omg haven't read this in a couple of days and you've done so much of it! It's a brilliant story, please keep it going x

back at the valentine house.

S: CALVIN, CALVIN!
Sash: He isnt in Sonny whats up?
S: (panting) it's Michaela
Sash: what about Michaela
S: she... taken
Sash; does her family know?
S: No
Sash: ill call Calvin, you go and tell her mum
S: ok

He runs to mcqueen house
Myra: Sonny. what you doing 'ere
S: its michaela
Myra: she isnt in
S: no we were in the park, she was taken
Myra oh my god by who?
S: no idea.
Jacqui enters.
J: whats going on
Myra: Michaela been taken
J: what.. by who?
Myra: we dont know
J; lets find out who then
Myra: what did the vehicle look like
S: big black van
J: that narrows it down
S: license plate number hu765 cant remember the last digits
J: oh no I think I know
Myra: who?
J: Davey
Myra: that skallywagg
S: whos davey
J: someone who put me in prison . come on i know where he is, and his van


Back at the van
M: whos driving by the way?
JO: my brother, your sister knows him a whole lot
M: which one i have lke 5
JO: the one that was in prison what was her name bro?
D: Jacqui
M: how do you know her?
D: she screwed me over with some dosh, i had to put her in prison
M: weird, shes never mentioned you to me
D: Im the talk of the family I thought. ah we are here.
M: where?
JO: where we live

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M: why bring me here?
D: well Jacqui knows where I am, so when she grabs the fact that you're gone she'll come for me
M: what do you want from our Jacqui?
D: My money
M: she paid you off though
D: Oh she didnt love

Jacqui and Sonny behind the van
J: is this the van you saw?
S: oh yeah it is
J: they re inside that building
S: lets go then
J: Not so hasty I know what Davey wants
S: so this davey snatched Michaela to get to you
J: maybe.
They see johnny step out
johnny goes to the van Sonny comes up behind him and slams his back on the van
S: where is she?
Jo: just in there
J: who are you
Jo: you mean you don't remember me
J: No
Jo: I'm Daveys' younger brother, Johnny
J: Sonny let go of him
sonny lets go
J: what you doing with Michaela
Jo: getting her back for her little joke that she pulled on me
J: that was on you, how did your brother get involved
Jo: when me and Sarah were planning to get you and michaela back, Davey wanted part of it, so he can get to Jacqui.
J: I'm going in there
S; lets go in there with ya
J: no its best if I go in there alone
Jacqui goes in 5 minutes later they both hear a gun shot.

keep goin it great

Brill
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They rush in
everyones on the floor
somone coughs
S: Michaela
M: Sonny, what happened
S: dont worry about it now you're alright
Johnny goes over to Davey
J: Davey wake up! wake up!
D yeah I am awake
Jacqui still in the floor
M: oh my god is she..
Ja: (coughs) take more then a push to stop me Davey you should know that
D: (looks at his shoulder) you cow (he is bleeding he got shot)
Ja: plenty more where that came from.
D: (pulls Jacqui by the hair) (shoves her head toward the wall) I want the money by next...
Davey falls to the floor
Ja: what happened there?
Johnnys holding the gun
M: Johnny why?
J: I never knew he could be so violent before.
Ja: It's alright love
J: But I shot him
Ja: It's over now
J; No it's not (holds gun to his head)
JA,M, S: oh my god dont do it!
J: I dont want to any more damage, this is better then prison
Ja; it was self defense
J: but they would ask why you two had to come and I have to say because I kidnapped Michaela
Ja: It doesn't need to be like that.
Jacqui feels pain on her right leg, she's been shot. Davey with the last ounce of life he has left shot Jacqui, smirked then died.
Ja; Please dont Johnny
Another gun shot goes off.
M: Johnny!
Johnny lies motionless on the floor.
S: Jacqui do you need help
Ja: no, no I'll be alright, loook on the bright side, I dont need the debt anymore
S: yeah two people are dead
Ja: That's the bad side
M: they'll bring it back on us wont they
Ja: Call the police they can do tests and find out that it wasn't us that did it as those guns were theirs,
M: you're fingerprints were on one of them though
Ja: I'll just have to tell them that one was the shot on the shoulder, that's the truth. Johnny delivered the fatal blow.
S; she has a point
Sonny calls police.

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Police arrive.

C: Sonny!
S: you cant be involved in this case you're personally involved
C: I know but I heard you're voice ion the other end I had to check if you were alright
S:Yeah, me n michaela are alright. its jacqui shes been shot in the leg she has lost some blood.
C: I can see that the paramedics are there.
S: there's 2 dead bodies in there
C: Sonny what happened
Sonny tells him what happened
Okay lets take you and Michaela somewhere to get checked out my partner has to take you down to the station afteward is that ok/
M; yeh
S: yeah bruv

at the hospital
policeman interviews Michaela, then Sonny, then Jacqui, there stories are exact, but the cop is not beleiving it

2 weeks later, Jacquis still at hospital
POliceman enter:
J: hi there
P: Ballistics came back at the story you and the kids came up with is true.
J: told ya so
P: I just wanted to make sure you're alright. (touches her arm)
J: well I'm alright. now get your hand off me I am a married woman
P: oh right to the albanian bloke
J: his name is Aleksander
P: you did rush quickly didn't ya though, I know for a fact that story that you met in prison was not true
J: why's that
P: I was a warden, I never recognised him before and I know everybody
J: you didn;t know him then
P: you didnt before they David introduced you two.
J ( gulps): Ok how do you know that
P: Paperwork, there's letters at the David and Jonathons house
J: so what you going to do about it?
P: I'm willing to let it slip, but you gotta d something for me
J: whats that then
P: I think you know
J: What makes you think Ill do itt
P: well you dont want t go back inta prison do ya?
J: No.
P: when you're out of this bed then Ill be looking forward to hearing your call.
J: Oh yeah okay.

This isnt the first time this copper has done this. when policeman leaves the tape recorder Jacqui left on (accidently, this was like a memo tape) recording she turns it off and thinks ill takethis to Calvin. but then she thinks she cant she'll get sent down anyway because theres evidence against her.

***next post WILL be about Sonny and Michaela*** if anyone want me to carry this dodgy copper story on I will be glad to but il repost it and start it on another thread)

ooooooooooh goody more sonny n michaela keep it goin plzzz

I dont know how to cary it on lool

errrrmmm jus use ur imagination loool