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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww Rockit-! I love it Big Grin I've gotta have that in my SIG hehe.

Sorry theres been no updates, been busy at home and work, it's all been a bit mental!

I'm gonna try and keep writing now Big Grin
 
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Stupid me was still logged in as THE SCRIPTER on my laptop, all sorted now though ! Big Grin

like my SIG? Big Grin hehe.

Writing now Big Grin


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Sorry for the loooooooooooong wait, but here yee go Big Grin and something nice at the end, possibly leading to something else...*thinks hehe*

the little italic bit at the start is Craig having a daydream/nightmare...

Chapter 23 – Checking In...

“What do you mean our room's been cancelled? I double, and even triple checked this before I flew into the country! I want to see a manager now!!” Craig bellowed, he could not believe the hotel had 'accidentally' cancelled his booking, and thus had lost his booking fee...

...”Craig...Craig...you alright? You look like you've just seen a ghost!” John-Paul laughed as they walked in through the main entrance, John-Paul had noticed Craig stop, and looking as though he was day dreaming, or looking like he was a nightmare. Craig simply nodded and smiled, “Yeah mate, just thinking the worse as always”.

“Hello, and Welcome to Clumber Park Hotel, how may I help you gents today?” the clerk asked, as Craig and John-Paul approached the desk, the hotel looked pretty good, well established, “Hiya, erm...yeah, I...we've got a booking with you?” Craig asked, fiddling round in his back pack for the confirmation number, and his passport, eventually finding it, much to the amusement of John-Paul, “Ahhhh found it! Sorry, packed everything in a rush” Craig said quietly, trying not to blush, “Not to worry Mr Dean, I'll just input your details into our system so we can bring up your booking,” the clerk smiled, tapping away at her keyboard.

Craig was thinking about his 'daydream' he'd had not long before, and was dreading the clerk saying that his booking wasn't there, but it never came, the clerk simply smiled, and said the computers were running a bit slow that day, and there was nothing to worry about, “Ah, here we are, Mr Craig Dean, and a Mr John-Paul McQueen, is that correct?” the clerk asked politely, she was looking through the booking and saw that a double bed had been booked, and she was sure that two men were stood in front of her, “It seems that you've mistakenly booked a double room? Would you like me to change that for you? No charge, it's a simple mistake” the clerk asked looking at Craig, who seemed to be holding back his giggles.

John-Paul looked at Craig, he was trying to work out what he thinking, was he going to say that, “yeah we'll have two singles instead, I don't want to share a bed with him”, John-Paul was almost convinced at this, that was until Craig turned to him, and smiled one of those amazing smiles that assured him other wise.

“No thanks, we're together, and there was no mistake,” Craig said proudly, almost too proudly, and the clerk went a light shade of scarlet, “Oh dear, I'm so sorry Mr Dean, I didn't realise, I just assumed it was a mistake on the system,” the clerk said quickly, feeling quite embarrassed, “It's alright no harm done, can we have some freebies though?” John-Paul chipped in cheekily, complete with a grin to go with it, “Oh of course, since your staying with us for...seven nights?...” the clerk asked, Craig nodded, John-Paul looked on a bit surprised, he didn't realise Craig had booked basically a holiday for them! “We'll throw in a couple of free evening meals, and some drinks too, I'll just add that on so our restaurant knows not to charge” the clerk said once again, tapping on her keyboard, “OK, all sorted, I'll just get your card keys for you, one each do you?” Craig simply nodded again, and John-Paul could feel himself brimming with excitement about the week ahead. The clerk disappeared for a few moments, and then returned with two credit card sized 'things' in her hands, and handed one to each of the boys, “I'll just print off your invoice, would you like your luggage brought up?”, “Yeah that'd be great thanks, these things weigh a tonne though!” Craig laughed lightly, slightly nudging John-Paul in the side, and both having a little giggle, “Here you are Mr Dean, every thing is paid for, and that's for your records, I'll show you up to your room” The clerk walked from behind the desk, and indicated to the boys to follow her, they went up three flights of stairs, and through a few doors, Craig wasn't sure if he would be able to find his way back out if they went any further, just as he finished that thought, they came to an abrupt halt, and Craig went into the back of John-Paul, and nearly causing them both to fall into a heap.

“Steady mate, wouldn't want the clerk to get any ideas, we're not even in the room yet, and I've not 'grabbed' anything yet” John-Paul whispered slowly, they adjusted themselves, and the clerk shown the boys into their room, The Clumber Suite, “Here we are, you'll find your bathroom here, shower, bath, etcetera, your bed is there as you see, your TV is multi channel-ed and there are films available on demand should you feel the need for some romance,” the clerk said nicely, looking to the two boys, who had both gone beat red, yeah romance is what they needed. “Breakfast will be brought to you at 8am each morning, and then the restaurant is open from twelve noon right through to 11pm. And if there's anything you need, give us a ring on the phone on the side, pressing zero will bring you through to the reception desk.” John-Paul and Craig simply nodded once again, taking all this information in, and trying to remember it all. “Oh, and your pre-booked items will be brought up to you within the next two hours, have a nice stay gentleman” the clerk smiled, and the boys said their thanks, and she left, leaving the two lads...on their own, for the first time in nearly three months.

