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Part 1 John Paul x

John Paul Stared Into The Eyes Of His Secret Lover. He Was Such A Gorgeous Boy, Short Brown Hair And The Most Beautiful Tanned Skin, And His Eyes, They Were Eyes That As Soon As You Looked Into Them, And That's Deep Into Them, You Could See His Whole Soul. John Paul Was Blessed With A Curse.

He Loved Craig. And He Knew Craig Loved Him Too. He'd Only Said It Once, But He Only Had To. The Sincerity And Desperation In His Voice Had Made John Paul Realise That Craig Did Feel For John Paul The Way He Felt For Craig.

Even Though Craig Was Still With Sarah He Knew Craigs True Feelings, And They Were For Him. He Just Hoped, Prayed, That One Day Soon Craig Would Realise That Too. Living A Lie Was Killing John Paul, And Knowing That He Was Going To Hurt Sarah Was Just As Bad. But Everytime He Decided To Finish It For Good With Craig He'd Just Think Of Those Words, Those Three Simple Words That Carried So Much Meaning. He Knew He COuld Never Break His Heart The Way Craig Had Done To Him So Many Times.

really great start but one bit of advice don't use capital letters at the beginning of every word

good start more soon!!

Sorry, I normally use it when i write on sites etc. I'll stop now

Part 2 Craig x

As he lay in John Paul's arms pretending to sleep Craig could feel his eyes on him. He liked John Paul, he liked him alot. But he still wasn't sure if he was 'in love' with him. so many times he thought he was, so many times he had promised himself that he would tell Sarah, but then again so many times he'd promised himself that he'd finish it with John Paul. But everytime he touched his soft skin, everytime their lips met, he fell under John Paul's spell. John Paul was amazing, really amazing. Craig stopped pretending to sleep and drifted off into a sweet slumber breathing the scent of his lover.

Craig opened his eyes and yawned,

"Morning Sleepy," John Paul grinned at him.

"W-What? What time is it?!" Asked Craig, bewildered. Morning? Morning? He hadn't meant to stay that long!

Craig jumped to his feet and started grabbing his clothes but he only managed to get his trousers on before John Paul stopped him by clasping his arm.

"What are you doing?" He enquired
"What does it look like I'm doing!" Craig snapped back shaking off Jp's grip.
"It looks like you're leaving" replied John Paul getting more and more confused.
"Well maybe that's what I'm doing, how could you leave me all night! What am i suppose to say to my mum, you know she'll ask me where I've been. And what about you're sisters, they're all downstairs aren't they? What are they going to think when i stumble down your stairs after being in your bedroom all night?"
"Well I'm sorry Craig but i fell asleep aswell! I didn't realise i had to stay awake all night to tell you when the coast was clear!" John Paul shouted back.
"Stop twisting my words you know what i meant! No one can find out about us yet John Paul!"
"Yet? Yet? Don't you mean ever Craig!? Face it I'm just your toy for when you're bored with Sarah!"

"John Paul! John Paul! Can I borrow your.." Mickaela's voice trailed off

"John Paul! What's all that yelling?!" Shouted Myra.

Suddenly John Paul's bedroom door swung open and Myra and Mickaela stood there staring at the two half dressed boys. Everyone froze.

oh very good love your writing style its cool

Part 3 John Paul x

Myra's eyes ran from John Paul's face to Craig's, then to their bodies which weren't covered from the waist up in either case. Nobody spoke, Nobody dared. Except Mickaela of course.

"Egh! What you doing? Craig! I thought you were with Amy's Sarah?!"

Still, nobody said anything. Myra looked at Craig, Craig looked at John Paul and John Paul looked at Myra.

"Hello? Is anyone paying any attention to me?! Our John Paul's been banging Craig Dean with out any of us noticing!"

"Mickaela!" Snapped Myra, shooting her an evil glare. She stared at John Paul, her eyes pleading him to deny what Mickaela was accusing him of.

"What? That's Perposterous, I fell asleep on John Paul's bed and he slept on the floor."

Myra looked at the boys suspiciously.

"Isn't that right Jp?" Craig quickly added, looking at his lover.

John Paul hesitated, maybe this wasn't all bad? Maybe the would finally be the day that the secrets and lies were over? Then he saw the panic striken look on Craig's face. He was petrified, John Paul couldn't do that to him. If he wasn't ready then John Paul COuldn't Push that.
"Yeah, of course. You really think I'd do him?" John Paul laughed awkwardly.

