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Leah is now 16yrs and Amy is 32
they till live in the dingy cancel flat from when leah was a baby.

it's leah's first day back at skool since ste died in a car crash.
Amy is sat on the couch watching tele and eating a piece of toast, leah comes out of her room pics up her skool bag.

Leah: i'm goin now
Amy: ok bye

as leahs walking to skool she hears someone shout her name, she turns round to see who it is but can't see anyone so carrys on walking. 2 mins later a boy jumps at her from behind.

Boy: BOO!!

Leah: AAAH!!!
Boy: Your face (laughing)
Leah: Jay, that wasn't funny.
Jay: it so was
Leah: it wasn't
Jay: How are you?
Leah: i'm okay
Jay: i've missed you not being at skool
Leah: i've missed you too

Jay and Leah chat as they walk to skool
10 mins later they arrive

Jay: i'll see you later
Leah: why, were you going?
Jay: to play footie
Leah: What?, but i thought you didnt like footie
Jay: laters

jay goes off to play footie, leah stands just inside the gates looking around

registration bell rings leah didn't know where to go as it was a new term and skool year.
all of a sudden Beth (leah's best friend) grabs her arm and pulls leah.

Beth: come on we got registration
Leah: what
Beth: your in the same class as me
Leah: oh right, kool

Leah and beth are sat in registration.

Form teacher: morning everyone
class: mornin
Form teacher: welcome back leah
Leah: thanks miss
Teacher: now please can you give this letter to your parents (handing them out)

leah gets her letter looks at it

Leah: parents evening
Beth: whats wrong
Leah: just my mum can't come to parents evening
Beth: why?

hearing Leah, Chloe turns round.

Chloe: her mum can't go to parents eveing because she's a hore.
Leah: shut up chloe (giving her the evils)
Chloe: just because i'm right
Leah: my mum's not a hore, she's an escort
Chloe: same thing

teacher: chloe turn round and be quiet.

Leah: she can't come because she'll then find out about me truenting last year (whispering to beth)
Beth: are you still seeing him, the lad from the supermarket.
Leah: yeah, but i aint seen him in ages, since dad died, you now.
Beth: so what ya gunna do about parents evening
Leah: i don't know, i'll think of something

later that morinin its break time
leah goes into the tiolets, see's Katie and her friends chloe and Ruby.
leah goes to walk into the cubical when katie stops her.

Katie: where you goin
Leah: tiolet, now let me past
Katie: no your not, so howz mummy been since daddy died?
Leah: shut up it's got nothing to do with you, now just let me past.
Katie: i suppose she didnt really grieve did she, too busy horeing.
Leah: she's not a hore, i've told you she's an escort.
Chloe: yeah whatever
Leah: please just let me past, i need to go tiolet.
Katie: no

leah getting annoyed

leah: JUST LET ME PAST

in a rage leah pushes katie out of the way to get into the cubical.


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2 mins later she comes out of the cubical and just as she's about to walk out the door, her phone bleeps.

Katie: aww is that mummy checking up on you?

leah takes her phone out her bag as she's about to read the text chloe grabs the phone off her.

Chloe: Hi babe, i need to see you..
Ruby: .. text me, Tom.

Katie laughs

Leah: give me my phone back.
Katie:awww as leah got a secret boyfriend an doesn't want mummy to find out.
Leah: please just give me my phone back
Ruby:Why should we?

ruby passes the phone to Katie.

Leah: please

getting annoyed

Leah just give me my phone back (angry, she shouves katie)

Katie: don't push me,no on pushes me

katie pushes leah really hard sending her flying and leah hits the wall.

Leah: please (starts crying)

hearing leah and katie shouting Jay goes in.

Katie: o look its your other boyfriend, you really are getting lik your mummy arent you!

Jay: leave her alone

the girls laugh, ruby chucks her phone back at her then they leave.


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later that day Leah is walking home after skool, leah heres someone shout her name turns round, it's chloe.

Leah: leave me alone

leah carrys on walking

Chloe: wait

chloe runs and catches up to leah

Chloe: look leah i'm sorry about this mornin, i like you you're a kool person.
Leah: really
Chloe: yeah thats why i want you to come to my birthday party on friday night.
Leah: me go to you're party
Chloe: yes please come?
Leah: erm i'll think about it
Chloe: kool

20 mins later Leah gets home and heres Amy crying in her room and goe in.

Leah: Mum, whats the matter?
Amy: Leah (wiping away her tears)
Leah: are you ok?
Amy: yeah yeah, i'm fine, don't you worry about me.
Leah: but your crying how can i not worry.
Amy: look its nothing, i'm fine, now how was skool.
Leah: yeah it was ok
Amy: good, tea will be ready soon
Leah: ok

that evening amy is tidying leah's room when she finds the letter about parents evening in the bin.
amy goes through to leah who's watchin tv in the lounge.

