thanx for the tip and that was well good. never expected that

yay 2nd page

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lol your welcome. x x x

I've decided when i've finished this fic that you guys can decide who I do my next one about. x x x

Yay when are you starting your new one x

The boy looked delirious. Zoe crouched down in front of him.
Zoe: Kris its Rhys's brother, Josh. *turns to Josh* Josh can you hear me?
Josh: erm... yeah. Who are you?
Zoe: I'm Zoe, I'm a student at HCC.Listen can you stand up?
Josh: Erm... I dunno... I just need to find Amy.
Zoe and Kris help Josh stand up and he only just manages to balance himself.
Kris: Come on then lets go.
They enter the next room and see a familiar face who they are glad to see.
Josh: RHYS!!
* A different side to Rhys emerges as he does his best to protect his family*
Rhys: JOSH!!
They both give each other a big hug and Josh bursts into tears.
Rhys: Oh Josh, don't worry we'll be fine and if they wanna hurt you there gunna have to go through me.
Josh: What about Hannah? Where is she?
Rhys: I don't know we better find her and quick!

A gun shot is heard near by.........They hurry into the next room. There is no sign of anybody with a gun. The only person that they do see is a person laying on the floor with blood pouring from there body.......
All four of them stare open mouthed...........

erm...when i've finished this one but i'll let you know before I start a new one and you can share some of your ideas for characters. I'm guessing I might be finished soon.x x x

this is soooo goood you have to write more tonight x

yasmin i wouldn't worry about me not writing any more tonight.... i'm nt sure i'll be able to stop x x x x some more coming rite up!

thats good then, coz i dont fancy going to bed for a long time x

Rhys, Josh, Kris and Zoe didn't expect what just hit them. They all stood in shock. Everything just seemed to freeze for a few minutes but they were all brought back down to earth with a bump.
Josh was the first to do anything.
Josh: NOOOOOOOOO!!!! *big tears rolling down his face*. He ran next to her and held her hand.
He knew evrything about this person, they had so much history.
Rhys finally melted out of his freeze frame.
Rhys:*running over* NO NO THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!!!
Tears began to roll down his face too. He hadn't cried this much since his grandfather had died.
He kneeled down next to her and held her head in his lap.
Rhys and Josh were crying so much they had couldn't stop.
Zoe and Kris were stood in the background. Seeing the sight of her and the fact that Rhys, one of her best friends was crying uncontrollably became too much for Zoe. She silently started crying while Kris put a comforting arm around her.
Rhys: OH WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN TO US!!!OUR ONLY SISTER!!! HANNAH!! OH HANNAH!
Rhys cradled her like a baby. He refused to believe his only sister was dead.

lol me either x x

Awwww that is soo sad x

I know but it makes it more dramatic lol. x x prepare for more......

im preparing XD x

Kris knew it was only a matter of time before the masked figures came in demanding there money. He was thinking of a way for them to move on to find the others without seeming selfish. All of a sudden he realised he didn't have to.
Rhys: *tearfully* Josh we have t go......
Josh: *grips Hannah's hand tightly* NO!
Rhys: Bruv, we have to for hannah's sake. We don't want anybody else to be in our position.
Josh: I'll go as long as we can take her with us.If you don't then I'll stay here and i'll wait for them to kill me.
Rhys:*softly* Ok, I'll carry her.
*Rhys carefully does something he never in his life thought he would have to do, picks up his dead sister and carries her like a baby.*
It suddenly occured to Rhys......... what was he going to tell his mum and dad?

aw that was so sad poor josh and rhys even tho it is late plz carry on its a brill story and nice idea to start with

Awww asif he is carrying his dead sister :P can't wait for more x

Thanks. I was going to continue anyway! hehe x x x

ooh yey r u doing more tonight HINT HINT lol

r u doing anymore tonight cos if not then im going to sleep but if u r then ill stay up

As they entered the next room, Kris's heart soared! There lay Jess on the floor, conscious and seemed to be relatively Ok. Zak was next to her also seeming quite well except he had a nast gash on his fore head.
Jess: KRIS!! OH kris am I glad to see you!
They hugged for what seemed like a lifetime, Zoe did the same to Zak.
Kris: I'm so glad your ok! i've been so worried!
Zak: *to zoe*they told me you'd been in an accident and that you were in a critical condition! Then some psychos beat me up and i ended up here. I was so worried Zo.......I was on my way to tell you when I got the call.....
Zoe: Tell me what?
Zak:...... That I LOVE you!
Zoe:*shocked* I love you too!
Zak kissed Zoe passionately and Kris did the same to Jess.
Rhys and Josh was still standing there holding Hannah. She was as limp as a ragdoll.They thought well they're all happy we know we can never be happy again.
It was then that Josh, Kris and Zoe noticed the bundle that was lodging between Zak and Jess.
It was Amy.
She too was well and her and Josh gave each other a massive hug and Amy knew what had happened to his sister, her, Zak and Jess had heard the gun shot.
Thank god its not my sister she thought to herself but still wishing it shouldn't have happened to Josh.

The door suddenly burst open and they were there.
Everyone goes quiet. Everyone freezes to the spot.
Masked person one: (male) Well, well now isn't this cosy......
The second masked person meanwhile lets out an evil cackle.

there you go!.yes i will be doing more tonight just as long as people will be reading it or i'll continue it in the morning. even though looking at the clock it already is the morning! lol x x

'lets out an evil cackle' - rofl :P this is sooo goood x