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Originally posted by Haven't a clue:

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hmmm, should i worry? Coz i hope u know i'm a Charlie lover....

I killed off Jack. I'm capable of anything...

Oh dear, oh well at least i know he's not dead in real life , yes i have krekk how could i forget, all of these are brill, with the possible exception of mine....

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Originally posted by Haven't a clue:
I killed off Jack. I'm capable of anything...

I knew you'd kill off Jack coz you don't like him..It makes good reading for your story though..Very good reading.. Hmmm. The possibilty of more dying just sounds even better!!

but for my health....not charlie

PREVIOUSLY ON DESTINY...

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Voice: "My name is Kim Locke. I'm a relation of your mother. Can I mmet up with you some time to discuss your mum?"

Kim: "John, do you know who murdered your mother, my sister?"
Locke: "Yes. My father.."

Kim: "Do you know where I can find your father, John?"

DESTINY
Part 8

Locke comes down the lane of his father's house with Kim in the passenger seat....

Locke: "Are you sure you want to do this?"

Kim: "Yes, he deserves it."

Locke: "Don't you think we should find out who actually did the murder?"

Kim: "Ok. We'll do that first. Then we can kill your father..."

FLASHBACK

Charlie goes to the plane were all his heroin is stashed. He takes out one of the small bags of heroin from the Virgin Mary statue. Unknown to Charlie, Locke followed him and arrives on the scene...

Locke: "Oh, so I was your destiny, was i Charlie?"

Charlie: "Locke, this isn't what it looks like."

Locke: "Well what is it so?"

Charlie: "Erm................erm.........I'm getting rid of them? Yeah, that's it, I'm getting rid of them..."

Locke: "No you're not. You've failed me Charlie, you've failed Claire and Aaron but most importantly, you've failed yourself."

Locke walks away leaving Charlie having to deal with his guilt. Charlie drops the bag of heroin and begins crying.....

END OF FLASHBACK

Locke and Kim walk into the sitting room...

Locke's Dad: "John, wasn't expecting to see you. And you've brought a girlfri..."

Kim shoots Locke's Dad in the leg..

Locke's Dad: "What the....why did you just shoo..."

Kim: "Who killed my sister?"

Locke's Dad: "Well, who are you first?"

Kim: "Who killed John's mother?"

Locke's Dad: "If I tell ya, will you ring an ambulance?"

Kim: "Maybe:"

Locke's Dad: "Ok, Ok. He was desperate for the money, for drugs I think. Heroin, he was on. You cuold see it on his eyes. English. Looks like crap..."

Locke: "You cannot be serious....what was his name?"

Locke's Dad: "I only knew him as Pace."

Locke: "Charlie......."

Awww. I was a bit gutted when I saw Jack had died..But, I consoled myself with the knowledge that..A: It's not true...
And B: J-Lo is now a murderer..Hehehehe

Nah, just kidding..I'm a huge J-lo fan..He is one of the coolest guys on the island...Under Jack and Sayid of course.....

Wow!! Haven't a clue..Brill..Keep it coming..Very exciting...

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knew you'd kill off Jack coz you don't like him..

Just to warn you, I don't like Charlie either.

Ohhh we do have something in common then..Hehehe.
Nah, I don't particularly dislike Charlie, but I find him irritating..Sorry Losty...
Jack, Sayid, J-Lo, Jin & Sun and Sawyer are my faves...

thats ok krekk, OMG that was good HAC, ohgodohgodohgod Charlie is gonna die
#takes deep breath#

Come on Losty...breath...BREATH FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!



ok...i am calm.....for the moment....

Wow H-A-C...tis getting really scary...lvoing it!

You like Sawyer right?!

Krekk...hey, how are you today....Happy Mother's Day btw....

I'm goin out soon...tis MD afterall, but thought I'd give you another part before I leave....my friend came and showed me how to use a memory stick! YAY!

