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Ext. School Fence

A small boy is looking through a fence. A football lies on the other side of the fence.

Boy: (CALLS) Excuse me, sir!

An old man approaches and picks up the ball.

Man: Cleared the fence did you? Cor! You’re like a young Bobby Charlton!

Boy: Can I have it back, please?

Man: Of course you can.

The man throws it pathetically over the fence. The boy catches.

Boy: Thanks.

The boy runs off.

Man: What a nice, young man.

The man walks off smiling. The camera pans along to show the boy running up to the football. He kicks it and it flies straight into another boy who is tied to a tree.

ENDS
 
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High-five for mis direction!

I would, although whether you would as well, further descrine the old man , drawin attention away form boy


I got a postcard from The Outback saying “wish you were here”. I sent back “I don’t”.
 
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