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1 – Sometimes, your mind doesn’t want you to be in love, but deep down, you know you are.

It had been exactly three days since Kris and Jess had last spoken. Ever since Jess had smelt her favourite and very expensive perfume on Kris, and found out he had finished the bottle.

Kris had made no effort to make it up to Jess, though deep down he wanted to. Besides he was way to proud for that… and then there was the fact he thought it was funny. Jess was beginning to wonder if it was time to forgive and forget. Deep down Jess was in love with Kris. Deep down Kris was in love with Jess. But because neither knew the others feelings they pretended, to themselves, and the rest of the world, that they weren’t.

Of course Zoe and Zak knew. They had tried many times to set Kris and jess up but something always went wrong. Or someone got in the way. No, hang on. Let’s be plain with you. Nathan always got in the way. He was Kris and Jess’ biggest problem, worse than your dad being bankrupt. Worse than your brother finding out you’re a bisexual cross-dresser, and spitting on you. Nathan was a rash. One big, itchy rash that just wouldn’t go away.

It's nt very good but it is 1 in the morning! Hope you liked it though. Xx H xX


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You are so right about Nathan
I couldn't think of a better way to describe him lol
This is an exellent start. Please do more soon


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Nathan was a rash. One big, itchy rash that just wouldn’t go away.

so true. lol.
fabby start.
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Nathan was a rash. One big, itchy rash that just wouldn’t go away.

Lol, well put. Great start hope you do more soon.


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vewi good.. hopew you doo moree


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You have got Nathan so right!! lol.
Very good start to this, can't wait to see where you take it Big Grin


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Thanks for all the great comments! Glad to know you hate Nathan as much as me. Thank God he's out of Hollyoaks. Here's the next part. Enjoy!

Nathan POV

Kris and Jess? There is no Kris and Jess. But there is a Kris and Nathan, has a better ring to it, don’t you think? Kris loves me; he’s just one of those people who take a little time to admit it right? Yep. I mean look at me – gorgeous. How could Kris resist me? Jess is so jealous, that cow is so ugly, I feel sorry for her really. She obviously likes Kris but how long will it take her to realise that she is just not Kris’ type. I will be with Kris and I’ll do anything to get him.

Kris POV

OMG!! Nathan is just disgusting. Don’t get me wrong, it’s nice having an admirer, but he is not the admirer I want. Jess is. She is beautiful, funny, and has an amazing personality. I love our little arguments, and when she gets angry – well that is just gorgeous! I love her, she obviously doesn’t love me, maybe me and Nathan isn’t such a bad idea after all. Anyway I’m off to the SU bar.

At The SU

“Right I’m getting the first round in!” shouted Kris.
“For once” Jess muttered.
“Hey, shut it COW!” Kris winked at Jess, accompanied by his little smirk. Jess smiled and blushed invisibly.
“Right the usual for everyone…what about you Elliott”
“Erm, just an orange juice please”
“Come on Elliott, live a little!”
“Do you know what, I think there is a new star wars film out” said Elliott, rushing off.
Everyone sighed in perfect time with one another and all burst out laughing.

Kris went off to the bar and Jess felt herself being watched. She felt a shadow climb over her, invading her space. Slowly she looked up.

“Hey babe” IT said. “Where’s my favourite cross – dresser?”

His favourite, cross-dresser that’s my saying! Thought Jess

Kris looked over from the bar, to the table where his friends sat, and nearly dropped the tray he was carrying.
Great, he thought. The rash.

Thanks for reading! I'll have more up later on tonight! Xx H xX


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its really good

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arrgh the rash is back lol
Please do more this is fab
You've got Nathan so right - a complete and utter weirdow
Nathan starting to make Will look normal lol


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Great, love the description of Nathan Smile
 
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Lol. Thanks for the comments. I should be back on later with some more...I'm logging off now though. Keep the comments coming! i appreciate them.XxX H XxX Big Grin


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its great! neva mind it being 1 in the morning when you started lol. naughty girl, what were you doing up then anyway. *sigh* kids these days Roll Eyes lol


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arrgh the rash is back lol
Please do more this is fab
You've got Nathan so right - a complete and utter weirdow
Nathan starting to make Will look normal lol


couldnt agree more......please continue this is fab xx


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I hate Nathan Mad
Please write more soon it is really good.


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HAHA love the way you are reffering to nathan as the rash.
Carry on its very good

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lol i like tha u refer to nathan as the rash too. hahaha


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good so far
cant wait to see if kris tells nathen to p*ss off


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Great. Can't wait for more. Big Grin


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Great. Can't wait to read more. Big Grin


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