Heres a short sketch I thought of a while ago. I think its a visual sketch howsever.....


A RIVER. TWO 14 YEAR OLD CHILDREN SEAN AND PAUL, PLAYING ON A RAFT. HAPPY ATMOSPHERE. SEAN FALLS IN.

PAUL: (Shouts) Sean!!...Nooo!!!

PAUL TRIES TO CATCH HIM BUT CANNOT SAVE HIM. CUT TO TEN YEARS LATER. PAUL IS STROLLING ALONG THE BANK OF THE RIVER REMINISING ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED TEN YEARS PREVIOUSLY. AS HE STROLLS SEAN EMERGES FROM THE WATER, FULLY GROWN UP AND GASPING FOR AIR.

SEAN: (Gulping and gasping for air)

PAUL: (Shocked) Sean?...Oh my God!!!

SEAN: (Walking out of the water still coughing and spluttering) Paul... I nearly drowned, I nearly drowned.

Another sketch that has got me giggling like a crazy person. Well done!

You seem to be on a roll, Otterfox mate, this is a good one and no one can deny it? Jolly Good Fellow...
Frankie
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