One morning, Newt was sitting in his bedroom. He decided to phone Lauren to see if she would come over and talk to him since they had a fall out.

Newt(on the phone to Lauren): Hey, I'm sorry for what happened yesterday.

Lauren: No matter how many times you say sorry, I still won't want to be with you again. I keep telling you that but you just won't listen!

Newt: Please Lauren, I'm begging you, I have no one! Please, I really am sorry for what I said and I promise to never say anything like that ever again to you!

Lauren: Face it, we're finished, I never want to see you again.
(Lauren hangs up before Newt can say anything)

Newt looks at his phone and throws it against the wall until it smashes up. He feels really angry with himself and stupid for saying something so nasty to Lauren.

Newt(thinking to himself): Why does everything go wrong for me? I hate me. I hate my life. The only person that I ever had was Lauren, and now she's gone...

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Newt decided to take a walk around the village to get some fresh air and to have a good long think about his life. He headed to the park bench and sat there for a while by himself.

Chavs: Oi! Goth boy! What you doing here eh?! This is our park for all they crazy Friday nights that we all have! You'll disease the bench with all your black stuff that you're wearing!

Newt: Just shut up! I'm not a goth, I'm an emo, now leave me alone! I can do what I want!

Chavs: Ooooh, goth is getting scared I think!

Newt: Get lost will ya? (he stands up and walks away from the group of chavs)

One of the chavs grab him and pushes him to the ground.

Newt: Ow! Ow! Stop it!

The chavs kick him in the ribs until he starts crying.
He gets up and runs away from them. They all laugh at him.
Newt runs home to The Dog and runs straight up to his room.

He lay on his bed thinking to himself:
Why does no one like me? Am I different? Am I not normal? Have I done something wrong? I never meant to hurt anyone.

The time was getting on so he decided to have an early night. He could hardly get to sleep and he felt like he wanted to get moved to a different foster home. He was really hating his life right now.

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Cokey this is actually really good

can u do more tonight ?

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The next morning, Newt woke up and felt in pain. He looked at his bruised body in the mirror. His ribs were black and blue.

*Frankie walks into the room*

Frankie: Hey Newt, are you ok?

Newt: Not really...

Frankie: Oh, why not?

Newt: It's none of your business, you're not even my mum so why should I tell you eh?!

Frankie: Ok, I was only asking...

Frankie closed the door and went to make Newt some breakfast. Newt got dressed and sorted his hair and make-up.
When he was ready, he went through to the kitchen to see what was for breakfast. He looked at Frankie in an evil way.

Darren: What's wrong with you eh? Has your girlfriend dumped you? *laughs*

Newt: Shut up Darren, just get lost and leave me alone!

Darren: Ooh, there goes your teenage hormones! *laughs*

Frankie: Stop it Darren!

Newt eats breakfast without saying a word to anyone. He then goes outside for another walk, this time hoping to not get any bother off the chavs. On his way to the park, he bumps into Lauren who is on her way to Drive 'n' Buy.

Newt: Lauren! I really need to talk to you...

Lauren: Go away. Can't you see I'm busy?!

Newt: Sorry, but please, come over to mine and we'll hang out.

Lauren: Didn't you hear what I told you on the phone yesterday?!

Lauren walks off and into the shop. Newt carries on going to the park.

Newt(thinking to himself): I hate my life, I wish I could just die, then it'd all be over with.

He sat in the park for almost 2 hours until Darren came over and started talking to him.

Darren: Hey, are you ok?

Newt: What's it to you?

Darren: Well, I know we're not brothers or anything, but I still don't like seeing you upset.

Newt: Who said I was upset? Just leave it out.

Darren: You would tell me if ther was something wrong, wouldn't you?

Newt: I don't know. What gives you the idea that there's something wrong with me?

Darren: You've been acting funny the last couple of days. I do care about you.

Newt: Really, it's funny that, 'cause I thought you didn't have any feelings.

Darren: Don't be daft, come on, lets go home.

Newt: Ok...

Darren and Newt get in the house and decide to watch TV. Frankie comes over and stares as if she's seeing things.

Frankie: Oh, I didn't know you two got on together.

Newt: We don't

Darren: *laughs* I know, neither did I!

Frankie: Oh well, have fun watchig TV boys *gives a slight smile towards both of them*

Newt: This is rubbish, I'm going to my room.

Darren: Oh, how exciting(!)

Newt: I'll see you later, I'm actually just oging to go to bed now.

Darren: Newt! It's 9.00! That's a bit early for bed time isn't it?!

Newt: Well Darren, some people have school in the morning you know! Night!

Darren: Ok, night...

Frankie: Night night sweetheart!

loved it ppms

maybe I shouldn't comment because I seriously seem to be the kiss of death for any Newt fics!
I've been away for a few days, and yayyyyy another one has appeared! I think its really good btw, I like Darren and the tv bit lol!