THE BAD COP: PART 6

The three friends stood in shock staring at the piece of paper. Sawyer's hand shook violently and so Jack took the piece of paper from him, and began to read.
JACK: "Dearest James...we know your secret...if you want to keep it, and see your little 'princess' ever again, come tonight, ALONE to the Arlington House and no tricks...we'll be in touch."
SAWYER: oh man, oh man, oh man....
JACK: Whose James....Sawyer...SAWYER!
SAWYER: That's...that's my real name...I haven't used it for years!
KAY: Any idea who it could be?
SAWYER: It could be anyone...absolutely ANYONE!
JACK: Sawyer...calm down, we'll help!
SAWYER: How the hell can you help Jack...what you gonna do...operate on them?
JACK: SAWYER...stop it, this isn't helping.
SAWYER: Sorry...I'm sorry..it's just, that girl's EVERYTHING to me!
Jack looks at Sawyer with concern, his voice is wavering and his hands are clenched tight. Jack blinks as a triclke of blood drops from a cut on his head. He sighs and heads for the first aid kit.
Meanwhile, Sawyer is thinking about Bianca, completly unsure of what to do. He sighs, and Kay places a hand on his shoulder urging him to sit down.

FLASHBACK
We pick up where we left off, Sawyer opens his door to reveal Bianca standing on his doorstep. She's hugging herself tightly as a cold wind blows but smiles when she sees Sawyer.
SAWYER: I didn't think you'd come...
BIANCA: ah...free meal...like anyone's gonna say no?
SAWYER: (laughs) Come in...
He trails off as she steps into the light. When he first met her she was wearing jeans and a t-shirt and had scraped up. Now, however, she was dressed beautifully, a flowing skirt and cute top and her hair loose around her shoulders.
BIANCA: What? What are you looking at?
SAWYER: You....do you have a problem with that?
BIANCA: No...but just remember you can look...but you can't touch.
SAWYER: We'll see.
BIANCA: (Laughs) yeah...
SAWYER: I um...I ordered Chinese, hope that's ok?
BIANCA: Perfect...thanks.
The two sit down in Sawyer's dining room and Bianca looks around. She smiled, no sign of a girlfriend...or any parents, she might actually have a chance with this one. But she would not let him know that she was interested. Not yet, anyway.
SAWYER: I hope you're hungry (places some boxes on the table)
BIANCA: (looking at Sawyer) sure, I'm hungry.
He pops the lid of a bottle of beer and then turns to look at her.
SAWYER: What can I get you to drink? Wine, water...
BIANCA: Actually...I'll have a beer.
SAWYER: A woman after my own heart.
BIANCA: We'll see.
END FLASHBACK

Meanwhile Bianca was just waking up. Her memories came flooding back to her, "JACK!" he'd been beaten pretty bad.
MAN: Who...Jack? Nah...you darlin'...you can call me Mark.
BIANCA: I'd rather call you-
MARK: Ah, ah, ah...darlin', I wouldn't go around using language...it'll get you nowhere...not that you can go anywhere!
He laughed as he watched her look down. She was tied tightly to a chair, placed in what looked to be a living room. However everthing was covered with dust sheets or in boxes. Bianca recognised it immediately...Arlington House. She panicked...it'd been abandoned for years.
BIANCA: What do you want with me?
MARK: it's not you we want sweetheart...it's your boyfriend!
BIANCA: Sawyer...leave him alone!
MARK: Sawyer...hmm, it seems he hasn't told you...
BIANCA: Told me what?
MARK: Nothing...I'll let you figure that out for yourself...now how's your acting skills?
BIANCA: I swear to god if you hurt him I'll-
MARK: My...you are a fiesty one...no wonder you're his girlfriend!
He took out his cellphone and began to search through the address book.
MARK: Now...I need you to do a little acting for me...you're gonna have to cry to convince Sawyer to join us this evening...ok?
BIANCA: No...I am not tricking him.
Mark hit the dial button on his cell, he was ringing Sawyer but really needed the girl to cry.
MARK: I said CRY!
He hits her and she shrieks as Sawyer answers the phone.
SAWYER: Hello?
MARK: Why "Sawyer"...hello, I have someone who wants to speak to you.
SAWYER: Bianca...babe, you there?
BIANCA: Sawyer? (SOBS) Baby...I'm so scared.
SAWYER: Don't be...I'm coming to get you honey!
BIANCA: NO! Sawyer it's a trap...its a trap...mwhdfjf-
Mark clamped his hand tightly over the girl's mouth and took the phone away from her. He hit her again and this time Sawyer hears the scream.
SAWYER: Leave her alone you...you-
BIANCA: I'll leave her alone tonight...come meet me here...seven thirty...got it?
SAWYER: I got it!

The line went dead and Sawyer replaced the phone. He was shaking badly now and so Jack took hold of his arm.
JACK: So...
KAY: Is she ok?
SAWYER: He's hurt her...that jerk actually touched her.
JACK: Which Jerk...Sawyer...do you know who it is?
SAWYER: No.

