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ooooooooo a new page!!
 
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Rhys had no idea what to say.
Suzanne: If she's still out clubbing with Sarah Barnes at this time they'll be hell to pay in the morining!
Neville: Well, aren't either of you going to tell us?
Rhys:*mumbles* She's dead mum.
Suzanne: What's that love?
Rhys: She's dead mum, She was shot.
Neville: Now Rhys now is not the time for your silly jokes.
Josh: She wasn't clubbing with Sarah,mum. He's telling the truth they shot her before we got to her.
Suzanne and Neville realised they were telling the truth when tears rolled down Rhys and Josh's faces.
Suzanne let out a loud shout and burst into tears.
Suzanne: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! MY LITTLE GIRL!! *she collapsed to the floor* NOOOOO! LAST TIME WE SPOKE WE ARGUED AND NOW SHE'S GONE!! *cries manically*
Rhys and Josh are crying and even Nev has tears streaming down his face. He goes to comfort her and she pushes him away.
Suzanne: DON'T TOUCH ME! DON'T TOUCH ME NEVILLE!
She then gives in when Rhys and Josh sit down next to her and Rhys puts his arm round her and she cries into his shoulder, Neville also sits down with her.
They sit there for what seems like hours knowing that there life will never be the same again.
 
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I will write more later because I have to revise but I promise there will be more today so don't worry about that. x x x
 
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cant wait, im off to the beach soon, so will catch up later if any posts added


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this is well gripping. i love it. it is well gd
 
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Big GrinBig GrinBig Grin Yay you wrote some more Smile this is sooo sooo good like ive said before but i'll say it again Razz x
 
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I'll write more at about 4:30 when I watch catch up hollyoaks. It will have been about the 3rd time i've seen the episode lol. I bet you all think i'm really sad lol Smile x x x
 
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haha you sound just ;like me lolSmile


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lol! My brothers and my parents keep tellin me that i'm obsessed lol. Take last night for instance me and my brother were watchin hollyoaks at 6:30 and just as it was coming on, he says have you seen this one? and i said yes because i watch them on e4 at 7:00 and he just rolled his eyes at me and I was like what do you expect I LOVE it! I think i've kinda influenced him because he watches it when he is home lol Smile x x
 
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lol, me and my younger sister who watches it with me are both obsesed lol and shes only 8 hehe


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OMG!! lol. Well I have another brother and he's like 9 years older than me and he's really soap mad so i've basically been watchin Hollyoaks since I was about 2! lol
 
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i was 7 when i first watched hollyoaks lol, i started watching when it first startedBig Grin


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i think anyway lol


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lol how old are you?
 
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18! how about you?


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k lol! Ninja im off now! bye xxx


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Ok i'm going to carry on with the story now. Ok? Will anybody be reading?
 
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i will be reading it
 
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Elsewhere, Amy had just returned home. As you can imagine Kathy and Mike were going out of there minds.
Amy walked through the door. Silence. No sooner had she thought that Kathy emerged from round the corner slowly followed by Mike.
Kathy: WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?
Mike: Kathy remember what we said keep it calm.
Kathy: CALM MIKE, CALM! THERES SOME PSYCHO OUT THERE KIDNAPPING YOUNG PEOPLE.
Mike: I know Kathy but i've just got Leah down.
Kathy: *arg.ues in whisper* I don't think you realise that Amy could have been one of them!!
*Amy bursts into tears*
Mike: Oh Amy you know she didn't mean it.
*Kathy looks shocked that Amy is crying*
Amy: Its not that.
Mike: Well come and sit down love *gestures towards the living room and the sofa* then you can tell us everything.
Amy sits down on the edge o the sofa with her hands clasped not sure how she was going to say it. Kathy and Mike were in the kitchen, making drinks of hot chocolate and wondering what was wrong with her and were not worried about Sarah as they knew when her and Amy had finished at the pictures Sarah was due to sleep at Hannah's.
Amy looked up at the mantelpiece. There was a picture of her and Sarah when they visited Majorca last year. They both had a tan and sarah looked very glamourous in a strap top and a long summer skirt. They had just returned from a meal. There was a sunset in the background. That was her favourite picture and it was her parents favourite too. Kathy entered the room and set down a drink on the table for Amy and then sat down on the seat next to Amy.Mike then entered and sat on the next sofa.
Mike: Right then Amy what is it?
Amy looked reluctant to say anything.
Kathy: Your pregnant again aren't you?!
Mike:KATHY!
Amy:MUM!I'm not a sl