justin;your what

hannah;im sorry he asked me i couldnt say no

justin stands up

justin;you know that last day we spoke at my house i asked you if you loved me and you said of course i do did you mean it

hannah;i did

justin;you did so you dont now

hannah;im with danny now

justin;that isnt what i asked

hannah stares at the floor

justin;you know what i know you dont so dont answer

he walks away from hannah.he starts heading back to tonys when hannah begins to follow him

hannah;justin wait

justin;for what just leave me alone and run back to your fiance

hannah;I DO LOVE YOU

justin stops it begins pouring with rain

hannah;just like the first time we kissed properly

justin;[he smiles]its fate

hannah walks up to him and kisses him he picks her up and carries her to tonys he puts her on the bed

justin;are you ready

hannah;yeah

justin;i mean with me

hannah;i dont want anyone else

she slowly slips his top off while he does the same.he begins kissing her neck.At tht moment in time hannah didnt even think about danny once

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in the morning hannah woke up to find herself beside justin.she slowly crept out of the bed puttin her clothes back on

justin;were are you going

hannah;why didnt you tell me you were awake

justin;i just woke up come back to bed

hannah;no last night shouldnt have happened

justin;wh whh what

hannah;im with danny and im happy

justin;pleasee tell me this is a joke

hannah;im sorry

justin;hannah pleasee dont do this danny doesnt love you like i do

hannah;yes he does

justin;but last night you told me you loved me

hannah;i do but

justin;but what

hannah;last night was a mistake

justin;you dont mean that

hannah;im sorry justin but this is the right thing to do

justin gets out of the bed

justin;you dont want him

hannah;i do im sorry justin

hannah walks out of the house

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hannah walks into her room and sees danny sitting there

danny;hannah were you been

hannah;emm sorry i stayed at sarahs

danny;why

hannah;were not married yet i dont need to tell you everything

danny;tell me the truth hannah were have you been

hannah;at sarahs i told you

danny;your lying i seen you come out of justins this morning

hannah;i can explain

danny;go ahead explain pleasee tell me its not what im thinking

hannah;i...im so sorry danny

danny;omg

hannah;i dont know what i was thinking

danny;YES YOU DID!

danny slaps her

danny;hannah im so sorry i never ment that

hannah;get away from me

she runs out the house and danny chases her into the village when hannah bumps into justin

justin;hannah wats happened to your face

danny;get away from her

justin;did you do this

danny;i said get away from her

by this time there was a crowd forming

justin pushes danny

hannah;justin leave it

justin;what do you mean leave it he hit you

nancy and sarah walked over to hannah

nancy;is this true hannah

danny;only coz she slept with him

now the whole mcqueen clan was egging it on

justin;how do you no

danny;doesnt matter i thought you were my mate

justin;i thought you were my mate asking her to marry you when you new how i felt

danny punched justin justin went to lunge at him but katy pulled him back

katy;justin just leave it come on

danny;yeah on you go

justin;shut it

justin was standing infront of danny, they didnt see the car come around the corner when danny pushed justin

BANG

justin go hit by the car

hannah;OMG JUSTIN

OMG

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WOW! I've just read it all the way through! It's great! Cant wait to see what happenns.

as the ambulance arrived hannah was leaning over justin but by this time danny had ran

paramedic;wat happened

carmel;got run over

paramedic;miss can you let us in

hannah;will he be ok

paramedic;im dont know yet looks bleak though

hannah;do everything you can pleasee

paramedic;miss would you like to come in the ambulance

hannah;no emm katy you should go

katy;you sure

hannah;yeah he would want to

katy;thanks

as the ambulance drove away hannah turned to carmel

hannah;carmel would you give me a lift to the hospital

carmel;sure babe

nancy;i want to come to

sarah;yeah me to you need support

hannah;its not me who needs support she snapped

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hannah rushed in the hospital and ran right into katy

hannah;katy whats happened

katy;its not good hannah

katy breaks down in hannahs arms

hannah;katy pleasee tell me wats happened

katy;they had to bring him back twice

hannah;omg

katy;they dont think he will make it

hannah starts to cry

hannah;this cant be happening

hannah grabs a doctor over

hannah;when can we se justin burton

doctor;not just now hes in surgerybut im afraid you might not get to say bye

just as the doctor was saying this carmel nancy and sarah walked in

carmel;omg

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everyone was sitting talking

nancy;what will happen to charlie

hannah;what do you meanm

nancy;if he dies

hannah;dont think like that

sarah;hannah its true you heard wat the doctor said

katy;he wont die ok

hannah;look lets change the subject

carmel;danny

nancy;what about him

carmel;he psuhed him we need to tell the police

nancy;oh yeah your right

hannah;no

nancy;why not

hannah;he will go to jail

katy;that is what he deserves he pushed justin

hannah;no its not his fault

nancy;omg are you taking his side

hannah;i lo..ove him

nancy;stop kidding yourself you know you dont

hannah;why wouldnt i love him

nancy;the little issue of justin

katy;LOOK STOP IT WE ARE MENT TO BE HERE FOR SUPPORT

doctor;would you like to come and see justin its not looking good

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Poor Justin, isn't that twice he's been in now? Or am i mixing fics?

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