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I didnt like the ending of rhys and beth so i just wanted to rewrite the story lol.

Two Months Ago
Beth and Rhys just found out there brother and sister.

Beth: I cant believe Rhys is my brother i mean how can this happen, Why didnt dad tell me i had a brother.

Rhys: I found the girl of my dreams and she my sister how come i never knew that i had second sister i need to talk to here.

As Rhys walk near the door there was a knock.

Rhys: Beth!
Beth: Hi Rhys
Rhys: How you feeling?
Beth: Good, can we talked bout this brother and sister thing.
Rhys: Yeh, Umm i need to know did you know about us being sister and brother?
Beth: No i didnt even know i had a brother. I mean i got a sister but no brothers.
Rhys: O
Beth: I really care for you Rhys.
Rhys: I never care about anyone as much as i care for you, It hurt me when i look at you and knowing i can't have you, it wrong.
Beth: I know but ....
Rhys: There no but Beth!
Beth: Maybe i should leave.
Rhys: Maybe you should.
Beth: Fine but i was alway love you.
Rhys: I will alway love you but i cant do this.
Beth: Bye Crying
Rhys: Bye Beth.

As Beth opened the door and walked out, Rhys couldnt believe she was leaving and went up to his room and jump on his bed crying and pick up a picture of them and just loooked at it with tears running down his eyes.



If this is crap i wont carry on.

Just tell me!
 
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Ring Ring

Beth answer her phone

Rhys: Hi
Beth: Hi
Rhys: You going den?
Beth: I don't want to but i will.
Rhys: Don't go Beth, I need you.
Beth: Don't do this Rhys.
Rhys: Im looking at that pic.
Beth: What picture?
Rhys: The one of me and you.
Beth: You till got that?
Rhys: Of coures!
Beth: Omg if i stay, You would end up hateing me.
 
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Rhys: I could never hate you
Beth: U say that now, in 2 years time u wouldnt.
Rhys: I wouldnt, I LOVE YOU: I CUD NEVER HATE YOU.
Beth: Im Going bye Rhys.
Rhys: Beth don't
Beth: Bye Rhys

Beth Put the phone down
Rhys: Beth Beth Beth.

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Beth: Rhys what do you want?
Rhys: You, Rhys push beth against the wall and kiss her
 
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Beth: Omg Rhys
Rhys: Im sorry i dunno what come over me.
Beth: I dunno but i kindoff enjoy it.
Rhys: I need you A>S>A>P
Hug
Beth: I missed you, we need to get away
Rhys: I cant leave my family
Disappointed
Beth: Ok
Rhys: But for you i leave the world, We go 2morrow morning.
Valentine
Beth: Omg rhys i love you.

Next Morning
Rhys: You sure
Beth: Yeh
Rhys: Come on then.
Beth: Umm u sure u ok?
Rhys: Yeh why?
Beth: You sound offish with me
Rhys: Babe i aint i just want to live.
 
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Beth: Omg Rhys
Rhys: Im sorry i dunno what come over me.
Beth: I dunno but i kindoff enjoy it.
Rhys: I need you A>S>A>P
Hug
Beth: I missed you, we need to get away
Rhys: I cant leave my family
Disappointed
Beth: Ok
Rhys: But for you i leave the world, We go 2morrow morning.
Valentine
Beth: Omg rhys i love you.

Next Morning
Rhys: You sure
Beth: Yeh
Rhys: Come on then.
Beth: Umm u sure u ok?
Rhys: Yeh why?
Beth: You sound offish with me
Rhys: Babe i aint i just want to leave.
Beth: Me 2
 
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Beth: Omg Rhys
Rhys: Im sorry i dunno what come over me.
Beth: I dunno but i kindoff enjoy it.
Rhys: I need you A>S>A>P
Hug
Beth: I missed you, we need to get away
Rhys: I cant leave my family
Disappointed
Beth: Ok
Rhys: But for you i leave the world, We go 2morrow morning.
Valentine
Beth: Omg rhys i love you.

Next Morning
Rhys: You sure
Beth: Yeh
Rhys: Come on then.
Beth: Umm u sure u ok?
Rhys: Yeh why?
Beth: You sound offish with me
Rhys: Babe i aint i just want to leave.
 
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Rhys and Beth gets away to Spain.
Beth: Beth Beth Beth
Beth: Yeh what wrong?
Rhys: Nothing, we there?
Beth: Where?
Rhys: Spain the plain is going to go dwn in a min
Beth: O good Big Grin
Rhys: Ready to go house hunting?
Beth: Yeh of coures, we could live in a hotel for about two weeks and get a house or something.
Rhys: Yeh of coures bbz Big Grin
 
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Rhys and Beth find a place in Spain

Beth: It lovely bbz
Rhys: It perfect
Beth: Rhys
Rhys: yer Beth
Beth: Umm i think im aving a baby
Rhys: Baby?
Beth: Yeh wa if it something wrong with it
Rhys: It wont be, We keepin it?
Beth: yeh
 
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6 Months after

Rhys: How you feeling
Beth: Sick
Rhys: Awww
Beth: Can't wait for this morning sickness to be over with
Rhys: IT will be in 3 months
Beth: Can't Wait
Rhys: We going to find the sex of the baby den?
Beth: IM nt sure
Rhys: Well i wanna know
Beth: Calm down i just want 2 have a surprise.
Rhys: Im calm, i wanna think of names and what colours to buy it.
Beth: Fine we find out then.
 
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