Yay....

I found the trigger word..

Recall what it was last time B??

Well take off the sc and put a d instead and that is why..So I removed and altered it..

If the other one posts..It'll be amusing to have 2 the same except for one word..

Ah, a nice happy episode. Don't see many of them flying about these days.

Well done krekk.

"you, me bill and ben"!! love it!

lol so great krekk. but i'm wondering whats coming up next with the twins. i hope nothing bad happens...

well done krekk!!

Thanks Chicken..

I hope it cheers B up abit..

Thanks Hac..

That's beautiful.

Truely beautiful.

Oh K, you've cheered me up so much. Although it made me cry...again. I think I'm highly emotional....

But it was lovely. Especially the end. I love it. The next one sounds sweet...but scary.

Well done...LOVED IT!

Glad you liked it B..

I posted above the reason why it didn't post earlier..

Sorry it made you cry..You must be super sensitive tonight..LOL

Did you cry at lost last night?

The e4 one I mean, or didn't you watch it??

Oh and thanks for sticking up for Jack in that thread..

HERE IT IS WOO!
You asked how it was going, Beachy, so I figured I'd finish it and show you exactly how it's going. Here we go - EPISODE THREE.

Under the Sun
Episode 3


Se cacher


Jin dived, falling hands first. He hit ground hard, then immediately sprang back up and ran through the doors. He grinned as he turned a corner and headed straight for a massive crowd. He had heard the click before the bang had come, diving just in time to feel the wind ripple as the bullet ore past his head, barely missing. “What now?” He thought to himself. “I’m stuck in the middle of a bus stop with a guys hand right by my ass, and I’m on the run from a less – than – happy Businessman with a gang of hitmen and some very big knifes” His thoughts were interrupted by laughter. He was puzzled for a second until he realized that it was he himself who was laughing. Was he laughing in victory? Or maybe the sheer ridiculousness of it all? He smiled and shook his head.
Stepping out of the bus stop, Jin walks past a homeless man.
HOMELESS MAN – Could you spare some change?
Jin grins and takes a 100,000 Won note from his wallet*
JIN – I sure can.

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JIN – Micheal? Sawyer?
Jin frowns and a look of utter despair creeps up onto his face. He has no idea where he is. When he and Micheal found Sawyer, they were roughly 10 miles from camp, picking fruit and enjoying the glorious outdoors. The thought of this place being ‘Glorious’ right now was incomprehensible. Jin laughed hysterically at this and his eyes began to shift. He was going insane, and he knew it. Jin lay down and decided to accept his fate.
JIN (To himself) – I never thought dieing would be so peaceful. Upon closing his eyes, he is greeted by a bonk on the forehead.
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It is a curious thing, how life can turn on it’s heels in such a way as Jin Soo-Kwon experienced this day. Is it the interference of a divine being that turns a grey day into
gold falling from the clouds? Or merely a kid with matches who rolls a dice and observes the consequences? Jin had never believed in god. And to be honest, he had never much believed in the kindness of strangers either, not since the island. But now he felt a sudden rush of happiness. He pondered for a while if maybe he enjoyed the thrill of the life-or-death situation too much. After all, he knew he had nowhere to hide. No home, no money, and no plan. But, he couldn’t care less. If Mr Paik himself had turned the corner right now he would not have noticed. He laughed, and then stopped. What if Mr Paik hadn’t wanted him to notice? He thought back to his [somewhat brief] conversation with the businessman. He had taken a bottle of water from the desk and he still had it with him. As he realized what had happened, his face went red with embarrassment and anger.
He ran straight for the nearest hotel, and dived through the double doors [acquiring an ironic sense of déjà vu]
DOORMAN – Uh, sir!
JIN – I’ll explain later!
He headed straight for the bathroom, and as he got undid the latch, he stuck two fingers down his throat and barfed. Nope, it wasn’t there. He tried again. Nothing.
JIN (Muttering to himself) – Crap crap crap crap crap! Please don’t say it’s already...
He tried once more and there it was, a cluster of white stuff embedded in puke. He stared at the bottom of the water bottle and the same substance fell out into the toilet as he tipped the bottle upside-down.

