ok so ive decided im going to do this as a group thing and its not just going to focus on one character and also its going to be part comedy part romantic novel style anyway im only going to do a really short 1st chapter as i really dont know whether this going to be anygood...

so let me know what you think good or bad...

rhys turned slowly and pouted at the man infront of him the love of his life, he pulled him into to him and whispered ' is the camera still on'


claire sat on justins lap at the loft , ' you know claire even if you married me i wouldnt give up warrens secrets' 'wanna bet' claire thought to herself she had done it with max and justin always fell for the older women not that she was old no she was amazing she'd marry herself if she could ' you know justin i just find you irresitable so strong and manly marry me now you s&xy beast' 'seriously this isnt a trap is it' justin thinks how absolutly gorgeous he is, it isnt hard to believe that claire would fall for him he got slightly distracted by the reflective surfaces of the loft and admired himself for a couple of minutes before realising claire was starring at him looking for an answer 'ok lets do it'

ob slamed shut the front door of the flat he ran towards max nothing could stand in his way now, he clutched maxs hands to his heart and whispered, max you feel it too dont you, max stood staring in to ob's eyes this couldnt be the moment he had dreamed of his whole life could it he decided to play it cool,'what your heart beat cus i have one too' he pulled obs free hand and clutched it to his chest they stood frozan by the moment before leaning in max whispered quietly, ' you do love me dont you' 'of course i do i was so jelous when you were with claire and when i stopped the wedding it was only because i loved you not really because claire was trying to kill you that was just a bit of a bonus'

jess ran home to be with elliot she was so excited to tell him of her latest discovery at the newspaper as she ran into the flat she tripped over something small and round, ' elliot what have i told you about leaving bl00dy spaceships near the door'

ok i dont think its very good unless anyone really likes it i might leave it...

jess & elliot lol. very cool

really good they only 1 i odn't c is max and ob

i quite like the Max and Ob bit.. Love this story, carry on please.

Fab! PLease carry on

carry on

aaaw thanks for all the fabby support ill get going again after lunch!

Can't wait for next part! BTW, gone with the flames is now up! Hope you like it