FLASHBACK
Sawyer and Mark are sat across from one another at a table in some seedy looking bar. Both are drinking beer, and both have grim expressions on their faces.
SAWYER: So...what's the plan.
MARK: The plan is if this fails you owe me half a million dollars...
SAWYER: it won't fail
MARK: How do I know I can trust you James?
SAWYER: You don't but I promise...you give me the money now and it'll be doubled by the weekend!
MARK: You're sure.
SAWYER: positive...I'll be in touch.
MARK: You better be!
END FLASHBACK

Sawyer walked across to a cabinet in the front room. It was locked with a padlock, opening his wallet her pulled out a key. Jack and Kay watched him in shock as he pulled out a gun.
JACK: You're really going...you're not calling the cops?
SAWYER: Of course I'm goin' and no way am I callin' the cops...we don't know what he'll do if he gets angry...I''m not risking B's life!
JACK: I'm coming with you.
SAWYER: No..it's too dangerous.
JACK: What if you need backup?
SAWYER: I'll call.
JACK: What if he's hurt her?
Sawyer paused as he thought of the awful idea. Jack was right, if Bianca was badly hurt he wouldn't know what to do...he didn't want to be in that position.
SAWYER: Fine...you can come.
He took out a second gun and handed it to Jack.
SAWYER: You remember how to use one, right chief?
JACK: of course!

FLASHBACK
Sawyer and Jack are walking quietly through the jungle. Both have guns to hand and both look nervous.
SAWYER: You hear that?
JACK: What...your talking?
SAWYER: Haha...no listen.
The two men listen and sure enough they hear a rustle in the tress in front of them. JAck peers closely and they see one of the "others" crouching, holding a blade.
SAWYER: (whispers) That's our boy.
JACK: You ready?
SAWYER: As always!
END FLASHBACK

The two men prepare for the evening with slight fear. Jack collects some medical supplies and Sawyer takes his police walkie-talkie just in case.
KAY: Be careful...both of you.
SAWYER: We will...if we're not back by midnight, call the cops. Arlington house ok?
KAY: Got it...good luck.
Jack steps up to Kay, who now has tears in her eyes. He hugs her tightly and they kiss...almost as if this is their last goodbye.
KAY: Be careful...I want you back in one piece!
JACK: I'll be fine...stay safe!
KAY: Goodbye!
She watches as Sawyer and Jack exit the building, they step out into what has now turned into rain. Not a good omen. She sighes and then searches for a dust pan and broom, afterall, she might as well make the most of her time alone.

Meanwhile Mark had been taking out his revenge for Sawyer on Bianca. He laughed cruely as she fell into unconsciousness and dropped to the ground, finally free from the chair.
MARK: Don't worry Princess...you'll be fine...but what I'm gonna do to your boyfriend WON'T!
He laughed again as he waited...it was time to take revenge. And oh, this revenge was gonna be perfect.

THE END

ARGH!

SCARED?

I AM!

So until later....enjoy...X

Wow H-A-C...tis getting really scary...lvoing it!

You like Sawyer right?!

Krekk...hey, how are you today....Happy Mother's Day btw....

I'm goin out soon...tis MD afterall, but thought I'd give you another part before I leave....my friend came and showed me how to use a memory stick! YAY!

THE BAD COP: PART 6

The three friends stood in shock staring at the piece of paper. Sawyer's hand shook violently and so Jack took the piece of paper from him, and began to read.
JACK: "Dearest James...we know your secret...if you want to keep it, and see your little 'princess' ever again, come tonight, ALONE to the Arlington House and no tricks...we'll be in touch."
SAWYER: oh man, oh man, oh man....
JACK: Whose James....Sawyer...SAWYER!
SAWYER: That's...that's my real name...I haven't used it for years!
KAY: Any idea who it could be?
SAWYER: It could be anyone...absolutely ANYONE!
JACK: Sawyer...calm down, we'll help!
SAWYER: How the hell can you help Jack...what you gonna do...operate on them?
JACK: SAWYER...stop it, this isn't helping.
SAWYER: Sorry...I'm sorry..it's just, that girl's EVERYTHING to me!
Jack looks at Sawyer with concern, his voice is wavering and his hands are clenched tight. Jack blinks as a triclke of blood drops from a cut on his head. He sighs and heads for the first aid kit.
Meanwhile, Sawyer is thinking about Bianca, completly unsure of what to do. He sighs, and Kay places a hand on his shoulder urging him to sit down.

