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he opened his eyes from a sleep and found that he wasn't in the same bed as the person he loves. he had commited a huge sin the other week and didn't want anyone to find out about it. it wasn't that he was ashamed of him, it was that he had a major job, a major life but he felt too much. he was a priest in love with a student, whose family he had stopped with briefly. and he broke his vow of celibacy with him. if people found out, it would be frowned upon. he prayed to god to help resist his temptation, but they loved each other.

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this is really good
Nod i judt hope JP can have a happi ending !


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jp woke up and groaned. he needed to see kieron and fast. he had all of his feelings built up and needed to let them out. of course he didn't regret that one time with him - kieron was a member of the clergy, but jp got out of bed and dressed. he ran out the house. straight away, he saw kieron, and went up to him
jp: kieron! KIERON!
kieron: jp, what?
jp: can we talk?
kieron: what about?
jp: us.
they went back to jp's(no-one was home) and kieron went to kiss him. they kissed, and held on to each other.
kieron: funny talking.
jp: what are we doing?
kieron: what do you mean?
jp: acting awkward - doing it and then growing apart because you broke your vows.
kieron: jp, i love you. and you only. i was dumb enough to break my vows, but it was with you. and only that mattered.
kieron went to kiss him, but jp pulled away. jp took his hand and led him upstairs. his heart was pounding.


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hi this hollyoakschick best mate abi all i want to no is what happens next ! !! pleaz continue
really good !

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WaveLoving your work - more please!


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is there going to be anymore ?
as i have said it really good
pleaz put some more up ! Big Grin
 
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they laid next to each other, after their love making. kieron gazed at jp lovingly as jp slept there. kieron put a hand over jps chest, and fell asleep next to him...


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really good!
can't wait for more!
 
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really good!!!


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good story update soon please
 
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Ow..Really good, pleas write more Clapping


I come from the netherlands so sorry for my English...

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frankie was waiting outside the dog when jp walked over.
frankie: guess what?
jp: what, frankie?
frankie: craig's coming back tomorrow!
jp: great news.
frankie: isn't it just? we can throw a party for him. do you want to dj?
jp: yeah, sure.
jp walked away, now in a mess. he thought he had it all with kieron, but now craig was coming back, what was he to do?


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More soon!

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love it please update soon
 
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update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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plz continue


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