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Jin did not open his eyes. He waited, expected another blow to the head or at least a voice. Eventually, curiosity outranked insanity, and he opened his eyes.
Jin was completely and utterly baffled by what he saw.
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Exhausted and drained, he hobbled out of the hotel and past the doorman. Catching the man’s puzzled look, Jin informs him:
JIN – Sorry, I got poisoned.
Ha. He knew it was funny, but Jin daren’t laugh. He felt that by laughing, he was giving up to the drugs. In fact, he couldn’t even be sure it had all left his system. He rounded the corner, and stopped at a newsagents to pick up a newspaper. There was something about the newspaper that felt...normal. It was as if, by holding an everyday object, his troubles, which seemed so ridiculous in comparison, just disappeared. The feeling passed quickly though, as he noticed a man, staring at him, mouthing a sentence. Although he could not tell what the man was saying, he knew he had been sent by Mr. Paik. Unknown to Jin, the man mouthed a sequence. A sequence of numbers.

4 8 15 16 23 42

*That much Won is equal to 100 dollars

quote:

Originally posted by krekk:
Glad you liked it B..
Anything where I...I mean B gets to snuggle with Sawyer, I'll love!
I posted above the reason why it didn't post earlier.. It's so odd...I know!

Sorry it made you cry..You must be super sensitive tonight..LOL I am...exams...and um....other things....got me?

Did you cry at lost last night?
Like a baby....three times, or was it 4, and all but one were coz of a certain southerner!
The e4 one I mean, or didn't you watch it??

Oh and thanks for sticking up for Jack in that thread.. Yeah...no prob! Were ya pround I didn't talk about Sawyer? LOL!

Ooo...Skorp....I like.

The style is really good...I enjoy it. It actually made me chuckle too!

Hope Sawyer's doing ok? PLEASE!

Well done huni!

ah yes, last nights Lost was sad with sawyer. i still dont like the Lunatic at all though.

quote:

Originally posted by crazy chick 84:
ah yes, last nights Lost was sad with sawyer. i still dont like the Lunatic at all though.

Now ya see...her and I, after 48days and the e4 eppy...have come to an understanding. We respect each other....not like, but respect.

I know exactly whats happening with sawyer, but you shall not find out for a while! Hehe, the finale will be all about it and leading up to it. Guess you'll just have to keep reading eh wot.

WOW SKORPIO!!!!! Flippin fab hun..

B..I am very proud..

And yes..I get ya sweetie..

I am thinking of ya hun..

I mean that sincerely..

I know we've never met each other...But I feel like I really know you..If ya get me??


It makes me sad when you're unhappy so anything I can do to make you smile is a bonus..

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Originally posted by Beach Crew:

quote:

Originally posted by crazy chick 84:
ah yes, last nights Lost was sad with sawyer. i still dont like the Lunatic at all though.

Now ya see...her and I, after 48days and the e4 eppy...have come to an understanding. We respect each other....not like, but respect.

I don't see why everyone hates Ana Lucia so much, I like her character, and I think she's played very well.

quote:

Originally posted by krekk:

I am thinking of ya hun..

I mean that sincerely..

I know we've never met each other...But I feel like I really know you..If ya get me??


It makes me sad when you're unhappy so anything I can do to make you smile is a bonus..

Yeah...I know what ya mean....same to you. And I thank you. So much.

And thanks for making me smile again. I hope I can/have returned the favour some day.

Krekk, wow. Very nicely written!! Although, can I just ask, is there a significance behind the name Bianca becuase every spin off seems to include her?

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Originally posted by Skorpio:

quote:

Originally posted by Beach Crew:

quote:

Originally posted by crazy chick 84:
ah yes, last nights Lost was sad with sawyer. i still dont like the Lunatic at all though.

Now ya see...her and I, after 48days and the e4 eppy...have come to an understanding. We respect each other....not like, but respect.

I don't see why everyone hates Ana Lucia so much, I like her character, and I think she's played very well.

I don't hate her. In fact, after 48days...I upsettingly kinda liked her. It soon changed however!

But, I think I'm just mad coz of her mean-ness to Sawyer. And the fact that so many of my friends have stopped calling me the "Female Sawyer" but now, "Ana Lucia"

Ugh.

quote:

Originally posted by Skorpio:
Krekk, wow. Very nicely written!! Although, can I just ask, is there a significance behind the name Bianca becuase every spin off seems to include her?

Ok...any Bianca/B is me.

Kay/Cat/Catherine - Krekk.

Melanie - Losty.

Bill - Bill.

like i said on the SF forum - why does miss Lunatic have to open her mouth so much when she speaks, and she speaks in slow motion. i just cant do with her. but i wont go on.

i'm getting a certain dvd this week skorpio so i hope nothing bad happens to Sawyer!

OOOH. Right. If anyone wants to include me, call the character Stuart XD

What DVD crazy chick? Im confuzzled...

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Originally posted by Skorpio:
OOOH. Right. If anyone wants to include me, call the character Stuart XD

Coolio....

I'm sure we'll all have a think!