FLASHBACK
We pick up where we left off, Sawyer opens his door to reveal Bianca standing on his doorstep. She's hugging herself tightly as a cold wind blows but smiles when she sees Sawyer.
SAWYER: I didn't think you'd come...
BIANCA: ah...free meal...like anyone's gonna say no?
SAWYER: (laughs) Come in...
He trails off as she steps into the light. When he first met her she was wearing jeans and a t-shirt and had scraped up. Now, however, she was dressed beautifully, a flowing skirt and cute top and her hair loose around her shoulders.
BIANCA: What? What are you looking at?
SAWYER: You....do you have a problem with that?
BIANCA: No...but just remember you can look...but you can't touch.
SAWYER: We'll see.
BIANCA: (Laughs) yeah...
SAWYER: I um...I ordered Chinese, hope that's ok?
BIANCA: Perfect...thanks.
The two sit down in Sawyer's dining room and Bianca looks around. She smiled, no sign of a girlfriend...or any parents, she might actually have a chance with this one. But she would not let him know that she was interested. Not yet, anyway.
SAWYER: I hope you're hungry (places some boxes on the table)
BIANCA: (looking at Sawyer) sure, I'm hungry.
He pops the lid of a bottle of beer and then turns to look at her.
SAWYER: What can I get you to drink? Wine, water...
BIANCA: Actually...I'll have a beer.
SAWYER: A woman after my own heart.
BIANCA: We'll see.
END FLASHBACK

Meanwhile Bianca was just waking up. Her memories came flooding back to her, "JACK!" he'd been beaten pretty bad.
MAN: Who...Jack? Nah...you darlin'...you can call me Mark.
BIANCA: I'd rather call you-
MARK: Ah, ah, ah...darlin', I wouldn't go around using language...it'll get you nowhere...not that you can go anywhere!
He laughed as he watched her look down. She was tied tightly to a chair, placed in what looked to be a living room. However everthing was covered with dust sheets or in boxes. Bianca recognised it immediately...Arlington House. She panicked...it'd been abandoned for years.
BIANCA: What do you want with me?
MARK: it's not you we want sweetheart...it's your boyfriend!
BIANCA: Sawyer...leave him alone!
MARK: Sawyer...hmm, it seems he hasn't told you...
BIANCA: Told me what?
MARK: Nothing...I'll let you figure that out for yourself...now how's your acting skills?
BIANCA: I swear to god if you hurt him I'll-
MARK: My...you are a fiesty one...no wonder you're his girlfriend!
He took out his cellphone and began to search through the address book.
MARK: Now...I need you to do a little acting for me...you're gonna have to cry to convince Sawyer to join us this evening...ok?
BIANCA: No...I am not tricking him.
Mark hit the dial button on his cell, he was ringing Sawyer but really needed the girl to cry.
MARK: I said CRY!
He hits her and she shrieks as Sawyer answers the phone.
SAWYER: Hello?
MARK: Why "Sawyer"...hello, I have someone who wants to speak to you.
SAWYER: Bianca...babe, you there?
BIANCA: Sawyer? (SOBS) Baby...I'm so scared.
SAWYER: Don't be...I'm coming to get you honey!
BIANCA: NO! Sawyer it's a trap...its a trap...mwhdfjf-
Mark clamped his hand tightly over the girl's mouth and took the phone away from her. He hit her again and this time Sawyer hears the scream.
SAWYER: Leave her alone you...you-
BIANCA: I'll leave her alone tonight...come meet me here...seven thirty...got it?
SAWYER: I got it!

The line went dead and Sawyer replaced the phone. He was shaking badly now and so Jack took hold of his arm.
JACK: So...
KAY: Is she ok?
SAWYER: He's hurt her...that jerk actually touched her.
JACK: Which Jerk...Sawyer...do you know who it is?
SAWYER: No.

