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Heres the next one,
"Hardcore Kris and Jess" lool
April 18th
Its the next day, Jess wakes up and goes into the kitchen to see if Kris is there but he isnt..
Zoe- (sitting on sofa reading paper) hey Jess, if your looking for Kris, he's out,
Jess- how could i ever of guessed?? I wonder who he's with..(she picked up mobile and dials his number: CALLING KRIS)hello, where are you Kris? With Nathan?? Oh I thought so... Ok..Bye
Zoe- Jess, dont get worried, he said they were just friends, i mean Kris does care about you..
Jess- im going to have a shower (she says angrly)
(Kris enters as Jess leaves)
Kris- Hello Zoe,
Zoe- hey, how did it go with Nathan..?
Kris- he wants to get back with me.. but i told him, im with Jess.. well i sort of am..?
Zoe- you should go and talk to her..
kris walks in on Jess in the shower,
Jess- (shouts, above the sound of the shower) DONT BREAK OF THE LOCK AGAIN, YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENED LAST TIME...
Kris- ..and is that a bad thing,
(jess gets out of shower puts towel round her and walks out, in a mood, kris eventually follows her, to her room)
Kris- Jess?
Jess- I'm tring to get changed here, well if i had anything to wear,
Kris- you can borrow some of my cloths,
Jess- no thanks, im sure i'll be ok, (*sniff)
Kris- Whatever, you know where i am
(Kris exits)
Jess walks out about an hour later in a really beautiful outfit, Kris cant stop staring at her..
Kris- its amazing what you can do with a few pounds,
Jess- no its HORIBLE what you can do with a few pounds..
Kris- come on i'll take you out,
Jess- maybe later,i need to go down to the shops and buy some..food. Does anyone have any money?
Kris- heres a fiver (hands her a fiver)
Jess exits
Zoe- whats her problem.. shes so moody, oooh Kris what have you done??
Kris- its Nathan..
Zoe- well you know how it is for her and Nathan..she hates him..i mean he's not that nice to her..
Kris- well, if she cant handal us JUST being mates, she can stick it..
Will walks in..
Will- hello gwjus..
Zoe- hey (kisses him on cheek)
Will- Kris, wheres Jess?
Kris- what is it with everyone using our names in the same sentence, (Kris exits)
15 mins later Kris's phone starts ringing..
Kris enters to come and gets it..mean while Zoe and will are just sitting down talking...
Kris- (picks up phone) Hello Jessica, who's beaten you up?? Your by the SubBar..ok i'll be right over..(ends call)
Zoe- ??
Kris- Its Jessica, shes been beaten up-by Nathan..
They come to outside the subbar where Jessica lies on the floor with a black eye and a couple of brouses her dress, ripped..
Kris- Jess??
Jess- who is it?? Kris?? (she says with a punched lip)
Zoe- do you want me to call an ambalence?
Jess- i've had enough of hospitals, like when Kris...
Kris- ok, were genna take you back to the Flat..
Jess- What about Nathan?
Kris- what about him?
Jess- Help me up,
Zoe- dont owrry about Nathan for now..
Calvin comes along..
Calvin- hello, whats happened?
Kris- cant you see? Shes been beaten up!!
Calvin- who was it?
Jess- Nathan
Calvin- Nathan???
Jess- Kris's mate,
Calvin- ok, well i will come to your flat later to descus this with you..
3 hours later..
Jess is lying on sofa, Kris on the floor next to her, Zoe in kitchen with first aid..
Kris- are you sure you dont want me to call the doctor??
Jess- No, I dont have a doctor!
Zoe- You muct do..
Jess- Well not a privite one..
Kris- so... a doctor's a doctor...
Zoe- Kris leave it, she needs some rest...
Calvin Knocks on door,
Calvin- hello, i need to take some details..
Jess- ok
Calvin- O wont ask you now, but i think you need some sleep, so who was it that Beat you up??
Kris's phone starts ringing: NATHAN CALLING
Kris- not now, (hangs up)
Calvin Exits..
Jess- I'm genna go to bed,
Kris- i'll help you..
Its about 12pm and theres a knock at the door,
Nathan- WHACKING THE DOOR- JESS, IM GENNA KILL YOU, OPEN UP!!
to be continued....
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