This is my first fic so if bad can someone tell me please??
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Max woke up with a sudden jolt. He had that cursed dream again. Why was he dreaming about her again? He was getting married in a fortnight and he was to busy thinking about last September again! He looked at the clock by his bed. Nine already! He got out of bed and found that Steph had gone with a note in place.

You didn’t seem to sleep well so I let you rest. I’ll cover your shift today. Steph XX

Thank God! Max was about to jump back into bed when he heard a knock at the door. Max drifted over to the door half-asleep and groaned as he opened the door. It was a man he had never met and was holding an envelope containing a letter. Max wondered why this had to be given firsthand.

The man looked at Max inquiringly, “Max Cunningham?”

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this is really gd. i like the way youve strated. Intruiging...More soon?

Great More Soon Please

I love it already

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Max was now ready and alert. “Who wants to know?”

The man simply smiled, “I‘ve been told to deliver this letter directly to Max Cunningham without answering any questions.” He held out the envelope.

Max took it without looking away from this mysterious man.

“She seemed to think you’d take it without much hassle” the man said more to himself than Max.

“She?” Max inquired, eyebrows raised.

“Everything will become clear in the letter” he said, “Oh and by the way she did say that I should tell you one thing, she’s looking forward to next fortnight.

This really bothered Max, “and what happens next fortnight?” trying to see how much this man knew.

“She told me what to say, not what it meant” he began to turn back.

Max just had one last thing to say, “Who are you?”

The man stopped, turned around and said, “Miles” then walked off.

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She is going to wreck the wedding!
Whoever she is
I think i have an idea

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The name Miles meant nothing to Max but he supposed the letter must be important if it had to be hand-delivered. Max wasn’t sure whether or not the letter would be good or bad. Maybe it was a special surprise from O.B. and Summer and they had paid that man to deliver the letter. I mean we already invited them two days ago and this could be a response. But why did he say “she”? Maybe it was Mandy? Max then reminded himself that he had no real enemies to speak of, none living anyway. This reminded him of his dream. He had been having them for three months now but the only person he could speak to this about was Warren who just told him that Max was blaming himself for her death and was perfectly natural even though Max had nothing to do with it. But once opening the letter it was like Max’s thoughts had created the letter in his head.

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Max,
I’m sure this letter will come as a surprise to you but I’m sure it will be a very happy surprise indeed! Your beautiful wife is alive and well and I am sure you’re very happy to hear this and will gladly accept me back and your delightful little brother Tom!

I imagine you’re probably disgusted by what I’ve just wrote and if so every letter I just wrote was worth it for your discomfort. I am alive and well and I am going to return to Hollyoaks in time for your wedding to you and your lovely fiancée Stephanie Dean. You’re probably wondering how I know about you and the Dean girl and I’m sure you’re expecting my source to be from my boyfriend Miles but no it’s not. I think there’s someone in Hollyoaks that you may be a bit to trustworthy towards. You should’ve been more like me. Never trust, never get let down.

See you soon,
Your wife,

Clare Cunningham

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“Max, why are you ripping up that envelope?”

Max had forgotten that Tom was still on his Easter holiday and Max quickly stuffed the remains in his pocket to dispose of later. “I’m just ripping up a letter from the dentist saying he has to postpone my next appointment for a filling. They hurt fillings better make sure you always clean your teeth then.

“Yes Max,” said Tom who was wondering why Max was ripping up something as silly as a letter from the dentist. Although Tom didn’t like going to the dentist so probably Max felt the same. Tom then went over to the TV to watch cartoons.

Meanwhile, in a small hotel on the outskirts of Chester, Clare Cunningham had finally perfected the plans to finally destroy the lives of pretty much half of Hollyoaks.

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A week had passed since the hateful letter from Clare had been received by Max and he had been creeping around the place sweating nervously, continually looking over his shoulder for this apparent spy or the evil hag herself. He wasn’t sure if he was happy or sad that Clare was alive. He thought to last September when they were in the lake and how he tried so desperately tried to save her. He was confused to say the least.

Meanwhile, Steph was worried; Max kept looking so worried, always sweating and looking over his shoulder. He always said he was ill but Steph wasn’t so sure. She was currently walking through the village on her way to the Dog to meet Debbie who had come over for a few weeks to be bridesmaid. By the time she had reached the Dog she was on the verge of tears.

Debbie ran towards her. “What’s up,” she said in a comforting tone.

“I think Max is cheating on me!”

Aw Poor Steph
Poor Max
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Debbie looked at Steph in a strange way. “Are you absolutely sure?”

“Well he keeps looking around as though expecting to be caught off guard and last night he kept saying ‘don’t let her come to the wedding’.” She said through tears.

Debbie stood up in a rage, “that dirty, little, cheating…”

Steph stood up, “but what should I do, I mean we’re getting married in a week!”

Debbie just had a mortifying though, “where’s Max now”.

This just made Steph worst. Debbie instantly regretted this and set her down in the Dog telling Darren to look after her and set off to look for Max.

All of this was heard by Warren in the Dog. Why on Earth was Max having an affair when he should be shaking with fear about the letter Clare had written?

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im still loving this!!! Debbie to the rescue....although he isnt having an affair!! haha

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Debbie stormed into MOBs to find Max on the mobile looking anxiously around as though Freddy Krueger was about to jump out the bushes.

Debbie quickly ducked down to eavesdrop on the conversation going on with a Max.

“Just try and make sure she doesn’t make it into the wedding. I don’t want her to mess it up.” He hung up and placed his mobile on the counter and went to take an order.

Debbie took the phone and ran to a place where Max would not see.

She found a text from O.B.: If your worried so much and if you love her so much then why are you getting married.

whats max gonna do??

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