This is my first so I hope you like it.

After 3 months of leaving, Kris finally returned to Hollyoaks, dragging his bags and suitcases through the door of the student flat only to find a note on the counter. He picked it up and read it; 'Zak, Gone to SU Bar. Would have asked you but you were asleep. Love Zoe & Jess x'
Typical, Kris thought. He dropped his cases in his room, grabbed his phone and wallet and left Halls.

Good start.
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Fab start
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this is really good
cant wait for more

good start

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Part 2

Once he reached the doors of the SU, he debated whether to go in for a while before pulling the handle and stepping inside, scanning the room for his friends. Spotting them in a corner he walked over, but neither of them noticed him, they were far too engrossed in conversation.
He sat in a chair opposite them and said;
"You miss me?" Both girls looked up at Kris when they heard the Irish accent they longed to hear. Zoe stood up and hugged Kris, Jess on the other hand, just sat, smiling. Kris sat next to her, wrapping an arm around her and whispered in her ear "I missed you the most."
Jess turned to him, kissing him lightly then turning away embarrased.
"What, the Irish tranny not good enough for you?" He asked smiling at Jess.
"No." She replied faintly.
"Then what is it?"
"It's just whenever 'THAT' happens, we only end up arguing and thats not what I want."
"Then what do you want?"
"I want you, but you seem like you're not willing to make sacrifises(my spelling is terrible)."
"Jess, that's exactly what I want." Kris leaned down and kissed her.
"Kris, don't, not here." Jess said, pulling away from the kiss.
"Ashamed of me, are you?"
"No, of course not, I just know somewhere quieter than this." She stood up, grabbing Kris' hand and headed for the door, passing Zak on the way.
"Hi Zak!" Kris said, being pulled past him.
Zak sat next to Zoe and asked "Was that Kris and Jess?"
"Yep." Zoe answered.
"He's back?"
"Yep."
"And they've gone to-"
"Do it?...Yep."

this is well good
continue soon please

Aww fab
Please continue asap

Straight to the point i suppose!!
love it!!

So good! continue it's amazing!

Fab stuff

Brill
Gope theres more soon =]

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Gope theres more soon =]

Gope?? haha. i meant Hope*

Fab xx

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Zak sat next to Zoe and asked "Was that Kris and Jess?"
"Yep." Zoe answered.
"He's back?"
"Yep."
"And they've gone to-"
"Do it?...Yep."

Haha, brilliant.That made me laugh so much.
Fab fic, please post more soon? xx

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Originally posted by KrisFisher<3:

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Zak sat next to Zoe and asked "Was that Kris and Jess?"
"Yep." Zoe answered.
"He's back?"
"Yep."
"And they've gone to-"
"Do it?...Yep."

Haha, brilliant.That made me laugh so much.
Fab fic, please post more soon? xx

Same here LOL and when Kris whispered to Jess that he missed her the most that was SO sweet
hope there's more sooon xx

this is really good