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Hi all! This is my one off fic! Hope you like it!



Susbitute Nightmare

The Dream

I'm running down a long, narrow path. I don't know where or why I'm running, I just am. Suddenly, a wall apears infront of me. I realise that I am trapped. As the dark figure moves closer, the walls seem to be closing in on me. I fall back and hit my head off the cold slabs beneth me. I look up to see his vilinice, pale face pearing down at me, a gleaming knife in one hand...

I wake up, breathing heavily. I sit up way too fast and hit my head off the bunk above. I feel tears and sweat trickle down my chalk white face. That was the third time that week I have had a dream like that. But, what did it mean?

I walk down the path way towards school, the dream still running through my mind. I feel a hand grab my shoulder. I scream in the fear that my dream is becoming reality. I whip round to see an amused Hannah looking at me. I feel my face turn maroon.
"Calm down Sarah, it's just me, wondering why my best friend is ignoring me!" she says, with a hint of annoyence in her voice.
"Sorry, I was in my own little world," I say, and I continue to walk. Hannah quickens her pace and begins to walk beside me. She starts to go on about the fact that her older brother, Rhys, takes far too long in the bathroom, but I'm not really listening. I have my own problems.
"And then, aliens came down from the sky and started to drink his hair gell!" she says in a sarcastic tone of voice.
"That's nice," I say, unaware that Hannah has stopped walking, and is glaring at my from behind. I suddenly realise that she is not beside me and I turn round to face her.
"What?" I ask, seeing the smirk spread across her face. She starts to walk again, still smirking. I begin to get annoyed.
"What?!?" I say again, determined to find out what she finds so amusing.
"Well, I just told you that aliens came down from the sky and started to eat Jay's hair gell, and you just said thats nice!"
I feel my face turn maroon again.
"I was thinking about something," I say, as I turn round and begin to walk again. Her smile turns bigger.
"Or someone?" she says. I realise who she's talking about and I give her a slap on the arm.

I sit at my desk in maths, the dream still fresh in my mind. I'm suposed to be doing long diviosion, but I can't be bothered. I have other things on my mind. I here the door opening and closing. I look up. A man has just entered the room, a tall, familir man. My face falls. It's him!

I'm running again. This time, It's not a dream. He came to my school to get me! And now he's running after me to get me. Why did i have to tell him I knew who he was? Stupid Sarah! I saw it. I saw the knife, in his hand. Suddenly, I go flying to the ground. Just like the dream. I feel blood trickle down my elbow. I slowly turn round, knowing I'm going to die. And there he is, getting closer and closer and closer......


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OOOOOO! Spooky stuff Kelly! Smile well done! another great offering!


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ONE OFF ONE OFF U CANT DO A ONE OFF THAT GOOD THATS JUST MEAN!!!


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OOOOOOoooooooooooooo more please x
 
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Sorry! Just wrote it a couple of days ago and thought id post itSmile I may continue if more people want me to!


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uh yes before i get the knife and get you i need to know what happens now!


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go on hun!!!!!!! go 4 it! its good! Smile


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I'll try!Smile


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yay!


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Oaky, im not gonna continue, cause im helping my cousin writing it for her school, but this was my version.


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