Yeah agree =)

I wrote something about these two last week sometime i was bored inmy lesson so i thought hey lets give it a go. This is my first try at this so here it goes:

Sonny and Michaela n the school corridor holding hands

M; I like these moments
S: (nervously looking rund his shoulders) yeah so do I

His friends come over, he lets go of michaelas' hand

M; Whatcha doing?
S: oh hey guys!
sonnys' mate: What you doing with her?
S: ah nothing
Michaela goes. Sonny looks on

Later they meet again this time outside the drive 'n' buy

S: sorry about earlier.
M: You're ashamed of me aren't you
S: Why do you say that? (trying to console her)
M: Well when we are alone like this you're all over me but like the nextminute when your friends are here you blank me.. What so wrong with being with me Sonny?
Sonny looks on, he cannot answer.
M: Oh i get it (walks away)
S: Michaela come back!


Sorry if it isn't good like some of the fics posted on here.

it's good you should continue

Later Michaela is out with Amy and Josh

A: Michaela is anything wrong?
M: No why do you say that?
A: You're just... not yourself tonight
M: Well if I'm putting a dampener on your evening with Josh just say
A: Michaela!
Michaela gruffs and goes away

Walks into the Mcqueen house

Myra: What's up Love
M: oh nothing mum, im off to bed
Myra: It's only 9:30, and you don't need to get up for school.
M: I know mum! I just want an early night (goes upstairs)
Myra turns to John-Paul
Myra; boy trouble.
JP: huh?
Myra: Michaela, she's having boy trouble.
JP: how'd you get that
Myra: a mother knows.

this is really good. plz,plz continue.

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its good

i like it

I like this, keep going

Continuation..

Next morning. Sonny knocks on the Mcqueen door, JP answers.

JP: what you doing here?
S: oh hi John Paul, erm, I am here to see Michaela is she in?
JP: why?
S: I need to speak to her.
JP:Wait a minute you're not the guy she is having trouble with are ya?
Sonny bolts.
Michaela enters.
M: who was that?
JP: Oh no one, just a salesperson.

Sonny in his house talking to Calvin

S: Calvin
C: yeah
S: What do you do when a girl is angry with you?
C: Depends what she was angry about
S: erm, well my mate had this girlfriend and she broke it off because she thought he was ashamed of her, he asked me what to do but I didnt so i thought i would ask you
C: What made her think that he was ashamed of her?
S: because he never told his mates, well apart from me.
C: Sonny is this guy you?
S: What is this 20 questions? I'm going out for a bit
Sonny slams door
Sasha: What was his problem?
C: No idea.

Sonny goes out for a walk and bumps into Michaela.
S: Michaela.
M: what?
S: I'm sorry.
M: for what?
S: for ignoring you i should have stood up for you.

Sonnys' mates enter.
S: hey guys
michaela goes.
Sonnys' mate: What did she want?
S: oh my sister wanted me to say something to her.
Sonny looks on as michaela walks off.

ooo please continue

Later on that day.

Myra: Michaela, love, what's wrong? you have had a face like a wet sunday over the past two days.
M: nothin mum
Myra: You sure?
M: yeah mum, (starts tearing up) oh mum! (hugs Myra.)
Myra: Oh no love. What's wrong?
M: there is this guy at school, He is ashamed to be with me
Myra: well if he is ashamed of you then he is not worth all these tears is he?
M; I like him mum.
Myra: Oh come 'ere

Michaela shortly after, goes upstairs, JP and Carmel enter.
Myra: I'd love to know who is giving our Michaela the run around.
JP: Why mum?
Myra: When I get my hands on him..
Carmel: Oh mum.
Myra: He lets my little girl cry and you think I am going to let him get away with it!
JP: mum
Myra: What?
JP: I think I may know who it is.
Myra:WHO?
JP: Sonny Valentine
Myra; That person who always makes fun of you?
JP: yep
Myra: What is he playing at? he makes fun of my boy, then makes my little girl cry. (Myra grabs her coat and bag and storms out of the house)
Carmel: I think we should go after her
JP: yeah I think we should.

i like this, its from all of the other fanfics. you should continue!