Amy: whats this? (holding it up)
Leah: erm i don't know a piece of paper
Amy: it's a letter for parents evening, why didnt you give it to me?
Leah: why did you just ask me what it was when you knew?
Amy: don't be cheeky
Leah: i'm not, i just forgot what it was and chucked it in the bin.
Amy: o right, i'm coming to parents evening on thursday so tell your teacher.
Leah: ok

3days later, its thursday mornin
leah takes her breakfast in bed.

Leah: mum wake up
Amy: what leah?
Leah: mum wake up, i made you breakfast.
Amy: leave it there i'll have it in a minute
Leah: mum (shaking her to waker her)
Amy: ok ok ok

amy sits up leah gives her the breakfast

leah: i've got to go skool now so see you later, bye
Amy: ok bye

Leah leaves
amy eats her breakfast and drinks her orange juice that leah made for her a little after amy falls back to sleep.

meanwhile at skool
leah is sat in class

Beth: so what did you do about parents evening?
Leah: i spiked mums drink with sleeping pills when i gave her breakfast, that should keep her for a few hours.
Beth: oh my god leah, your so scraffty sometimes

leah smiles

4 hours later Sarah is banging on the door of the flat.

Sarah: Amy open up?

sarah continues to bang

5 mins later

Amy: ok, ok, i'm coming,god what is all the noise about

amy opens the door

Sarah: finaly, you were suppose to met me 2 hours ago.
Amy: what sorry, i must of fallen back to sleep after leah gave me my breakfast, Which was wierd coz she normally doesn't give bring me breakfast in bed.
Sarah: maybe she's up to something
Amy: well they is parents evening later, why wouldn't she want me to go?
Sarah: i don't know maybe she's been misbehaving.
Amy: do you want a cuppa?
Sarah: yes please

Sarah goes to sit down at the table then spots the sleeping tablets on the table.

Sarah: do you normally keep sleeping tablets out on the table like this.
Amy: no wh......(sighs)...thats it, she's must of put some in my breakfast this morning.
Sarah: what you gunna do?
Amy: get my own back, she doesn't want me to go to parents evening because she's ashamed of my job, so i'm going to embaris her like anything. (with a smirk on her face)

later that day, it's last lesson before parents evening starts

all of a sudden jay runs into the class

Jay: leah you've got to come quick,
leah: what why?
Jay: just come
teacher: erm excuse me

jay takes leah to the gates where they is a group of boys
from inside that group of boys leah heres amy's vioce.

Amy: thats right boys take a good look.

leah barges through the crowd, leah stands infront of her amy who is only wearing black bra and knickers with suspenders and a thin black sexy dressing gown.

Leah: mum what are you doing?
Amy: Oh hi leah, everyone this is my daughter leah.
Leah: MUM!!!

leah drags her mum away from the crowd

Leah: what you doing, and what are you wearing that for?
Amy: why whats wrong with it
Leah: god your so embarissing sometimes.
Amy: right parents evening, where's the first appiontment?
Leah: i'm not taking you anywhere when your dressed like that
Amy: wheres your first class?
Leah: (sighs) mr andrews class

amy and leah go to mr andrews class they go inside

Mr Andrews : hi leah, hi mrs barnes
Amy: hi (covering up because she reconises him from somewhere but can't remember where)
Mr Andrews: leah is a very good worker but has started lacking a little, i understand why but last yr was unacceptable.

leah's thoughts: oh no, please don't tell her about me truanting.

Amy: What do you mean, last year
Mr Andrews: Leah's work was very poor and she talked alot and mostly always had her mobile out texting and wouldn't put it away.
Amy: oh right, (turns to leah) What have i told you about that phone.
Leah: yeah i'm sorry about that, it was when dad wasn't very well, please don't be angry, i just cared for him thats all.
Amy: o right, no i'm not angry.

Mr Andrews: thats it just improve at your homework and try and hand it in on time.

Leah nodds her head
Amy: thanks.....
Mr Andrews: Billy, Billy Andrews.

Amy's thoughts: Billy, oh my god, thats where i reconise him from, he's leah's dad, leah's biological dad.

Amy: yes well thanks billy, we must dash got other appiontments

Amy gets out of the room as qucickly as she could.


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the next morning amy is sat on the couch watchin tv
leah stands in the doorway.

