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This is really good. Big Grin
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aww poor Leah!


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this is absolutly fantabulous!!!!


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Josh: Hey, I've come up with some lyrics, d'you wanna hear?

Fletch: Yeah, shoot.

Josh cleared his throat, then stood up, with the same air of importance of someone declaring World Peace.

Josh: Your skin is all I want to touch
Your eyes, they shimmer like the sun
And though I may not know too much
I know that you're the one.

Fletch fell silent. It couldn't've been more obvious who the lyrics were about, and he couldn't help but feel guilty. He'd betrayed his best friend, with the girl he was in love with.

Josh: So... what d'you think? Fletch?

Fletch: They're really... reallly... good.

Josh: Really? You think so?

Fletch smiled assuringly.

Fletch: Yeah. Just wish I'd've come up with them first!

Josh: Why, you got your eye on someone?

Fletch hesitated.

Fletch: You could say that, yeah.

Josh: So c'mon then, who's the unlucky lady?

Fletch: Oh, no-one you know.


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wow can you write some more right now please lol this is one of my favourite fics on the board


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Wow, I can't wait to read more!
 
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just read all of this and it is amazing! really well written, funny and emotional at the same time. fantastic! please continue soon Big Grin xxx


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wow thanks so much for the comments guys Smile
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Amy was awoken the next morning by the sound of the door opening beside her.

Doctor: Miss Barnes, I'm pleased to inform you that your daughter is fine to go. But a word of advice - keep your eye on her over the next 24 hours - if she's having any reprocussions - dizzyness, headaches et cetera, bring her staight back here as soon as possible.

Amy: Ok, thank you.

She cautiously entered Leah's room, to see her already up, fully dressed and in the process of putting her coat on. As she put her arm through one of the sleeves she closed her eyes, then reeled backwards. Amy instinctively rushed over to her, and caught her before she fell.

Amy: It's ok, I've got you.

Leah turned her head to face her mother, then shrugged her off, still not saying a word.

Amy: C'mon, there's a taxi waiting outside.

She tried to take Leah's hand, but she shoved it inside her pocket before her Mum could touch it.


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heartbreaking but fantastic Big Grin


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this is ace
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Leah didn't speak to Amy at all during the taxi ride - and she didn't change her tune when they got back home either, despite Amy's efforts.

Amy: C'mon Leah, you can't keep this up forever.

Leah longed to say 'watch me' - but she was determined not to break her silence, and consequently let her Mum off the hook.

Amy sighed, then delved into her handbag as she heard her phone ring. Anger rushed through her as she saw the name on the screen - she had a right mind not to pick it up at all, but, in fairness to him, the situation was more Amy's fault than his.

Amy: What is it?

Fletch: Amy, we need to talk. I'm just outside now. I thought I'd ring you before just dropping in unannounced.

Amy: Well, I suppose it was polite of you to let me know, at least now I'll know who I'm locking out.

Fletch: Oh c'mon Amy, just five minutes, please.

Amy: Alright. But after 5 minutes, you're out.

Sure enough, barely a minute later, the doorbell rang.

Fletch wiped his clammy hands on his jeans and breathed out slowly as he tried to prepare himself for what he was about to do. He didn't want to do it - in fact, he couldn't think of anything he wanted less, but with the situation being how it was, he didn't feel he had any other choice in the matter.

His heart skipped a beat as she opened the door. He smiled nervously.

Fletch: Can I... come in?

Amy: If you must.

Amy took a quick look upstairs to check if Leah's bedroom door was closed, and after seeing that it was, returned backstairs to Fletch.

Amy: What is it?

Fletch: It's about us.

Amy: Wait, now just listen to me, there is no us. There never was and there never will be. Because of us, as you put it, my daughter could've lost her life. She's the only important thing in my life, and I'm not risking her for the likes of you.

Fletch: What? What happened to her?

Amy: She got hurt. I'm not going into details - but basically I wasn't here for her, and I let her down. When we were... y'know... she was in pain. I don't think I'll ever be able to forgive myself for that. I'll feel guilty enough as it is, and every time I think about you, even now just looking at you, it makes me feel so guilty I could throw up. So please, just leave me alone. Tell Josh I quit the band. This isn't working.

Tears stung Fletch's eyes, but he fought them back. She was the last person he wanted to see him cry.

Fletch: Fine. I'll go then.

Amy: Fine.

She opened the door and stood to the side, to let him out.

Fletch: But just to let you know, I was-

He was about to tell her that he had actually come round to tell her it was over anyway, but he realised that saying that then would just make him sound bitter. So, he held his tongue, and left without another word.


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fantastic!!! more more more Big Grin


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there's one more angel in heaven

wot your sorry 4 sis i mean you never ask when you borrow my hairdryer so why shud my husband be any different

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Amy nearly jumped out of her skin as she turned around to see her daughter staring at her from the top of the stairs. She quickly wiped the tear from her eye and recomposed herself.

Amy: You scared the life out of me.

Leah: Sorry.

Amy: Leah...

Leah: What?

Amy: You know that I love you more than anything else in the world, right?

Leah shrugged.

Leah: Suppose.

Amy: Good. And I promise you, I'll never let you come to any harm ever again. I'm gonna be here for you, whenever you need me.

Leah: Mum?

Amy: What?

Leah: Y'know Fletch...

Amy felt her face redden.

Amy: Yes, I know Fletch...

Leah: Do you... like him?

Amy: He's alright, I suppose. Bit of a prat sometimes but all blokes are I guess-

Leah: No, I mean do you like like him?

Amy fell silent. Leah deserved better than lies, so she decided that maybe it was best not to say anything at all.

Amy: Hey, I was thinking, d'you fancy going out for lunch today?

Leah smiled, for the first time all day. Her mother's silence in response to her question said more than any words could. Knowing there was no longer any need to press the subject any further, Leah grabbed her coat and linked arms with Amy.

Leah: Ok! Where're we going?

Amy: Wherever you like. My treat.

Leah grinned, and so did Amy. Nothing made her feel happier than seeing her daughter smile.


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wowies. can you write more please i love this


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Fletch couldn't remember the last time he'd actually slept. It had been 6 days since Amy told him where to go - and he missed her like mad. No matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't get her out of his mind. He wondered if she ever thought about him. He hoped she did. But not too much. She deserved better.

He groaned as his phone rang. Josh. He still hadn't told him about Amy yet. And the next band rehearsal was in less than an hour. The idea of it had lost all it's appeal, without Amy.

Fletch: Hey.

Josh: Hey, still up for today?

Fletch: Um... yeah. Yeah, why not.

I have to tell him some time.

Josh: Wicked, I've got some great ideas, can't wait to play them through. See ya later, then.

Fletch: See ya.

He lay back down onto his bed, and prayed that Josh would take it well. He knew Josh liked Amy - a lot.

Fletch sighed.

Who am I kidding? He'll be gutted. And she's left it to me to tell him. And Josh'll want a reason.

But what reason could Fletch possibly give him? The reason Amy gave him didn't make a lot of sense, but he knew the main contributing factor. He hoped his guilt wouldn't give him away. If it did, he'd end up losing everyone close to him. He'd have nothing. And it would be nobody's fault but his.


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