FLASHBACK
Sawyer and Mark are sat across from one another at a table in some seedy looking bar. Both are drinking beer, and both have grim expressions on their faces.
SAWYER: So...what's the plan.
MARK: The plan is if this fails you owe me half a million dollars...
SAWYER: it won't fail
MARK: How do I know I can trust you James?
SAWYER: You don't but I promise...you give me the money now and it'll be doubled by the weekend!
MARK: You're sure.
SAWYER: positive...I'll be in touch.
MARK: You better be!
END FLASHBACK

Sawyer walked across to a cabinet in the front room. It was locked with a padlock, opening his wallet her pulled out a key. Jack and Kay watched him in shock as he pulled out a gun.
JACK: You're really going...you're not calling the cops?
SAWYER: Of course I'm goin' and no way am I callin' the cops...we don't know what he'll do if he gets angry...I''m not risking B's life!
JACK: I'm coming with you.
SAWYER: No..it's too dangerous.
JACK: What if you need backup?
SAWYER: I'll call.
JACK: What if he's hurt her?
Sawyer paused as he thought of the awful idea. Jack was right, if Bianca was badly hurt he wouldn't know what to do...he didn't want to be in that position.
SAWYER: Fine...you can come.
He took out a second gun and handed it to Jack.
SAWYER: You remember how to use one, right chief?
JACK: of course!

FLASHBACK
Sawyer and Jack are walking quietly through the jungle. Both have guns to hand and both look nervous.
SAWYER: You hear that?
JACK: What...your talking?
SAWYER: Haha...no listen.
The two men listen and sure enough they hear a rustle in the tress in front of them. JAck peers closely and they see one of the "others" crouching, holding a blade.
SAWYER: (whispers) That's our boy.
JACK: You ready?
SAWYER: As always!
END FLASHBACK

The two men prepare for the evening with slight fear. Jack collects some medical supplies and Sawyer takes his

Wow H-A-C...tis getting really scary...lvoing it!

You like Sawyer right?!

Krekk...hey, how are you today....Happy Mother's Day btw....

I'm goin out soon...tis MD afterall, but thought I'd give you another part before I leave....my friend came and showed me how to use a memory stick! YAY!

THE BAD COP: PART 6

The three friends stood in shock staring at the piece of paper. Sawyer's hand shook violently and so Jack took the piece of paper from him, and began to read.
JACK: "Dearest James...we know your secret...if you want to keep it, and see your little 'princess' ever again, come tonight, ALONE to the Arlington House and no tricks...we'll be in touch."
SAWYER: oh man, oh man, oh man....
JACK: Whose James....Sawyer...SAWYER!
SAWYER: That's...that's my real name...I haven't used it for years!
KAY: Any idea who it could be?
SAWYER: It could be anyone...absolutely ANYONE!
JACK: Sawyer...calm down, we'll help!
SAWYER: How the hell can you help Jack...what you gonna do...operate on them?
JACK: SAWYER...stop it, this isn't helping.
SAWYER: Sorry...I'm sorry..it's just, that girl's EVERYTHING to me!
Jack looks at Sawyer with concern, his voice is wavering and his hands are clenched tight. Jack blinks as a triclke of blood drops from a cut on his head. He sighs and heads for the first aid kit.
Meanwhile, Sawyer is thinking about Bianca, completly unsure of what to do. He sighs, and Kay places a hand on his shoulder urging him to sit down.

FLASHBACK
We pick up where we left off, Sawyer opens his door to reveal Bianca standing on his doorstep. She's hugging herself tightly as a cold wind blows but smiles when she sees Sawyer.
SAWYER: I didn't think you'd come...
BIANCA: ah...free meal...like anyone's gonna say no?
SAWY

Wow H-A-C...tis getting really scary...lvoing it!

You like Sawyer right?!

Krekk...hey, how are you today....Happy Mother's Day btw....

I'm goin out soon...tis MD afterall, but thought I'd give you another part before I leave....my friend came and showed me how to use a memory stick! YAY!

THE BAD COP: PART 6

The three friends stood in shock staring at the piece of paper. Sawyer's hand shook violently and so Jack took the piece of paper from him, and began to read.
JACK: "Dearest James...we know your secret...if you want to keep it, and see your little 'princess' ever again, come tonight, ALONE to the Arlington House and no tricks...we'll be in touch."
SAWYER: oh man, oh man, oh man....
JACK: Whose James....Sawyer...SAWYER!
SAWYER: That's...that's my real name...I haven't used it for years!
KAY: Any idea who it could be?
SAWYER: It could be anyone...absolutely ANYONE!
JACK: Sawyer...calm down, we'll help!
SAWYER: How the hell can you help Jack...what you gonna do...operate on them?
JACK: SAWYER...stop it, this isn't helping.
SAWYER: Sorry...I'm sorry..it's just, that girl's EVERYTHING to me!
Jack looks at Sawyer with concern, his voice is wavering and his hands are clenched tight. Jack blinks as a triclke of blood drops from a cut on his head. He sighs and heads for the first aid kit.
Meanwhile, Sawyer is thinking about Bianca, completly unsure of what to do. He sighs, and Kay places a hand on his shoulder urging him to sit down.