Myra Paused. "Well that's alright then! Come on then lads let's have some breakfast!"

They started to file out of the room towards the kitrchen. Suddenly Mickaela stopped, she spread her arms across the door.

"Don't think I don't know what you two were up to, I'm not as naive as Mum." She sneered at them.

Ohhh no what's Michaela gonna do.Bril continue soon xxx

Part 4 Craig x

Craig struck John Paul a panicked look. John Paul noted this but just laughed and pushed his little sister out of the way.

"Like i said Mickaela. Nothing's going on."

John Paul Strode down the stairs with a calm, innocent expression on his face. He really is good at this, Craig thought to himslef, almost I'm fooled, I wonder how many times he's lied to me, for all I know he's cheating on me! Craig gave himself a mental kick, what was he thinking? John Paul was head over heals in love with Craig, he would never hurt him. Even if Craig didn't feel the same.

Mickaela reluctently followed down the staris, standing on Craig's heals at every possible opportunity. She knew something was up, and she was going to get to the bottom of it.

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"Oi! Ow! Foul!" Yelled Craig as John Paul tackled him a touch too roughly.
"Aww, sorry" replied John Paul in a sarcastic tone, "Do you want John Paul to kiss it better?"
He gave Craig a smirk, Craig returned the smile
"Shut up, you big puff!"
John Paul gave a mock shocked look
"You B*tch!" He replied and threw the football at Craig's chest.
"Hey that soo would not be allowed on the pitch."
"Yeah and neither would this," John Paul grabbed Craig and planted a soft passonate kiss on Craig. Caught up in the moment Craig kissed him back, then realising where they were, pushed him off.
"What the hell do you think you're doing?" he hissed at his friend.

great chapter

more soon please

brilliant story keep it coming

Thought I'd make this one a bit longer

Part 5 John Paul x

"What does it look like I'm doing?" John Paul grinned into Craigs eyes, still with a tight grip on Craig's shirt.

Craig grabbed his arm and shoved him off.

"Seriously John Paul, stop it. What if Sarah had walked by just now?"

Would that have been so bad? John Paul thought to himself, finally the lying and sneaking and cheating would be over and finished with.

"I'm sorry," He lied. "I just find it so hard to keep my hands off you" he said sliding his hand up Craig's back, only to be shoved off again.

"John Paul stop it!" Craig yelled at him, but John Paul could see his smile was starting to crack through. He thought it wouldn't take much to have Craig in fits of giggles on the floor, but he thought it would be funnier to string this out.

"Okay," He sniffed, then turned around and started to walk away, "If that's how you want it, I'm going home."

"Jp, wait." Craig yelled after him and put his hand on his friends shoulder. He started to swing his friend around. "Look I'm sorr-" But then he saw the grin on John Paul's face and realised it had all just been a wind-up. He smiled half hearted and pretending to not look amused but John Paul only had to lift his eyebrow to make Craig snigger, then lift the other one to make him laugh out loud.

"Haha! Fooled You!" laughed John Paul, jabbing Craig in the stomach.

"You totally did not!" snapped back Craig, but it was too late the boys starting laughing, quietly at first, but the sound of the other one giggling made the boys laugh even more.

Suddenly John Paul's facxe grew serious and he stopped laughing, Craig didn't realise at first and carried on laughing, then stopped as suddenly as John Paul had, embarressed that he had laughed for too long.

"What's up?" Enquired his lover.

"Craig," John Paul paused, not sure weather to go on or not, he knew he may not like the answer to what he was about to ask, "Craig, I'm bored."

"Yeah, me too actually do you want to get something to eat at Il Gnosh?"

"No Craig, that's not what I meant. Look just let me finish alright? I Mean, I'm bored with this. With us. Having to sneak around whenever I want to be with you, whenever i want to shower you with my affection."

"W-What.. What are you trying to say? Are you finishing with me John Paul?"

"No! God No! What I'm trying to ask is, when are you going to tell Sarah?"

"Jp.."

"Craig. Please" John Paul's eyes pleaded with Craig's soul. He Looked so heart broken. Craig knew he couldn't keep stringing both Sarah and John Paul along. He looked over his shoulder to make sure there was no one there then took John Paul's hand in his and stroked it.

