hiya ppl - just feeling a bit bord n my little cusin came up with quite an interesting story - nuthing really happens with zoe much so ... tell me what you think n i'll report back to her
here goes:
zoe: (in living room making something to eat whe suddenly the door opens - zoe turns around and dropps her plate - she's in total shock!!!)
kid: alrite zoe - aint seen u in a while
*** different seen etc.***
Zoe: what are you doing here i mean...you're meant to be at home looking after mum - u cant be here
Kid: well isn't that nice. havnt seen you in 3 yrs and all of a sudden you act like u dont wanna no. but if you really wanna no why im back here - mum's hit the bottle agen - HARD. and i didnt really like being kiked around by her new boyfrend. so i ran away (putting down a bag) but thats alrite. i'll just cum and live with you. (smiling slightly menacing)
zoe: (panick strikn) you wont - u cant.
kid: i'myour sister
Zoe: half sister
kid: what , so that's it? just because we dont share the same dad n look nuthing alike were no longer related, is that it? blond hair and blue eyes compared to mixed race with dark hair you dont wanna no??? you no what it's fine. who'd wanna stay here with one of hitlers children
zoe:@ look - i didnt mean it lyk that. u no i love u
kid: do i??? u abandoned me when i was ten. u promised ud cum back 4 me but u never did. u watched as i got beaten and didnt do anything. so here i am 2 yrs on finally getting free chasing down my bigger sister in chester having 2 beg for the train fare down here only to be turned back. u cow. after all i done for you keeping all your dirty little secrets hidden for u 2 desert me? i wonder what would happen if one of them accidentally slipped... (pick up bag and turn around - begins to walk away)
zoe: wait! (kid freezes on the spot) you can stay (zoe says reluctantly as evilish smile creepes across kid's face)
all i got 4 now - more 2 come i promise. a lil bit of riters blk @ the mo. tell me wot u think
tnk u!!! this is the 1st time i've rote summing so i was a wee bit scared - thought id say my cus rote it in case it wasnt lyked - that way i coodnt get the blame lol
kid: y? u plan 2 hide me lyk a stowaway (laughing n being sarcastic)oooooooooh. plan 2 hide me untill i find sum where 2 live? im 12 u plank - yh. sum 1 wood relly rent me a flat rite - pay them wiv hugs n kisses shall i? (going 2 the door n opening it - it's will) and you are?
***new scene - sum 1 elses story etcetc.)***
will: so this is your sister
kid: (mockingly)'your sister' has a name
Will: *grunting what ever. and you just expect she can live here? this place is alredy full enugh
zoe: (looking @ kid hoo gives her a lk)so u expect me 2 just kik my sister out on the street
jess n kriss walk through the door
kriss: well well well whats this then? u n zoe had a baby alredy will? well this is a shock (laughing)
kid: says the man in boots
kriss: and that is a problem y?
kid: no problem. they're hot but if u dont mind saying im like him dus gross me out a little. only nown him a few mos n alredy he's cum off as a -
zoe: eh-hem. kriss, jess this is kid - my little sister