FLASHBACK
We pick up where we left off, Sawyer opens his door to reveal Bianca standing on his doorstep. She's hugging herself tightly as a cold wind blows but smiles when she sees Sawyer.
SAWYER: I didn't think you'd come...
BIANCA: ah...free meal...like anyone's gonna say no?
SAWYER: (laughs) Come in...
He trails off as she steps into the light. When he first met her she was wearing jeans and a t-shirt and had scraped up. Now, however, she was dressed beautifully, a flowing skirt and cute top and her hair loose around her shoulders.
BIANCA: What? What are you looking at?
SAWYER: You....do you have a problem with that?
BIANCA: No...but just remember you can look...but you can't touch.
SAWYER: We'll see.
BIANCA: (Laughs) yeah...
SAWYER: I um...I ordered Chinese, hope that's ok?
BIANCA: Perfect...thanks.
The two sit down in Sawyer's dining room and Bianca looks around. She smiled, no sign of a girlfriend...or any parents, she might actually have a chance with this one. But she would not let him know that she was interested. Not yet, anyway.
SAWYER: I hope you're hungry (places some boxes on the table)
BIANCA: (looking at Sawyer) sure, I'm hungry.
He pops the lid of a bottle of beer and then turns to look at her.
SAWYER: What can I get you to drink? Wine, water...
BIANCA: Actually...I'll have a beer.
SAWYER: A woman after my own heart.
BIANCA: We'll see.
END FLASHBACK

Meanwhile Bianca was just waking up. Her memories came flooding back to her, "JACK!" he'd been beaten pretty bad.
MAN: Who...Jack? Nah...you darlin'...you can call me Mark.
BIANCA: I'd rather call you-
MARK: Ah, ah, ah...darlin', I wouldn't go around using language...it'll get you nowhere...not that you can go anywhere!
He laughed as he watched her look down. She was tied tightly to a chair, placed in what looked to be a living room. However everthing was covered with dust sheets or in boxes. Bianca recognised it immediately...Arlington House. She panicked...it'd been abandoned for years.
BIANCA: What do you want with me?
MARK: it's not you we want sweetheart...it's your boyfriend!
BIANCA: Sawyer...leave him alone!
MARK: Sawyer...hmm, it seems he hasn't told you...
BIANCA: Told me what?
MARK: Nothing...I'll let you figure that out for yourself...now how's your acting skills?
BIANCA: I swear to god if you hurt him I'll-
MARK: My...you are a fiesty one...no wonder you're his girlfriend!
He took out his cellphone and began to search through the address book.
MARK: Now...I need you to do a little acting for me...you're gonna have to cry to convince Sawyer to join us this evening...ok?
BIANCA: No...I am not tricking him.
Mark hit the dial button on his cell, he was ringing Sawyer but really needed the girl to cry.
MARK: I said CRY!
He hits her and she shrieks as Sawyer answers the phone.
SAWYER: Hello?
MARK: Why "Sawyer"...hello, I have someone who wants to speak to you.
SAWYER: Bianca...babe, you there?
BIANCA: Sawyer? (SOBS) Baby...I'm so scared.
SAWYER: Don't be...I'm coming to get you honey!
BIANCA: NO! Sawyer it's a trap...its a trap...mwhdfjf-
Mark clamped his hand tightly over the girl's mouth and took the phone away from her. He hit her

Wow. Four times beachy. New record.

Ok Beachy..It's a slightly better day today. Purely because of the fact it's mothers day, everyone has decided to give it a rest from the 'bad thing' that is going on...
Kiddies are being so sweet though...
I had cooked brekky in bed. Chocs and flowers, some really expensive perfume and I'm just about to tuck into dinner with a glass of wine.. Wish everyday could be like this..
Loving reading back your eppys btw... Takes me back..LOL..
BTW..Did you know your computer posted 4 copies this time??

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You like Sawyer right?!

And yes, I do like Sawyer. Doesn't mean he's safe though.

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Originally posted by Haven't a clue:

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You like Sawyer right?!

And yes, I do like Sawyer. Doesn't mean he's safe though.

