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its ok we have faith in you lol Big Grin


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Jess decided she needed some fresh air, breathing pace between herself and her friends. She walked into the village. It looked so peaceful. Their was snow still on the branches and tables in II Gnosh. You'd have to be mentally unstable to want to eat outside with this weather, Jess thought. Then something caught Jess' attention. The wall outside The Loft had be painted, with the faces of those who had lost their lives in the Dog fire.

Jess: Oh Olivia. I wish you were here. I would make sure we never argued again . .

It suddenly struck Jess that maybe Kris was right. Maybe she was heartless, spoilt . .

Kris: You know, if you stay out here much longer, your face will freeze with that look, and its not attractive . .

Jess turned around in asstonishment. She didn't understand why he was talking her, or why he hadn't said anything hurtful to her

Kris: I came to apologize. I crossed the line with what I said.

Jess: Did you just say sorry to me? Did you just be civil to me?

Kris: Take a good luc because its theonly time. I still dont fully forgive you

Wow, now that I wasn't expecting . .


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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Kris: Take a good luc because its theonly time. I still dont fully forgive you


that should be 'Kris: Take a good look because its the only time. I still dont fully forgive you'


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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well no he doesnt fully forgive her yet but its a jolly good start Big Grin
Please continue Big Grin


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well no he doesnt fully forgive her yet but its a jolly good start Big Grin
Please continue Big Grin


i totally agree, it's quite a break through for him to even apologise, but I'm glad he did. Big Grin
 
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Meanwhile back at halLs

Zak: Come on Zo, you promised me a game of pool? The table will be taken if you take any longer. Or maybe your prolonging your fate of losing to the champ!

Zoe: Yeah right, ok then CHUMP! You coming Will, to watch Zak get beat by a girl?

Will: No im ok thanks

Zoe: Your lose.Ok loser buys the drinks . .

As there voices drifted out into the corridor, Will got up from his seat. He knew there wouldn't be a better time than know to but his plan in motion . .


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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just read it all and its Brill Smile

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thankies

here's the next bit

Will had the opportunity to act. He wanted to make sure Zoe couldn't trust anyone, apart from him. Isolate her. He knew that was the only way for her to go out with him.
He marched into Zoe's room. Rumaging around for anything useful, something he can take that would help him in reaching his overall goal.

Will: Why does she have so many clothes . .

Hundreds and hurdre . .

A sly smile crept on his face, her diary. All her intimate thoughts in one place. He searched her room for anything else of interest, but found nothing. But that didn't matter, the diary would be enough . . but how to use it? . . .

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Ok I realise that its Olivia's diary he uses but im going to make this different from the story now . .
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Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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eww Roger Federer loks weird . .Why am I watching Tennis!!!!!!!??????????


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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eww Roger Federer loks weird . .Why am I watching Tennis!!!!!!!??????????


LMAO OMG THAT REALLY MADE ME LAUGH HEHE

Great fic though and i like the way you are changing it to it be zoe's diary......however sick will is lol xx


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LMAO OMG THAT REALLY MADE ME LAUGH HEHE


He does!!!!


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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oh i dont dispute that i just wasnt expecting that comment lmao


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A few days later

Zoe: What are you up to then?

Jess: Well I found out that the college newspaper is looking for a new editor, and I was thinking I might apply . .

Zoe: You should, you'd be great at it!

Kris: Yeah, big gob, opinionated . .

Jess: Thanks . .

Zoe: So hows the radio show going Kris?

Kris: Well good, if good means that you get loads of weirdo's and emotionally unstable and challenged people ringing in.

Jess: I dont know you were ringing in Kris . .


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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that should be 'I didn't know . . '


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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LOL kris and jess make me laugh so much lol
great Big Grin
more soon x


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Jess: I dont know what to write about. They said it should be an approcimately 1000 word article in something which are age groupo would be interested in, if it were in the magazine.

Zoe: Maybe you could do like a 'freshers guide to Hollyoaks'.

Jess: No someone would have done that . .

Jess had a puzzled look to her face. She knew it had to be smart,witty,informative and interesting to college students.

Will: What are you writing?

Strange. Will never took any immediate interest in anything I did, thought jess

Jess: Im appling for a post on the college magazine and I have to write an article to send to them.

Will: Why dont you write it on college society. Zoe's idea wasn't bad.

Jess: You think?

Will: Yeah . .

That was a blatant lie. A two year old could come up with a more original idea than that. He just liked to see Jess humilate herself by sending a crap application in . .

Jess: Ok then. At least its something I can write on easily.

Pathetic. She must be one of the most dense people ive ever met . .


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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Mad @ Will
great fic though Big Grin lol


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1 week later

Zoe: Turn the radio on . .

Zak: Ok . .

The living room looked like a paper factory had exploded. Zak and Zoe had already got mountains of work, even though their return to uni had been short.

Zoe: 'The structuralist film theory emphasizes how films convey meaning through the use of codes and conventions not dissimilar to the way languages are used to construct meaning in communication'. Does that sound intellectual or just a load of jargon?

Zak: It sounds good. I didn't understand any of it but its still good.

In the distance of the ardio, meanwhile, a incresingly frustrated Kris was getting annoyed with his callers lack of sense.

Kris: Ok thank you. Lets try and pick a line that doesn't have a nutter on the end of it. Caller, your on the air. Whats you name?

Elliot: Hello, im Elliot.

Elliot gave the impression that he was nervous about being on the phone, maybe because Kris had been ripping into his callers all day.

Kris: And what do you want my opinion on then Elliot?

Elliot: Well I a big believer of the theory that there's other forms of life in the universe, and . .

Kris: Oh brother . .Well Elliot do you mind if I ask you a personal question?

Elliot: Ok . .

Kris: Do you have any hobbies? Other than looking for little green men

Elliot: Not really, its very time consuming

Kris: Well maybe you should because it sounds like your wasting your time on seeing something thats not actually there.

Elliot: But there's been sightings of . .

Kris: Sure there has, thanks for calling Elliot . .

Elliot: But I haven't fi . .

Kris: Next caller . .


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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Zak: Poor guy. I wouldn't ring up Kris' show. Your just asking for troub . .

But before he good finish a illuminated Jess ran into the room

Jess: I got it!

Zoe: Got what?

Jess: The editors job!!!!

Zoe: Aww Jess thats brilliant news

Zak: Well done mate

Jess: Thanks. The only bad news is that I have to write my first articly in like, 2 days.

Zoe: There eager.

Jess: I know, but I dont care because I got the job!!!! . .


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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brill xx


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A complacent Will enter, looking like he's just been stirred from hybernation.

Will: What all the noise about

Jess: I got the editors job Will

Will: Really? . .

Jess: Yeah, thanks for your advice, they loved it!

He did a u-turn back into his room. It was supposed to humilate her, not get her the job.
He got back to his room and sore Zoe's diary on his shelf, still pondering how he can use it . .
As soon as he'd said it, he got a brilliant, yet desperately horrid way to use it against his flatmates, with one particular flatmate in mind . . .


Why dont you come on over, Valerie? . . .

Mabye I dont want to Smile
 
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oh i hate willMad love the story though xxx


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