Ok, this may be VERY off-topic, but i'd just like to share with you all a poem i wrote for my [now ex] girlfirend [we split up only because we live too far from one another to carry on ] tho i got 100% writing about it in my as exams, ive never been able to write... well heres my first attempt

Nothing More To Say

I’m not the same without you,
I only want you back.
Cos now the futures here,
And it never looked so black.

Every day that we got closer,
I felt my soul grow stronger.
Now we are apart,
And I can’t bear it any longer.

You gave me all, I ever needed,
I do not need another.
Amanda you’re my sweet,
My one and only lover.

Its over, yes I know,
There’s nothing more to say.
Nothing I can do, to make you change your way.
Just Nothing More To Say.

Terry

thats a beautiful poem terry, its a shame you split but i firmly believe everything happens for a reason. so glad you've joined our wonderful forum!

its a gret aforum, the best yet ive found! by the way, are ytou a lost fan? ''everything happens for a reason'' is one of the major themes in lost?

i quite like my poem actually

thats so sweet!

Ahhhhh thats sweet

no, im not a lost fan! never really got into it. your very creative, do you have any green wing poems?

no poems yet, but im gonna take some time out this weekend to develop my alternate ending to gw...

sadly as someone who got an A at eng. lit. all i can come up with is


Jjulian Rhind-Tutt
I want to feel your butt



then i get distracted for some reason

Green Wing Green Wing, how we love thee,
you make our faces beam whenever you're on tv,
with gorgeous Mac and crazy Sue,
Oh Green Wing, WE LOVE YOU!

thats class. pure class, nothing more i can say on that! nice job!

thanks

so much better than mine now go REVISE

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Originally posted by ulifas:
sadly as someone who got an A at eng. lit. all i can come up with is

Jjulian Rhind-Tutt
I want to feel your butt

then i get distracted for some reason

hahahahahahaha! i love it!


nnoottaaggaaiinn you called terry? if so HI TERRY!

thats me! terry hilton, with-no-relation-to paris-before-you-ask... lol!

doh!

green wing: a channel four creation
Everything we cold ever want and need
a miracle, a blessing, a kind of fascination.
here we are, panting for more, straining at the lead.

cold. no could metinks

love you billy! you heard my poem at the top of this thread right, people? well im gonna write another, for the forum members here! i might even write on esp for my fiance!

awww! it's really lovely

this way my poem! nnoottaaggaaiinn nicked it off me!

That's so nice!! Lovely

hhehe, i love writing

im goin to say your terry?^^

true...