“I'm glad your here John-Paul, you don't believe how much this means to me,” Craig said moving closer to the boy in front of him, placing his hands on John-Paul's hips, and their eyes connecting once again, Craig could see the love, the hidden heartache, the emotions behind his friends eyes, and all he wanted to do was make him better, “Would you push me away?...” Craig asked, already knowing the answer, a tear escaping from his eyes, to which John-Paul responded to, taking his thumb, and gently wiping the tear way, “I'm not going to push you away Craig, I won't do that to you, or to me for that matter” John-Paul snaked his hands round Craig's waist, and placed a gentle kiss on his lips, out of all the kisses they'd shared in the past, this and the one they'd had briefly in the airport was the most intense, but also the most fragile.

Their kiss continued, never gaining more than they could cope with right now, gently they allowed their tongues to penetrate each others mouth, they both bathed in what they'd not had in such a long time, and wanted it to never end, Craig pulled away slowly, and looked a bit sheepish, “Would you deny me what we both want? What we both need? What we haven't been able to do with anyone else?” Craig asked quietly, his eyes burning with love and passion for John-Paul, “No, I won't deny you Craig, I need to feel again, I need to feel you near me” John-Paul whispered, still holding onto Craig, and without either realising it, John-Paul was directing them both to the bed, and he pulled Craig back with him, and they both gently fell onto the bed, Craig on top of John-Paul, slowly kissing, their passion building up, becoming more intense, each wanting more, “I've missed you, I love you so much, I can't be with out you” they both said to each other, at the same time, “John-Paul, love me, make love to me...” Craig asked, scared that he might have pushed things to far, but surprised when John-Paul gently kissed the tip of his nose and simply said “Yes”...


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Ah that was so sweet shaney, loved it hun!!!


I ♥ movies & getting caught in the rain, just hold back on the pina colada Big Grin
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awwwww thanks for readin hun Big Grin

next part will be up on the dark side soon, as its a bit raunchy hehe


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Scripter, brilliant as always, knew it wouldnt be long before the boys just couldnt resist each other.

on another note i must be the most stupidist person ever as i still havnt worked out how to get to the darkside,,, ah well




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ok, either im exceedingly hormonal, or depressed, or something.
but everything that is the slightest bit sweet or sad has been making me cry recently and i mean EVERYTHING
this included.

now, wheres my tissues? Crying


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that was FANTASTIC shaney Smile *scuttles off to read the raunchiness on the darkside* Big Grin


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what a fab way to get our boys back together! Like it very much!!!

And yes, I'm back...


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Scripter, brilliant as always, knew it wouldnt be long before the boys just couldnt resist each other.

on another note i must be the most stupidist person ever as i still havnt worked out how to get to the darkside,,, ah well



your not that stupid i haven't worked it out either but we don't need all the raunchy stuff to make this excellent but it would help


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il y a raunchiness?

cool!

err... google something rhyming with cantassy follypokes, you should be able to guess what that is. and free

you have to register first though. x


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awwwwwwwwwwwww watchin x factor while readin dis and da theme is love songs awwww good job


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rockit Thumbs Up

i've not watch xfactor this year, not sure how i managed to avoid it.

scripter can we have some more please




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Scripter, that was just perfect!! Brought a tear to my eye, it's so beautiful. I love this fic and cannot wait for more Big Grin


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loitering around with hope of more soon... yes?? maybe something ahum..on the dark side??!!!! adjusts halo and waits like a good girly Angel


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Hey Guys Smile

Sorry, been away for a few days, and was working all day Saturday, I'll update soon Big Grin

Glad your all liking this, and being...patient hehe.


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Hey Guys Smile

Sorry, been away for a few days, and was working all day Saturday, I'll update soon Big Grin

Glad your all liking this, and being...patient hehe.


clumber park hotel eh shaney hahaha!!!


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Hey Guys Smile

Sorry, been away for a few days, and was working all day Saturday, I'll update soon Big Grin

Glad your all liking this, and being...patient hehe.


clumber park hotel eh shaney hahaha!!!


was it in the name of research lol..




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Oh My you both are soooo rudey hehehehe.

It wasn't Clumber Park no lol, it was another well respected establishment hehehe.

OK OK OK it was in the name in research I ADMIT IT lol (giggles)


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you where so busted, hope you enjoyed yourself




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lol omg we got you naughy fella! hey gotta respect anyone who puts that much research in for his work!!! but hey if you happen to be researching with guy or james we do need to know cus thats just not fair..share thelurv!!lmao..oops sorry bad bad angel!!!xxx


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