Leah: Mum
Amy: yes, what?
Leah: can i have some money to buy a dress for chloe's birthday party tonight.
Amy: how much?
Leah: about 100
Amy: 100!!!
Leah: yes for the dress, its sooo nice, i've got to have that dress, please mum?
Amy: ok but no pocket money for a month?
Leah: yes ok

Amy gets the £100 out her purse and gives it to leah.
Leah: thanks

Leah leaves and goes to skool

she's sat in class, Mr andrews (billy) class.

Mr Andrews: you have a assignment comeing up on monday, go home get to samples of DNA, 1 from your mum and 1 from your dad put them into 2 seperate plastic bags, get 1 of your parents to sign the letter i have just givin to you and bring both the samples and the signed letter in on monday.


after class leah sneaks out of skool and goes to sarah's.

Sarah: hi leah, can i help you?
Leah: can i borrow some money?
Sarah: why, hasn't your mum got any?
Leah: yeah but i havent got quite enough for the dress and shoes i want
Sarah: how much you asking for?
Leah: Erm about £100
Sarah: you better pay me back.
Leah: thanks (hugging her)

Leah leaves
she gets outside sarah's appartment and pulls the other £100 out of her pocket looks at the cash and smiles.

later that day leah has just finished getting ready for the party she comes out her room and stands in the doorway of the lounge.

Leah: what do you think?

Amy looks up from reading her magazine to see her daughter standing there in a silk red holterneck dress which just reaches the top of her knees and in gold strap on high heels.

Amy: wow, you look beautiful, you got that for only £100.
Leah: yeah (lying to her when it actually cost £200 for both the dress and the shoes)
Amy: wow
Leah: i gotta go now so cya 2morro
Amy: okay, have fun and don't get to drunk, and what ever you do don't sleep with anyone.
Leah: mum i now, i'm not stupid.
Amy: just be careful
Leah: yes i know, bye

leah goes to the party

knocks on the door

Chloe lets her in.

Chloe: Hi, wow you look beautiful
Leah: hi, thanks

they go into the lounge

chloe: leah do you want a drink
leah: yes please, can i have a smirnoff

chloe goes into the kitchen and opens a bottle of smirnoff then spikes her drink.
chloe takes the drink to her.

Leah: thanks (taking the drink and carries on dancing)

chloe then walks over to charlie who is watchin leah dance.

Chloe: charlie
Charlie: yeah
Chloe: did you know leah really fancies you and wants to shag you.
Charlie: really
Chloe: yes

Katie then goes over to leah

Katie: leah, stop dancin for 1 minuet.

leah stops dancing and katie takes leah into the kitchen

Leah: what
Katie: charlie really fancies, go and say hi to him
Leah: you think
Katie: yeah
Leah: i'll just sit her for a bit.
Katie: ok well i'm goin to dance so cya in a bit.

katie walks out
2 mins later charlie walks in the kitchen

Charlie: hey
Leah: hi charlie
Charlie: i like you
Leah: thanks, i like you 2
Charlie: really
Leah: i guess so yeah

charlie suddenly kisses leah then pulls away
then leah pounces on charlie and kisses him.
she takes his hand and leads him upstairs

Katie and chloe watch them go up the stairs and smile at each other.

the followiign mornin leah comes down stairs and walks into the kitchen

leah: my head, what happened last night i cant remember a thing
Katie: you were so drunk, no wonder you can remember a thing
Chloe: you slept with charlie
Leah: what
Ruby: seriously you did, you were so drunk.
Leah: oh my god,
Katie: lol this is so gunna be around school on monday
Leah: where is charlie anyway
Ruby: he went home bout 5 in the mornin.
Chloe: looks like you've totally been used.
leah: oh god

later that leah is back at home, she suddenley remembers about her science assinment, she goes into her mums room and takes a piece of hair from her amy's brush and then spots ste's come on the amy's dressing table and gets a peice of ste's hair and puts it in a separete bag. then goes into the kitchen were amy is cooking tea.

Leah: mum can u sign this for me
Amy: what is it?
Leah: its for my Science assinment
Amy: grabs a pen next to here and signs the form without reading it. and hands the form back to her.

the next day leah is in science and everyone is testing their samples they brought in.


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Leah has just tested her mums DNA to hers, they came out possitive then she tests Ste's to hers.

Leah: AAAAAH!!!
Jay: what wrong?
Leah: is that right, it says negative!
Jay: sir can we have another test over her please?
Mr Andrews (billy): why?
Jay: it says it's negative
Billy: yeah sure

Mr andrews gets another test and tests ste's dna to leah's again and it comes up negative again.

Leah: what, i dont get it, my dad's ste.
Mr andrews (billy): leah we have done the test twice and both are negative, thi means ste is't your dad.
Leah: who is then.
Mr Andrews: thats something you should ask your mum when you get home.

on the way past Mr Andrews (Billy) picks a hair of leah's coat with her noticing.

