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tears were streaming down his face, he was full of anger he could not control. looking around frantacly for something to attack, steven hay found amy.

ste had always abused amy. the apologies were countless and they both belived he could change. she stuck by him through the worst, taking beating after beating, yet still defendiing him.

he couldnt control it any more, he was about to erupt. rasing his fist he thrust in into her stomach.

this was a thing that amy was used to, she knew the pain would eventually stop.

but this time, the pain he had caused would never stop.



this is my first proper fic so any feed back id welcomeBig Grin shall i carry on?


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she collapsed in a heap, unable to move, sobbing uncontrolably. ste reacted as he always did, apologiesing over and over again.
the pain was emmense, she was unable to move even the slightest stift in position was agony.
the doorbell rang and as amy attempited to get up she was violently sick and collapsed agin.
"amy?" it was micheala. "amy i know your in i can here you, please open the door."

ste bagan to panic when he did not leave.

"amy get up NOW!" fustration and anger retuning to his voice. "NOW"

hearing ste shout, mieala resumed his extemsive door banging. waking from the noise leah began to cry. it was all to much for ste and he shook amys sholdrs to make her respond.

she was sick again.

the crying got loader and so did the door. suddenly, in riding panic, she forced open the door.
amy was sparwled on the floor surronded by vomit.
"amy?" no responce
"amy can you hear me?" miceala tenderly pushed her long hair from her face.
her eyes begain to close. and nosies becaome didtant as she drted in and ut of comcience.
"Oh my GOD!!, call and amblance, NOW, Amy?"

slowly her breathing slowd ntill it evenall spted and she was ot aware of what was going on.


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