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John Paul lent backwards in his chair rolled his head back and stared at the ceiling. The music from his ipod pounded in his ears. He closed his eyes and transported himself backwards in time. He was 15 sat in a classroom Craig sat to his left, listening to Mr smith, the ageing history teacher droning on. When ever he felt stressed he always went back, before anything happened with Craig, when his mates were just his mates, and the biggest worry was trying to pass a maths test. Since then so much had happened and many people had been hurt in the process, he didn’t even know who his friends were anymore. And now he could be ruining more peoples lives, including his mum, and his was weighing heavy on his shoulders. Completely caught up in his thought he didn’t realise that he was being watched by the figure stood in his doorway.
Kieran: John Paul, (getting louder) John Paul, John Paul
JP: (suddenly hearing a sound, he flinched and sat upright and looked towards the door) oh sorry I couldn’t hear you
K: you’ll go deaf listening to music that loud
JP: I’ll take my chances (there was an uncomfortable silence) so … did you come up for anything in particular
K: (he suddenly realised he had been staring at JP) oh er yeh, your mum says your tea’s ready
JP: oh, thanks (he stood up and walked towards the door)
K: (touched JP’s arm) you ok (concerned look on his face, when he walked in he could tell JP was almost crying)
JP: (snapping out of his daze) what, oh yeh (he kissed Kieran’s neck) you ok?
K: (he still shivered from JP’s touch) I’m a lot better now
JP: do you want to go for a drink later
K: yeh, sounds good to me
JP: ok, the Dog about 8
K: ok
JP: maybe we can have a conversation without an interruption every 2 seconds
K: Kris works there, so I doubt it
They both laughed softly
K: come on Myra will be wondering where I’ve got to
JP: (kissed him once more, before pushing his playfully through the door and they walked downstairs together)
 
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