10 mins later the bell rings for home time. when everyone is out the class Billy tests his Dna with leah's and it comes up possitive.

billy is stunned.


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Leah rushes home, she gets through the door throws her bag down on the floor.

Leah: MUM, mUM ARE IN!!!

they is no answer so goes into Amy's room and into the draw were all the birth certificates are, gets hers out and reads it.

Form -
Name of child: Leah Barnes
Mother : Amy Barnes
Father: Unknown

Leah sits on the floor in tears holding the birth certificate.

10 mins later Amy gets in notices her bag on the floor.

Amy: Leah

leah doesnt answer

Amy goes into leah's room, she isnt in there then goes to the doorway of her room and finds leah on the floor clutching the birth certificate.

Amy: leah

Leah looks up

Leah: WHY, WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?
Amy: tell you what?
Leah: THAT STE WASN'T MY DAD?
Amy: but he was your dad, he bathed you and changed you, fed you, he brought you up.
Leah: I MEAN HE WASN'T MY BIOLOGICAL DAD!!!
Amy: leah calm down
Leah: who is my dad?
Amy: i don't know
Leah: HORE!!!

Leah runs out of amys room and into hers.
Amy goes in to leah's room.

Leah: GO AWAY, LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
(throws a book at Amy)
Amy shuts leah's bedroom door.

the next mornin leah didn't even speak to amy and went staight to skool.
she is sat outside Mr Andrews (billy) Class, he comes up.

Billy: Leah, are you ok?
Leah: she wont tell me who my dad is
Billy: come into the classroom

Leah and billy go into the room.

Billy: 16 yrs nd 9 months ago i was at the park and they was 2 girls sat on the bech opposite us, me and my mates invited them over, drank with them, talked, laughed and i went off with 1 of the Girls and slept with her, a month after the girl called me saying that i got her pregnant, i just denied it and said she had been with loads of other people so it properly wasnt mine anyway, it only hit me on thrusday when your mum came to parents evening i reconised her from somewhere put couldnt make out where. then yesturday you handed the form in Amy barnes, i thought isn't that the girl i slept with yrs ago Amy, then your test came up negative, so when everyone was out the class i tested your Dna froma piece of hair i got from your coat and mine together, the teste came up possitive, I'm your dad.

Leah: your my dad
Billy: yeah, your my daughter, i should of believed amy when she told me but i didnt, and now know.

Leah runs out of the classroom, out of skool and home.
she goes into the lounge where amy is sat watching Jeremy Kyle.

Amy: leah, why aren't you at skool?
Leah: Mr Andrews, he's my dad, my real dad.
Amy: yes
Leah: why didnt you tell me?
Amy: what?
Leah: why didnt you tell me, yeturday i asked you who my dad was and you said you didnt know.
Amy: i wasnt for sure if he was billy, the billy i slept with at the park.
Leah: your a liar, you lied to me all my life.

leah runs into her room and packs her bag.
when she comes out her room.

Amy: leah please don't go, please understand it was ste's idea.
Leah: i don't care you lied to me and i cnat stand you any longer i'm going to live with my real dad.

leah leaves
Amy breaks down in tears on the floor.



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OK Becky asked me to add a bit into the fic for her.
so here goes.

leah gets back to skool bursts into billy's class.

Leah: Dad i'm coming to live with you
Billy: leah be quiet and sit down please.

leah sits down and shuts her mouth.

after class leah is about to go out the door to her next lesson.

Billy: leah

leah turns round and goes up to the desk.

Leah: yeah
Billy: what do you mean your coming to live with me?
Leah: i'm coming to live with you, i can't stand mum she's driving me mad with all her lies, fine if you don't want me to stay with you its ok i'll just find a bench to sleep on tonight.

leah goes to walk out the class again.

Billy: ok you can stay at mine but only for 1 night then you go back home, ok.
Leah: okay
Billy: meet me by my car at hometime

Leah nodds her head then goes to her next class.

leah goes back to billy's, she walks into the lounge where they is boy sat on the couch watching tv.

Boy: who are you?
Leah: i'm leah, billy's my dad.
Boy: what?
Billy: sam this is your half sister Leah.
Sam: what, oh no not another sister.

sam leaves the lounge and goes to his room.
Billy: make your self at home

Leah starts watching tv
10 mins later she hears a girls vioce coming from the kitchen, she reconised the voice but couldnt quiet make out who it was.

