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Here is the next part.Part27 Promises Promises

I was four months pregnant but i was getting any bigger don't get me wrong that is a good thing but i always thought that by now i would be bigger but i haven't changed at all.I am a bit less worried about my baby being born into a feud because that seems to have stopped for now at least.Crig and John Paul have been having an affair for two months now.But JP wants them to come out about their relationship and Craig doesn't.

Craig keeps promising JP he will dump Sarah but he hasn't and it's not fair on JP or on Sarah.JP has dumped Spike for Craig but Craig is scared what people are going to say about him.JP has been quite upset by this but he is understands where Craig is coming from.

Today is the day of our last exam i am really nervous so are the rest of them.You should have seen it we were standing out in th hall waiting to go in and Sarah said"I can't wait till we move to Dublin"to Craig."What" Jp and i said in unison."Yeah me and Craig are going to Dublin together isn't it great".Craig just stood there biting his nails we both knew that what Sarah had said had crushed JP.

When we got out of the exam we all took out our phones and took pictures.I got one of Sarah one of Hannah and Nance together and one of Craig and John Paul with their arms wrapped around each other.Sarah got one of John Paul and me but John Paul was hugging me she got one of Craig and one of Han and Nance.Craig got one of JP one of me and Sarah and one of Han and Nance.Jp got a picture of me and craig together a picture of Han and Sarah and one of Nance on her own.I took out my phone again and took a big picture of all of us together for what we knew would be our last summer together.

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Nobody likes this tory anymore but here is the next part.Part28 The Truth Comes Out 1

That night after the end of exams we went to the Dog although i wasn't allowed a drink JP wouldn't let me.But Sarah and Han were plastered on drinking alco pops they were worse than Craig.Craig didn't get drunk but cause Sarah was drunk she was draped across Craig and kept kissing him i could see the hurt build up in JP's eyes.After a while JP couldn't stand it any longer so he got up and left.I followed him back to the Mcqueens.

When we got inside he said to me"Does he hate me Gemz"."No of course he doesn't he loves you"i said putting a comforting arm around him."I don't know what i would do without you Gemz"."I am sure you would survive".We both chuckled slightly.

A few days later me and JP went to the hospital cause i had to get a scan.We waited for the doctor to call my name soon enough they called me.JP came in with me the doctor put some really cold stuff on my stomach and started to move the thing around my stomach."Both babies look healthy".What did he mean by both babies.


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I DO LIKE IT!! lol! And i is lovin the twist at zee end! Continue soon!!! xxx


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N Absoloutely no one likes this story but here is the next bit.Part29 The Truth Comes Out 2

"What"me and JP stuttered."Both of the babies are fine"."Does that mean we are having twins"i asked."Yes you are having twins would you like to know the sex".I looked at John Paul he nodded."Right"the doctor said"You are having one boy and one girl".I don't know why but i broke down crying JP took me into his arms and hugged me and at that moment i knew my children would be lucky to have such a wonderful dad.

When we left the hospital i was very happy cause my children were ok.We went to the Dog to meet Craig,Sarah and Hannah.When we arrived they asked how it went when we mentioned we were having twins they were all shocked when we showed them the sonogram picture they all said"Awwwwww".I chuckled slightly they were being very soppy.We heard the door of the pub open and Spike walked in him and John paul had got back together.So John paul walked over to Spike and when they were kissing Craig lost it.He walked over to them and oushed Spike of John Paul and yelled."Get of him Spike do you know that me and him have been having an affair for months behind your back so he doesn't love ya he loves me and i love him so p***s of".After saying this Craig pulled John Paul towards him and kissed him.Craig had completely forgotten he was being watched by a pub full of people.


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Thanks for the nice comments more will be up soon if you want me to continue xxx


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I LUFF IT! lol, v gd, yes more soon xxx


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Thanks Here is the next part it's quite short but here goes.Part30 A new Mcqueen

We all stood there shocked at the sight that was unfolding in front of us i was shocked cause i didn't think Craig would do that in public.But then i felt a sharp pain in my stomach and screamed out John Paul heard me and broke the kiss.He rushed over to me and kneeled down beside me"Are you ok"he asked me."i'm having the babies"."Oh my god we have to get you to the hospital".And with that JP rushed out of the pub holding me in his arms leaving Craig to face the music alone.

