Ok so this is my new fic centred around the film cruel intention but I am going to change the story a bit. The story contains Warren, Clare, Louise, Calvin and possibly some other characters but they will be all around the ages of 16-18. Let me know if ur interested. Thank you x x

Spooky, I watched this film only last, its one of my favs!! xx

cool lmao i love it 2 be writing sum in a bit x x

Sounds Awesome

Walking into the Dog, Warren Fox didn't need to look around the pub to know that every girl in the pub thought he was gorgeous. This was a daily ritual for him. He always had loads of girls on the go and every girl at Hollyoaks High wanted to be his girlfriend.
At school, he was constantly ambushed by girls, telling him they wanted to marry him, constantly sending him love letters. He still got the same response from them even now that it was the summer holidays. Despite his devilish good lucks, cheeky smile and muscular body, his family were rich which ment that he had a gorgeous top of the range convertible, always had the latest clothes and mobile phones. This also ment that the girls were attracted to his cash adn some were just happy that he even looked at them.

The truth was Warren Fox had never been in love. He'd had a terrible childhood and his parents had been through a bitter divorce. His father, Wayne, was now remarried to his step mum Cheryl. Warren had loved being an only child. It ment that he could have his own personal space. All that was ruined now that his father had just remarried. He had inherited his stepsister Clare.......

Lol. Clare and Warren Step-Sis and Bro. Too Funny

Love it

Warren approached the bar and sat on a nearby stool.
"What can I get you Warren?" asked Frankie Osbourne, landlady, winking at him.

He had always had this way with women, even older women, married women like Frankie. Warren also had a reputation of making women jump into bed with him. His father had proudly stated that he had inherited it from himself.

"Usual please Frankie." Warren replied cooly winking back, which made Frankie blush and her husband Jack shot him a warning look.

Warren placed his beloved journal on the bar next to him, opened it up and began to write in it whilst drinking his pint that Frankie had just given him free of charge. He laughed to himself how much Clare got annoyed whenever he caught her trying to read his journal.

He felt his phone vibrate in his pocket.

1 message recieved
Warren, come home i've got a proposition for you C x

Better do as madam wants, Warren thought, or they'll be hell to pay. With that he drank the rest of his pint, picked up his journal, and headed for the door, gaining a few wolf-whistles and some cries of "CALL ME!!" as he passed.

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Lol i love that
i love the film too and you've started off great, hope you continue soon!
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fab =]

Thanks for all the great comments!! will be continuing in a sec while watching hollyoaks even tho i've already seen it lol x x

this looks like an interestin start. i cnt wait for the nxt part

this is cool!! i like it plz do more

Warren climbed out of his jaguar convertible making his way up the steps to the Fox-Devine mansion and stopping to do a personal handshake with the doorman, Rupert, whom he had known sice childhood.

"Where is my father and Cheryl?" Warren asked Rupert.
"They have taken leave to Barcelona, master Warren and they will return in a month, in time for the new term.But Miss Clare requests a word with you."

Warren rolled his eyes and pushed open the door. He ran up the grandstaircase to the floor which belonged to him and Clare. This floor contained, Warren and Clare's bedrooms, a living room, bathrooms and Warren's study.

He entered the living room and saw Clare (who is the most popular girl in school)talking with Sarah and Kathy Barnes about Sarah joining Hollyoaks High after the summer.

"I believe you've met my step- brother Warren" Clare addressed Mrs Barnes and Sarah.
"Yes" Mrs Barnes said warily "I still can't believe what he did to the school nurse."
"I here she's recovering quite well." Warren said cheerfully." Nice to see you Mrs Barnes." Warren then winked at Sarah, who blushed. Clare through Warren a look that said 'Butt out'.

Warren flopped down onto a nearby sofa while Clare continued to talk about the school.
"The curriculum is very good and very informative at Hollyoaks High" Clare continued to a impressed Mrs Barnes.