Billy: go and meet your new half sister in the lounge
Girl: i have a sister
Billy: yeah, i've only just found out myself, go on then go and meet her.

the girl goes to the doorway of the lounge

Leah: you!
Girl: you.

Leah it was katie, leah's worst person in skool.

Leah's thoughts: oh my god, why her, why is she my sister.

Katie's thoughts: this is so gunna be fun having her as my sister, i gunna wind her up so bad with out her realising it, but be nice katie.

Katie: wow its so kool, it so gunna be kool having you as my sister.
Leah: yeah kool.


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the morning Leah arrives skool with katie (linking arms with her.

they get at the skool gates and amy is waiting outside for leah.

Amy: Leah!!
Leah: go away i don't want to speak to you!!
Amy: Leah please
Leah: i said go away, just get lost will you, i hate you.
Amy: Leah

Billy steps out his car and sees Leah arguing with amy and goes over.

Billy: leah go inside
Leah: i'm going anyway, just get her away from here.

leah and katie walk off

Amy: i've been worried sick all night, where did she go?
Billy: don't worry she stayed at mine last night but i told her she has to go back to yours tonight.
Amy: o right
Billy: i didn't chuck her out, i wouldnt do that to my child.
Amy: well you've changed your tune, when i told you i was pregnant you didnt want to now.
Billy: i was young and i didnt realise you were telling the truth and i thought it wasnt mine anyway, i now she is my daughter now and i'll look after, if she wants to stay at mine again then she can but she'll have to tell you first.
Amy: okay well i don't mind her staying with you then, now i know you won't thorugh her onto the street.
Billy: Amy relax, heres my mobile number so you can call me if you are worried were she is, if she goes off again.

billy give amy a piece of paper with his number on it.

Amy: ok

Billy: i got to go in now class wil be starting shortly, bye
Amy: ok, bye, cya around.

later that day its lunch time leah is sat down on the wall talkin to Beth when she hears a car horn go, she looks over towards the horn and sees Tom (her boyfriend) in his car.

Leah: i gotta go cya laters
Beth: hey leah, where you going.
Leah: cover for me, yeah (walking up to the gate)

leah jumps into the car kisses tom and they drive off.

Leah: i've missed you so bad
Tom: missed you too.
Leah: where we goin?
Tom: well i was thinking southport
Leah: Southport, isnt that a bit far?
Tom: no, not at all.

Leah smiles

1 hour later they get to southport and park up in the car park next to the arcades on the sea front.

Leah: so what you wanna do?
Tom: what you think (touching leah's leg)
Leah: sorry i can't
Tom: why?
Leah: i'm not ready
Tom: fine, come on

Tom gets out the car

Leah were we going now.

Tom: just come on

leah gets out the car.
they walk up to and on the pier, when they get to the end leah looks over the side of the pier and starts feeling queezy, then throws up over the side.

Tom: are you ok babe
Leah: yeah yeah i'm fine, just a bit of stomache ace, i'll be fine in a bit.

they walk back along the pier and go into a shop leah looks at the magazines while tom goes to the counter.
5 mins later they get back to the car.
tom takes the stuff out his pocket that he just bought at the shop.

Leah: Tom whats that?
Tom: what do you think it is, it's weed, silly
Leah: Tom, since when did you start smoking that stuff?
Tom: What i like it, you want 1?(putting a splif up to her face)
Leah: eew no (pulling her face away)
Tom: fine, all for me then.
Leah: what you can't smoke that stuff now your driving!
Tom: oh yeah, watch me
Leah: Tom Cunningham what have you turned into.

Tom gets high then drives out the car park

Leah: were we going now
Tom: home
Leah: put you can't drive in that state.
Tom: well how else are we gunna get home?

leah stays quiet

20 mins later they come to a stratch of road were they are no cars about and tom starts to speed.

Leah: TOM SLOW DOWN!!!

Tom just laughs and goes faster

Leah: TOM SLOW DOWN, SLOW DOWN NOW.

Tom ingnores her and goes even faster
then all of a sudden a lorry comes out from nowhere and they crash into it, the car flips over and rolls down into some bushes.
when it lands top looks up.

Tom: LEAH, LEAH!!!

Leah isn't moving

Tom panics and gets out the car runs back up the bank from where the car rolled down, looks around ant tries to stop the cars which are passing, no one stops, eventually a women in a red car pulls over.

Women: can i help you?
Tom: quick, you gotta help.

the women gets out her car and follows tom down to his car.

Tom: it my girlfriend she's hurt, she's not moving.

Women: ok

the women rings for an ambulance

Women (to tom): whats her name?

Tom: er Leah, Leah Barnes
Women: ok and whats your name

tom does reply
the women turns round and tom is gone.


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love it please update soon