"John Paul," He began, then gulped, "John Paul, I Love You." And John Paul could tell he bloody well meant it aswell.

ah what a lovely part, wonderfully wrote again i adored it

Next bit coming up now, wrote a massive bit last night but it was past midnight so lost it all when i tryed to send it

Craig paced the floor of his bedrooom. His predicament was a hard one, and now that he had declared his (not existent) love for John Paul it was even harder. Maybe he did love John Paul, he thought he was in love with Sarah, but latley whenever he was with her he just wanted to be with John Paul. Yeah, he thought to himself, maybe he did love John Paul?

He impatently sat on his bed, waiting for John Paul to knock on the door. he drummed his fingers on his knees while he waited. It was Mickaela's birthday today and so was having a party, so Craig had promised to let John Paul come around so he could get awy from all the fifteen and sixteen year olds. He was nervous. He was never nervous when John Paul came round, he had spent far too long getting ready. Hour's infact. He'd tidied his bedroom, and now was just sitting there, knowing that if he moved he would mess something up. So he sat, and sat. And sat.

Finally the knock came on his door and Craig leapt to his feet, he swung the door open and smiled a wide cheeky grin, a grin which soon faded.

"Hiya love," Frankie Paused and kiss her youngest son on the cheek. "Ooh, bit tidy in there," she continued leaning around Craig to peer into his room. "Is Sarah coming round or something?"

"No, just John Paul" he replied shortly.

"Oh," Frankie hadn't liked Craig since he tried to 'turn' her son back in February. If only she could see her precious son now! "Right, well I'll leave you to it then." she muttered with a slight smile as she bustled off.

What did that mean? Craig thought as he closed the bedroom door and sat back on the bed, 'I'll leave you to it' he repeated in his head. Leave him to what? Did his mother know what him and John Paul were up to? No she couldn't of, oh what a mess, first Mickaela and Myra almost caught them and now his mum was suggesting she knew something aswell! Craig hated this, as much as John Paul thought that he loved it, all the sneaking around he had to do. But he loved Sarah. Get a grip Dean! He thought to himself, this isn't fair on either of them! He closed his eyes as he realised what ge had to do, it wasn't going to be easy as John Paul has a certain charm to him. But Craig had to do it.

He had to finish with John Paul.

Just as he came to this conclusion as if queued a knock came on the door. Craig got to his feet, more reluctantly this time, his feet drag along the floor and he felt utterly miserable. He opened the door and John Paul's stunning looks beamed into his room, like a light awakening him from the dark.

"Hi," John Paul almost whispered.

D*mn, thought Craig, this is going to be so hard.

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"Oh," Frankie hadn't liked Craig since he tried to 'turn' her son back in February. If only she could see her precious son now! "Right, well I'll leave you to it then." she muttered with a slight smile as she bustled off.

Oops, obviously didn't proof read this one! This bit is meant to say, Frankie hadn't liked John Paul since he'd tried to 'turn' her son...

Oh poor Craig continue soon x

Part 7 John Paul x

As Craig opened the door John Paul's face lit up, wow, he looked gorgeous. He'd obviously made an effort for him. John Paul was touched.

"Hi," he managed to muster in the sexiest voice he could, he thought it just sounded quiet but it obviously did the job for Craig. He stood there for a few seconds, a few seconds too long, opening his mouth to say something but then just closing it straight after. The two boys stood there awkwardly for what seemed like an eternity.

"Craig?" John Paul asked, back to his normal voice now.
This seemed to knock Craig out of his day dream and back to reality,

"Oh! Sorry, I.. Um.. sorry." Said Craig rubbing the back of his head, a sure fire way to tell that Craig was embarresed. "Sorry," He said again then stepped out of the way as an indication for John Paul to enter. John Paul picked up on this and stepped in to the room.

"Woah," he stated in amazment, looking around Craig's spotless room, "Ha! I never knew you had a carpet!" he joked.

"Oi!" exclaimed Craig, looking offened. John Paul thought again how Craig's appearance was matching to his room. This made John Paul laugh inwardly, Craig was probably the messiest person he knew and here he was, making an effort for John Paul. An effort he never made for Sarah. Yeah, thought John Paul, this is the real thing.