INTERVIEW 2

Interviewee: I didn’t get it

Wife: oh honey I’m sorry, why

I: cos I can’t drive

W: did you tell him you can climb

I: yeah

W: oh, you should learn

I: even if I could drive I couldn’t afford a car, so I don’t see the point

W: but if you’re being chased by Zombies baby

I: I know, I know

W: I mean you could brake into a car in that situation, you know, it would be understood, I don’t think you’d get in trouble

I: I know all this Wendy, I just, just haven’t got the time. It was going so well today, I really thought I had it, they showed me the roof for Christ sakes, then some dick went and said “well if I was a zombie I’d come up to the roof, up the fire escape, with an axe”. I mean bloody hell. How good are these zombies?

W: modern day zombies dear

These are good. If I were you I would stick them together, correct the spelling and typos etc. give it a snappier title and keep an eye out here and on BBC writers forum for opportunities to get it made.

cheers scott, will do, have just been making it up while at work on my lunch, will look into fine tunning it when i get home, thanks again for the feedback

Alex

Loved the "Did you tell him you can climb(?)" and the final line. Gold.

I could really feel his disappointment. Then the little kick from the missus at the end. Lovely.