... a song! i want a second opinion on it, it's about my late grandfather. hope you like it

I’ll Never Forget You

On that cold January morning
The phone rang and I knew it happened
As I shuffled down the stairs to answer the phone
My heart sank because I knew you were gone

No Christmas is the same
I’ll never see you again
I’ll never hear your voice again

I wish I could have changed the past
When I was young I avoided you
Now I know I wasted my time with you in this world

I wish I could see you again
I want to be able to talk to you
I wish you were more than a memory

Almost two years have gone since you went away
I wish I could turn back time

That's really good.
It really hurts when you lose someone you love, doesn't it? And there are always regrets that you didn't say or do enough to let them know you cared.The pain will get less, but the sadness remains. I lost a boyf. in a road accident 10 years ago, and it can still reduce me to tears at times. Talking and writing about your feelings is really good,so don't bottle it up.

well i wrote it on the 30th January this year, and it was exactly 2 years since he died, and i just thought i should write a song about him. i've just got to try and put it to music now.

that's beautiful

thank yooou :hugz:

its beautiful!

i can only write depressing songs

its good that you can get stuff like that off your chest - I usually just bottle up my feelings!

yer me too. Tend to get upset afterwards.

Very good

yer, i'll bottle up my feelings for ages and then they just have to come out. Then I usually cry for half the bloody day!