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they both just looked at each other deep into each others eyes, staring, reading hearts beating,,,

Kriss: thats is guys John Paul and Kieron officially have won the staring competition. here is a free drink guys

There are cheers and claps as a large number of drunked students stumble to the bar to get the next round in. John Paul shakes his head.

what on earth was that he thinks, wake JP it was just a staring competiton and he is a priest so just dont.

Confused John Paul joins kris in ordering the drinks.

From across the bar Kieron looks down the bar at John Paul

What are you doing, he thinks. John Paul would never be interested in you and your a priest so snap out it.

The nxt day Kerion is up early and John Paul is taking a shower he comes down with just a towel on and sees kerion kneeling and praying. He cant take his eyes off himhe looks so peaceful and reverent and happy and georgrues. WAIT STOP this is soooo wrong!!

K: John Paul are you going to stare all day
JP: (all in a fluster) err what er i was just
k: come and pray with me

jp walks over and kneels down.

JP: er i dont believe in this stuff really but
K; then just enjoy the peace.

they are so close that they can feel the heat of each other listen to each otehrs breathing.
Images race across JPs mind he opens his eyes and shakes his head this is impossible. he looks over to see Kerion looking straight at him. the two men cough and separate

JP: well i should probably be getting my shower
K: er yeah mate cool. whatever

They both stop as if wanting to say something.then carry on their way


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good story keep it up
 
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Good start!
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more soon!
 
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cute start. i loved the whole 'come and pray with me' part. cant wait for more :3


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really good please update soon


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