Ohhh I like your stlye H-A-C...VERY MUCH!!

Jack: Your life in my hands. Episode 4.

The clock on his night stand said 5:12am…Jack lay motionless staring at the drapes in his window that were being tossed around by the relentless wind. 6 days had passed since he collapsed at work. Today was his first shift back, and though he was restricted to light duties only, he was glad to be returning. Some of his colleagues felt he should take more time, but Jack knew that time meant being alone with his thoughts.
He sighed heavily, dragged himself from the comfort of his bed and walked to the shower. He caught a glimpse of himself in the mirror. He no longer recognised himself. His eyes so hollow, big dark circles encasing them. He showered and changed then set off for work. The excitement and fear bubbled deep in the pit of his stomach. Fear because he knew at some point he was going to have to address Catherine and he wasn’t looking forward to it.

Opening scene: Jack is stood by Sawyers bedside. It’s all quiet except for the sound of the ventilator and the distant noises of people moving and talking.
“Hey Sawyer,” Jack extends his hand and touches Sawyers forehead…He flinches at its coldness. Just then, a nurse enters the room. Jack straightens up.
NURSE: “Oh don’t mind me, I’m just her to do some obs and change his drip.” The nurse picks up the chart from the foot of the bed, takes some obs, hangs a new bag on his drip and then leaves.
“Uh excuse me.”
Jack turns to see a beautiful woman standing in the doorway. She has long chocolate coloured hair, a slim build and seems somewhat nervous.
JACK: “Hi…Uh can I help you?”
WOMAN: “Oh, hi…My names Bianca. Bianca Crew, well that is…People call me Beachy…It’s kind of a long story. He and I…We know each other. Please, is he going to be ok?”
JACK: “Um, he’s still on the critical list, he’s hanging in there though. He’s a strong guy; I can’t tell you much more I’m afraid. You really need to talk to whoever has been looking after him. I’ve been away for a while.”
BIANCA: “Oh I see. So is he not your patient then?”
JACK: “Well, yes and no. I work mainly down in the ER. I’m on the surgical team. When somebody comes in, badly injured, Like Sawyer, well that’s where I come in. This is just post op service… I always like to keep an eye on my patients until they’re out of the ICU.”
BIANCA: “Thank you. Can I stay for a while?”
JACK: “Sure, no problem. Stay as long as you like. Look, uh I don’t mean to pry but, how’d you two meet?”
BIANCA: “It’s all abit complicated. Let’s just say he saved me.”
JACK: “Well I really gotta go, but if you need anything just go to the nurses’ station down the hall. It was nice meeting you uh…Bianca isn’t it?”
BIANCA: “Yes, and you are?”
JACK: “Jack, my name’s Jack.”
BIANCA: “Well bye Jack. Nice talking to you.” Jack leaves the room but pauses briefly outside of the door. He watches as Bianca strokes Sawyers head and kisses his hand. Obviously this woman has deep feelings him and Jack is puzzled as to why she hasn’t been in sooner. With that thought in his head he walks off in the direction of Catherine’s room.
Scene (FLASHBACK) Kate is washing herself in the ocean. Jack, from the density of the trees, watches as she picks up an empty coconut shell, fills it and then pours water over herself. Jack can’t take his eyes off her. Watching as the water cascades down her body. Jack hears something that breaks his trance and turns to see Sawyer... “Well looky here…We got ourselves a peeping tom. She know you’re a perv as well as a doc?”
Jack turns back to Kate…The water is turning red…its blood, her blood, trickling down her face. He turns back to Sawyer, he has gone and the trees are gone to. All that’s there is rocks and Kate on the ground all broken and bloodied.

Back to present day: Jack wipes his forehead, takes a deep breath and enters Catherine’s room. He is put out to see Nora isn’t working today. He could have done with being cheered up. Instead Danny is working. Danny is a 21yr old med student who’s doing a 6 month rotation on the ICU. He’s a nice kid, kind of quirky but his bedside manner needs a lot of work.
DANNY: “Hey, hey, hey Jacky boy. What’re you doing round these parts? Last I heard you were kissing concrete.”
JACK: “Sorry, what? I don’t follow.”
DANNY: “You know…At one with the ground…No? Hitting the deck, you know passing out, also known as kissing the concrete.”
JACK: “Oh yeah right. Funny I guess. So…How is the patient? Has she eaten anything?”
DANNY: “Oh yeah lots. Because she can can’t she with both her arms broken and i