Myra, is looking for Sonny

Myra: Where is that little toadrag!
JP: mum, dont do this
Myra: Well its about time someone gives hima stern talking to. his brother isn't going to do it, even though he is a copper he is soft.
Carmel: there he is mum, what you going to do
Myra; Nothing violent.. honestly.

They come across Sonny

Sonnys' mate; oh look who it is, its the tarts mother.
Myra: (pointing finger at themate) Don't you EVER call my little girl that!, and as for you Sonny, you made my girl cry over you.
(Mates laughing)
Why are you ashamed of her?
S: I was ashamed because well because of what everyone was saying about her.
Myra: you shouldn't care what everyone else thinks (Slaps Sonny)
Carmel and JP: MUM!
Mate laughter in the background

Myra JP Carmel go.

Sonnys' Mate: Whatcha doing with the likes of her anyway
S: I like her alright
(Sonnys' mates look in disbelief)
Sonnys' mate: Why? she is such an ugly cow!
S: No she aint, she is nice and attractive
Sonnys' mate; you got the beer goggles on mate!
S: No i havent
Sonny runs to the drive n buy and get Michaela flowers

Sonny knocks on the Mcqueen door.

Myra: Oh it's you! go away!
S: No i want to see michaela
Myra looks up the stiars where michaela is there shaking her head
Myra: well she doesn't want to see you
S: well she has to see me sometime, she has to see me at school, she has to see me when is over with Sasha, it's best to get this over and done with now (shows Myra the flowers)
Myra; Michaela get down 'ere now
M: what you want Sonny?
S: for the millionth time I am sorry. I know I hurt you, but I wont do it again.
M: words are cheap Sonny, actions speak louder than words, once you show me what your made off I'll forgive you.
S: what do you mean?
M: I think you know. (shuts door on his face)

Loving it!

I'll write some more tomorrow.

Well there was nothing on TV tonight (damn sundays) so i decided to write more tonight.

Monday Morning: at the school, Michaela enters

S: hi Michaela (takes her hand)
M; whatcha doing?
S: you'll find out

They walk until they are in the middle of a crowd of people (including sonnys' mates)

S: come 'ere
(grabs Michaela and kisses her)
M; what was that for
S: to prove that I am not ashamed of you.
Sonnys' mate; okay you've proved your point now lets hang out
S: no, i am spending some time with my girl today
M; your girl?
S: if you want me to be?
M; yeah okay.
they kiss again.

end.

kl! continue it ! ...please lol

oh I love this couple lol. Please please carry on x

in football practice.

S: so John Paul, queer boy
JP: what?
S: I thought you weren't playing on this team anymore.
JP: Well I am, you'll just have to grin and bear it.
S: Well i guess I just have to

During the fottball match, Sonny knocks JP down and he sustains a nasty blow to the head. JP taken to hospital.

Michaela hears about JPs' accident and rushes home.

M; mum, something happened to JP.
Myra: what?
M: he is in hospital.
Myra: Oh Lord! lets go.

In the car.

Myra; Who did this, do you know
M: no mum

In the hospital:
Myra: Oh my boy
JP: Sonny did this
Myra; that's why you didn't want to tell me Michaela, your lover boy did this.
M: by accident
JP: oh no he didnt, he is still the same with me even though you are with him.
M: no he told me it was accidental
JP: no the trip was accidental the kick in the head was on purpose.
M: you're lying
JP: would I lie about something like this?
Michaela runs out of the hospital and cries
M: Sonny is never going to change

carry on its gd neva seen anyone do a michaela and sonny one b4 urs is the best

This is really good. By the way i have a sony and micheala too lmaoo x
but carry on!