"Clare is the most popular girl in school, Sarah, listen to everything she says and you'll go far!" Mrs Barnes said to Sarah with an ambitious look in her eye.
" Sometimes when i'm troubled by school," Clare began pulling out a crucifix from her sleeve and showing kathy and Sarah," I turn to God, and he helps me through it."
" Well isn't that nice Sarah." Mrs Barnes said impressed." Clare is the most popular girl in school Sarah, listen to everything she has to say and you'll go far! Anyway Clare we will have to be going before Sarah is late for her Cello lesson."
"Goodbye Clare........ Goodbye Warren." Sarah winked flirtatiously at the latter.
Warren blew Sarah a kiss before Mrs Barnes gave him a cold glance before waving cheerily at Clare. Clare smiled back sweetly until the door closed behind Mrs Barnes before her smile turned to a scowl.
"What a bunch of hypocrites!" Clare moaned.
Warren laughed. " I thought Sarah was supposed to be your best friend!"
"Yeah thats what she thinks."
Clare then took off her posh school blazer and showed a lot more informal outfit.

" So what have you been up to today, darling brother of mine?" Clare asked while opening the crucifix and sniffing up the cocaine she keeps in there.

" Been to the pub.... got a few girls numbers...."call me". Warren imitated the girls in the pub." I've sick of sleeping with these dull barbies, I need a new challenge."

" Aaaaah and thats where I come in." said Clare with a mischievous look in her eye.

Thanks for the comments

oo brill

Cruel Intentions is one of my favourite films and now it's crossed over with HO (and includes some of my favourite characters).

So is Louise going to be Warren's challenge? I'm just wondering where Calvin comes in.

Wicked story. Keep up the good work

All will be revealed

more lol

neer seen the film but it sounds good

Sorry guys there won't be any more tonight because i'm off tomorrow and plan wo watch cruel intentions to remember a couple of things that i don't wanna get mixed up.
Glad you like and there wil be loads more tomorrow
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ok i have decided to scrap that idea and gunna write a couple more chapters instead

this is fab plzzzzzzzz do more soon

"Come on then spit it out. Lets not wait for the grass to grow Clare, i've a reputaion to uphold!" cried Warren knowing that Clare was going to let him stew before she revealed her plans.Finally Clare spilt the beans.

" Remember Max Cunningham?" Clare began.

" Yeah the one with a load a dosh and his dad owns a load of properties?". Warren replied.

" Thats the one. Well when I was dating him, you know that I wanted to get my hands on his money-
Warren laughed at this point.
" Your so devious." he said.

"-I went to great lengths to please Max, great sarifices were made on my part, and for what? nothing. He fell in love with someone else and dumped me." Clare cried getting angrier by the moment.
" You don't mean?" Warren said half laughing half in shock.
" None other than Sarah Barnes."( unlikely couple, I know) Clare was shouting by now." So my plan is to ruin her reputation at Hollyoaks High so that no boy will look at her again and that she will fail her A levels and mummy will hate her and Max will never want to see her again! Boohoo. Then he will come back to me and I can continue my previous plan!"

Warren is staring at Clare as if she is a mad woman (well she is).
" And how exactly do you plan to do Sarah's downfall?" Warren asked giving Clare a 'this is not going to work' look.
" I haven't sorted that part out yet." said Clare sort of downwinded.
"Well I have a better challenge than that." With that Warren pulled out a teen girl magazine with a beautiful model on the front.

"I know how to relieve period pains, thankyou very much!" Clare laughed clearly not interested.

" Not that!! Turn to page 64." Warren continued.
Clare began to read.

Why i'm waiting for Mr Right by 17 year old Louise Summers, London.]

Clare looked up at Warren with a confused look on her face. Warren smiled broadly as he could not wait to explain the plan that he had been planning so carefully.

" It says in this article that she is looking for a serious relationship and no one night stands. I plan to seduce Louise and then see her heartbroken when I want nothing more to do with her!"
Warren laughed as he could not contain himself any longer.
" I'm a genius!"
Clare however remained straightfaced but then smiled smugly when she spotted a flaw in his plan.
" Sorry to poop the party Warren but theres a problem- she lives in London!" Clare said desperate to get her own back on Warren for him saying her plan wasn't a challenge.

" Oh yes!! 2-0 to Wazza!!! You underestimate me Clare old pal, her father has just taken up the head masters position at our school and there moving here in 2 days!"

Clare turned away obviously peeved that she hadn't ruined Warren's plans. He then decided to rub it in her face by asking if she wanted to make a bet on if he could do it or not.

" Leave me alone Warren." she said scowling.

Warren smiled even more broadly then picked up his journal and headed for the door.

" Oh gee your journal." sneered Clare." Could you be more strange?"

" Could you be more desperate to read it?" Warren replied and headed off for his bedroom.

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