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"ello sexy!" tony said as jacqui walked through the door.
"Tone...let go of me"
"whats wrong jac?"
"Tony im pregnant!"
tony sat there in silence, and shuffled away from jacqui
"what are we going to do tone. my mum thinks im happily in love with aleksander, how am i going to tell her the situation?"
Tony stayed silent.
"i don't know jacqui."
meanwhile....

"wahhhh" aleksander cryed as he was getting pulled into an entry
"alek, i need to talk to ya..." carmel said squinting
"whats wrong carmel" he asked just before he leaned in to kiss her.
carmel slapped his hand away.
"alek, im pregnant" she said, trying to get it over with.
"what are we going to tell jac?" she asked
"i'm more worried about telling your mum" alesander said
"why? your my sisters husband!" she shouted
"not really..."
"huh?" carmel was a bit confused
Aleksander decided to let carmel in with the details of his and jacquis marriage.
"well, i suppose we could tell jac first"
carmel asked
"shes going to kill me!" alek replyed.


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ah I like this. Interesting situation and well written. It's good I love the image of Aleksander being dragged into a random alleyway screaming Big Grin


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this is good !
 
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shall i write sum more? i know its nt as gud as anyone elses...


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Yeah right some more
 
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really gd


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