This is going to mainly include the students of HCC and some others. Let me know what you think so i'll know whether to continue or not.
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It was just before Easter and Will was packing to go home to stay with his parents for easter. He exited his room with his suitcases and the look on Zoe's face when she saw the suitcases seemed to fill him with power.

Zoe: Will.... what are you doing? You told me last night that you would stay here with me for easter.
Will: Yeah but I decided i wanted to stay with my parents. Anyway its my friends funeral in a couple of days.
Zoe's face changed from being angry to sympathy for Will.
Zoe: Oh will I'm sorry. I just thought you might want to spend a little time together been as i'm not going to New york anymore. ( Zoe gestures towards her arm which is in a sling with disappointment.)
Will: Oh big wow you didn't go to the stupid Big Apple. Who cares? You've got me now and if thats not good enough for you then you must be more stupid than I thought!!
Zoe looks at will with a shocked expression on her face, and not quite believing that Will could be so cruel, she bursts into tears.Will storms out of the flat realising that he's just released some of his very dark side and could affect his future plans...........

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Thanx for the comments guys!! I'm just about to write some more.......

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Kris enters the flat thinking that no 1's home.
Kris: Well, seen as i've got the place to myself i'll just go and raid Jess's wardrobe....
Kris walks along the hall into Jess's room and instantly finds a dress he likes.
Kristhinking) I'd hate to say it to Jess but she does have a half decent dress sense.
Kris: (outloud) OOO i mite wear this tonight. I will go perfect with my black stilettos!
Kris chuckles to himself.
As Kris is just about to go into the bathroom to try the dress on he hears sobbing coming from Zoe's room
Kris: (calling) Zo! Are you alright?
Zoe's sobbing gets louder.
Kris walks into her room.
Zoe is curled up in a ball on her bed with her make up smudged down her face and tons of tissues all over her room.
Kris: OMG Zoe wts the matter?
Zoe: Its will.......
Zoe explains what happened.
Kris: Right thats it that lad has done enough damage and he's not going to get a way with it! I'll kill him!!
Zoe: Kris no!! He's gone to his parents we'll just have to sort it when he comes back.
Kris: Well I won't forget!

Elsewhere........

Jess is walkng back from Evissa after having a spray tan. Its about 8:00 pm and it is dark.
She is just walking through the village when her phone rings. Its Will. Well thats strange, Jess thinks to herself, Will never calls me! Jess stands still to answer it.
Jess: Hey Will whats up?
The phone goes dead.
Jess: Will? Will?......ARGGGGGGGGH!
Jess's screams are muffled as she is dragged away by TWO people wearing black balaclavas and black outfits. They both speak telling her shut up in quite aggressive tones of voices. She instantly recognises both of them.... But who are they?

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Back at halls.
Kris has managed to cheer Zoe and up and there sat in front of the telly watchin Kris's favourite programme-Agony hour!
Kris: (talking about the person on the telly)... Can you believe her! I would have just told them to get stuffed *Laughs*
Zoe: Yeah you would knowing you! *laughs* I wonder where Jess and Zac have got to? Last I heard of Jess she was having her spraytan and that was 2 hours ago!
Kris: Well maybe she'll come back looking like an orange! *laughs*
Zoe: Well that will probably give you another cause to argue and i'm not going to listen to you to argue all night! I'm off to see if Zax's in the SU. *putting her coat on*
Kris: Well he probably is! Drinking him self silly as usual!*laughs*
Zoe: Seeya later Kris.
Kris: Bye Zo and if you see an orange you know its probably Jess!!

lmao really good, carry on soon, if you see an orange its proberbly Jess lmao

Lol..
Really good n made me laugh..
Cant wait to read more!

At the su.

Zoe enters and sees Russ, Rhys and Gilly.
Zoe: Hey guys have you seen Zac anywhere?
Rhys: (drunkenly) Why? You looking for a good night?
Zoewith disgust) Oh shut up Rhys you slimeball.
Rhys: Well you know where I am if you wanna good time.
Zoe deadeyes Rhys.
Zoe: So have either of you 2 seen him? (looking at Gilly and Russ)
Russ: Nope, I've just got here cos Mercy's ment to be here soon and Myra tried to force me to eat her home made pie. (not realising that Mercedes has just walked in and is right behind him)Trust me you do not wanna go there! It looked like something I'd just thrown up! Tasted like it too!(Turns around)MERCEDES!(trying t cover up his tracks)hi hw are you? You look beautiful!
Mercedes slaps him hard acros his face.
Mercedes: I head evrithing you sed you narrow minded little slug!
Mercedes walks out and Russ desperately runs after her.
Russ: Babe you know I didn't mean it(tries to laugh it off)
Zoe: Any way what about you Gilly?
Gilly: Erm....... yeah come to think of it.His phone went and it was Will. I dunno what he said but it must have been some kind of emergency cos he just legged it AND without finishing his pint!
Zoe: Well do you know where he went?
Gilly: As I said he didn't say anything so i duno.
Zoe: Cheers Gilly (Zoe walks out)
GillyHe calls after her) No problem!
Out in the street and Zoe sighs that her mission to find Zak has failed. She looks down on the floor and sees something....
She bends down to pick it up and when she realises what it is she is full of shock.....
Zoe: ZAK!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hey! sorry it's taken so long!Hope you like it x x

Zoe couldn't believe it. This was Zak's most treasured possession. He never went out without it.He had once told Zoe that it was a gift from his brother Steven. This chain was Zak's best friend well Zak acted like it was. Zoe remembered a time when Kris laughed at Zak because not only did this chain have Zak's name engraved on, it had the name of the football team he supported engraved on it too.This just proved that Zak was completely football mad! Zoe stared at it for what seemed like hours until her vision was blured by the tears spilling out uncontrolably. She thought to her self if Zak had to be somewhere urgently he still would not have left his chain behind...

ONE HOUR AGO.......

At the SU
Rhys is trying to pull some girls with his sleazy charms while Zak and Gilly have just finished a game of pool and are sat in the bar, deep in conversation about Zoe while downing pints.

Gilly: Mate, do you mind if I ask you a personal question?
Zak: Yeah go ahead.
Gilly: Well according to my love calculations...
Zak: aaah Gilly mate you know i'm not seeing anyone or is this one of your bad jokes?
Gilly: I DON'T HAVE BAD JOKES*with a look of outrage*
Zak looks at Gilly as if to say "now come on"
Gilly: Ok well maybe they are.*embarrassed*
Zak laughs
Gilly: Anyway as I was about to say... Do you stil have feelings for that Zoe bird?
Zak chokes on his drink
Zak:*pointing at Gilly* hey now, you know me and Zo are just mates... besides she's seeing Will.
Gilly: You could beat Will anytime in the relationship department. Especially for Zoe's affections.
Zak quickly looks up at Gilly with a look of hope spreading across his face and a smile slowly going from ear to ear.
Zak: You really think so?
Gilly: Aaaaah so you do like her!
Zak: Oh cr*p. Ok ok I do like her..... actually its more than that.... I love her!
Gilly: Mate you got it bad but I still think you got a chance with her.
Zak: Well what should I do?
Gilly: I think you should go back to Halls and tell her how you feel. Well if you go back and tell her i'll buy you a pint and i'll let you win at pool!
Zak: Ok i'll go after this pint..... HEY WHAT DO YOU MEAN LET ME WIN! I always win!
Gilly: No you don't, well maybe you do *trying to change the subject before Zak adds a comment*Hadn't you better be going?
Zak: Ok, OK i'm going i'm going.
Gilly: Just remember you could get a girlfri