss? Head of your IT dept?”
Receptionist: “IT Dept? I’m sorry, there must be a mistake, we don’t…erm one second please.”
She disappears through the door behind her. A muffled conversation is heard but we hear the occassional “Who?”, “What IT Dept?” and “Nice shoes!”. Receptionist reappears.
Receptionist: “Bear with me while I check the telephone list on the computer”
She plays with the mouse, presses a few keys.
Receptionist:”Moss, was it? M-o-s-s. Hmmm, no…no sign. No sign of an IT dept either…Sorry Mr Death, sorry Mr Day-ath but…bloomin’ thing! Oh God! It’s froze again!”
She picks up phone, dials without hesitating then waits….eventually
Receptionist: “Hel…er... Yes of course I’ve turned it off and on again, d’you think I’m stupid?” (pause) “3 days??”
Her eyes roll as she thinks fast
Receptionist: “But, I’ve got a coach load of bikini models here for a meeting and I…hello?”
The internal door bangs open. Roy stands there almost collapsing thru breathlessness.
Roy: (fighting for breath and looking around) “Bi…bik…nis…whe..?”
Receptionist: (pointing to computer, smiling) “Would you mind?”
Roy: “Wha…”
Roy collapses.
Moss enters casually through the internal door
Moss: “Roy you left the phone off the hook, think of your carbon foo…Roy?”
Moss bends down to Roy. Roy’s head lolls as Moss cradles it
Moss: “Roy it’s me, Moss…”
Mr Death: (Turning to Moss) “Mr Moss. Finally we meet, would you come with me please?”
Moss looks over at Mr D, his face contorts into fear, he gulps, he drops Roy’s head onto the floor. Roy yelps.
Moss: “I..see…you’re…here. Err…would you like a cup of tea? It’s no trouble…”
Mr Death: “Time is ticking, Mr Moss. My car is outside”
Mr D walks toward the door, Moss slowly follows. Roy tries a dramatic lunge for Moss but he’s out of reach.
Roy: (faintly to self) “Someone will die!”
Cut to outside R.I. Sinister music plays again. Moss and Mr D walk toward car. They both get into the car. Mr D turns to Moss.
Mr Death: “Let’s go somewhere less public”
Moss gulps.
The car pulls off and reveals a driving school logo emblazoned on the rear door.
End scene
Any thoughts?
Old geeks don't die, we just incur a fatal exception!
I have got an idea for an Xmas ep...if anyone's (Graham?) is interested. 
hows about a nappy? that way noone but you has to clean up?
