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LOCATION:- INTERIOR:- DAY - A BUSY OPEN PLAN OFFICE.

WE OPEN ON A SMALL CROWD OF PEOPLE AROUND THE WATER COOLER THEN PULL INTO A CLOSE MID-SHOT OF TWO OF THE MEN (ROBERT AND TOBY).

TOBY: Guess what...I saw old man Roberts at the hotel with Jan last night...

ROBERT: (BORED)...And?

TOBY: And - they shared a romantic candle lit dinner and seemed very close, if you know what I mean...

ROBERT: So?

TOBY: So - they left together - hand in hand - and I happenn to know that they spent the night together...

ROBERT: So what?! They are married and it's their anniversary!

ROBERT WALKS AWAY, SHAKING HIS HEAD, LEAVING TOBY STANDING ON HIS OWN. AFTER A BEAT TOBY TURNS TO THE WOMAN BESIDE HIM...

TOBY: Guess what...

ENDS.


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lol, i like it Smile
 
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