I got a bed at the hospital i heard the doctors talking and they said there was some sort of complication.They said i had to be put to sleep i agreed i was in to much pain to argue.The put me to sleep the next thing i knew i woke up in the hospital bed with John Paul sitting in the chair next to me."Hi"i said to him."Hey how are you"he asked."I'm fine are the babies ok"."they are right here we have one boy and one girl"."what should we call them"i asked."I think this is fair you pick the boys name and i will pick the girls"he said."Ok our sons name is John Paul Mcqueen junior whats the girls"i said."Our daughters name is Sophie Mcqueen"."Perfect"i said.So this was my family me,John Paul,John Paul junior and Sophie i just hoped that we would all be ok.

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Cant wait 2 find out wat did happen!!!!!!????


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When Gemma and John Paul left i had to think of a way out of this but there wasn't one i had just outed myself to nearly the whole village.I stood on the spot looking at everyone they were all staring at me i couldn't take it anymore and i went to run upstairs but Jack stepped in front of me.I turned round and was met by Sarah's hand slapping me across the face"How could you"she spat."Sarah i i am so sorry"."Sure you are Craig you have embarassed me and yourself"."I didn't want anyone to find out not this way at least"."Then why did you kiss him and tell him you love him in front of everyone"."I don't know something came over me".I reached out to touch her but she moved away from me."Stay away from me you disgust me"and with that she walked out the Dog followed by Hannah who gave me daggers before she left.

I heard crying behind me i turned round and saw my mum sobbing into Jack's chest.Then i saw Jake who had hatred and disgust in his eyes and there was Darren with a smug look on his face and finally there was Steph who just sat there smiling."Mum"i began but i was cut off by Jack"Why don't you go for a while aye son"."Ok"and with that a ran from the Dog.I stopped outside and heard Darren shouting at them"What the hell did you do that for he needs his family right now and you just turned him away some people say what he does is disgusting but what you are doing right now disgusts me i can't even look at you".Darren came out of the pub and walked over to me i don't know why but he hugged me and it made me feel a bit better that somebody still cared.

Darren offered me to go back in with him but i needed to talk to John Paul so i said no.I knew where they would be i went to the hospital and asked the nurse what room Gemma was in she pointed me in the direction.I got to the door and knocked i heard a fimiliar voice say come in.I walked in and saw John Paul and Gemma each holding a baby they looked so sweet i walked over to them."Hey"i began"Jp about earlier that wasn't they way i should of told people"."It's ok Craig we can be together now"and with that he pulled me into his arms and kissed me i heard Gemma say awww."What are their names"i asked as i broke the kiss."Well this is John Paul Mcqueen Junior and this is Sophie Mcqueen"gemma chirply replied.This was it we were one big family me,John Paul,Gemma,Sophie and John Paul junior and i hoped we would all be ok.

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Here is the next part it's back to normal with Gemma telling the story.Part32 Broken Family

A few days later i was realesed from hospital and JP and Craig took me and the twins home.When we got back they took me into my room but Sarah saw them and looked at them likt they were disgusting then she shoved past them."Ignore her"i said.They just nodded they left me a little while later and Sarah came in."Have you been crying"i asked her."No"she said but it was obvious she was lying."It will be ok Sarah"."No it won't not until i make them hurt as much as i am"."Sarah please don't"i pleaded but she just walked of i had to tell them before she did anything.I took out my phone and went to phone John Paul when i got hit arcross the back of the head everything went black.

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I woke up in some creepy room and my head was banging i heard the twins crying.I scrambled to my feet and followed the crying i found them in the next room.I started walking over to them when Sarah walked in front of me."Sarah who did this"."Me"she shouted."Why"."Coz the one thing in this world that John Paul and Craig care about in this apart from each other is you if i get to you i hurt them"."Sarah i am your sister"."I know you are i love you but they hurt me"."And what about the twins"."Coz JP cares about the twins but he cares about you more".All of sudden she hit me and i fell to the ground i saw her walking away this time i needed John Paul and Craig.

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Here is the next part it's quite short soz.Part34 Help

I slide my phone out of my pocket scrolled down to John Paul's name and pressed call.*ring*ring*ring*then i heard a voice"Hello"."Hi JP it's Gemma i don't have long Sarah has taken me and the twins and she is gonna hurt us"."Gemz where are you"?"Some disused wearhouse but you can't come you have to get the police"."Why can't i come"."Coz Sarah is only doing this to get back at you and Craig phone the police and keep an eye on craig i gotta go before she gets back bye".And with that i hung up i just hoped they would be able to help me.

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