I didnt like the ending of rhys and beth so i just wanted to rewrite the story lol.
Two Months Ago
Beth and Rhys just found out there brother and sister.
Beth: I cant believe Rhys is my brother i mean how can this happen, Why didnt dad tell me i had a brother.
Rhys: I found the girl of my dreams and she my sister how come i never knew that i had second sister i need to talk to here.
As Rhys walk near the door there was a knock.
Rhys: Beth!
Beth: Hi Rhys
Rhys: How you feeling?
Beth: Good, can we talked bout this brother and sister thing.
Rhys: Yeh, Umm i need to know did you know about us being sister and brother?
Beth: No i didnt even know i had a brother. I mean i got a sister but no brothers.
Rhys: O
Beth: I really care for you Rhys.
Rhys: I never care about anyone as much as i care for you, It hurt me when i look at you and knowing i can't have you, it wrong.
Beth: I know but ....
Rhys: There no but Beth!
Beth: Maybe i should leave.
Rhys: Maybe you should.
Beth: Fine but i was alway love you.
Rhys: I will alway love you but i cant do this.
Beth: Bye

Rhys: Bye Beth.
As Beth opened the door and walked out, Rhys couldnt believe she was leaving and went up to his room and jump on his bed crying and pick up a picture of them and just loooked at it with tears running down his eyes.
If this is crap i wont carry on.
Just tell me!