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This is set in July 2009

John Paul was alone, shopping in Chester in a busy crowd. It had been 1 year since he had seen kieron and 1 year 1 day after his death. He was just starting to get over kieron and was getting on with his life. However, John Paul was still single.

He was just about to enter JJB Sports when he heard a familiar voice softly say "John Paul"
He thought it was his mind until it said again
"John Paul, Turn around"

As soon as he turned around the mystery person grabbed him and kissed him. Only once he opened his eyes he noticed it was the love of his life, Craig. He tried to pull away at first as Craig would be nervous but after a while he noticed that Craig didn't look to care. At last the kiss was over.

They both just looked at each other for ages until John Paul broke the silence

"You could have told me you were coming back."

"I thought a surprise would be nice" answered Craig

John Paul: Did you just come all this way to kiss me
Craig: I wasn't meaning to but i couldn't stop myself once i saw you.
JP: Come on we can talk about this at mine.
 
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In The taxi back the boys hardly spoke to each other. The taxi pulled up at JP's. Nobody was In and the two lads walked into John Paul's room still not speaking when Craig remembered old memories from years ago and had to speak.

Craig: Ive not been in here since.."You know"

JP: Why did You come back

Craig:I couldn't carry on living over there without you... I..I still love you. I was so grumpy over there because i couldn't stop thinking about you.

JP didnt know what to do. He had always loved Craig but he can't just walk into Craig's Life.

Craig: Can we start again

JP: I..I dont know Craig.

Craig: I need your help to show my feelings in public. I really missed you and i have not been with anyone for 2 years because i missed you.

They both moved in for a kiss and after a long look at each other JP snogged craig and then toke his top off and they both got into bed when they heard footsteps...

Myra was home!! However, wat the boys didn't know is that she had been home ever since the boys came in.

Myra: Do you and your friend want to come down JP. I need your help with the tea.

Craig looked at JP and JP said

JP: She won't mind, honestly.

They went down the steps

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Myra: Ohh... Craig!!

She was astonished

Myra: How could you have done this to my son. You broke his heart.
JP:MUM...
Myra:He always loved you and then you broke his heart at the airport

Craig was Crying then

Craig: I didn't know who i was Myra. Please don't shout at me
Myra: Oh so you think it was alright.
Craig:I didn't say that!!1

At that moment Craig walked out slamming the door behind him it left only JP and Myra left

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JP: Thanks mum, you just took my greatest chance to get back with him away probably..
Myra(upset): Jp im really sorry that just came out.

John paul ran out and chased Craig hoping he would understand.
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John Paul reached a destraught Craig.

Craig: I thought you said she would understand

JP: Craig i'm so sorry about that. Shes normally very understanding. Do you still wanna be with me???

Craig: YEH! Of course but your mum hates me

JP:Look, she does not hate you she was in a bad mood. Craig we will have to be mates for a while until everything is sorted.

Craig: I don't think i can do that JP

JP: I promise you, It won't be for a long time
i PROMISE YOU because i love you so much.

Craig: Just 1 week at the most

JP: OK CRAIG. TRUST ME !!

Craig: then cya around

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Back at the Mcqueen home Myra was destraught. How could she have done that to her son and the boy(man) who he had loved all of his life.

Suddenly the door opened. It was Jacqui. She asked her mum why she was so upset

Jacqui: Mum wats up

Myra: Ive just upset JP.
Craig is back and they were upstairs sleeping together again and when they came down i opened my gob and John PAul is furious at me.

John PAul was listening - he walked in

JP: Yes i am mum

Jacqui: Alright JP don't be tight

Myra: JP i am so sorry. I don't hate him or anything i just spoke my mind by acident

JP: You are going to come with me tomorrow to the Dog And apologize to Him on the spot. OK??!!

Myra: Yeh
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Meanwhile at the Dog

Craig was in Newts room when Newt came in

Craig: Oh.. Im sorry

Newt: Its ok. Stay

Craig:OK

Newt: Craig.. are you ..........gg..a.y

Craig: Yeh, well at least i think i am now.

Newt: What do you mean

Craig: I was with a girl a few years ago.. and while i was with her i was also seeing smeone who well i loved more with all my heart. He meant everything to me and i meant everything to him and well he still means everything to me and he lives in this village. But when we were both going to leave togetrher I wouldn't kiss hi in public so i went on my own

Newt:Craig,, are you talking about John Paul Mcqueen

Craig: Yyehh.. HOw did you know that

Newt:YOUr mum is always talking about you too.

NEwt: You should really talk to him. He sounds Like he means so much to you. Good luck

Craig: Yeeh, i should (a tear jerked down his face.

These words crippled craig. JP means so much to him but he is not with him.

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Later that night Craig could not sleep as Newts words Resounded in his head

"You should talk to him, he must mean alot to you."

That was it! Craig had to talk to John Paul. It was 2am yet still Craig loved John Paul and he could not wait anymore to show it and prove to John Paul what he felt for him.

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Meanwhile all the Mcqueens were in their rooms except for Myra And JP. Myra was upset after what she did to JP(and Craig) so she was on the kitchen table crying and JP was thinking about Craig watching TV when their was a knock.

Myra answered it very surprised.

Myra: Oh.. Hi Craig, What are you here now for

Craig: Is John Paul awake

Myra: Yeh.. Go .. Through. He's in his room

Myra: Oh yeah Craig, I am so sorry for earlier i didn't mean a word of what i've said. I would love to see you with our John Paul love

Craig: OK, myra that is great news. I'm going to Jp though

Craig knocked on John Paul's door. John Paul answered it and was amazed with who was there.

JP: Craig......What on hell are you doing here now

Craig: I need you

JP: What for. Because i will be there for you

Craig: I need to be with you, i was dying in bed without you

JP: But my Mu..

Craig: She just said she is alright with us. She wants us to be together

JP: What made you so upset tonight

(Craig was crying)

Craig: It was something .. erm .. Newt said
I was telling him when you know you are in love and i told him about our .....
affair a few years ago and how i always wanted you
He told me that you must mean alot to me and that is what made me come to see you

After a long stare at each other for about 20 seconds
They both pulled each other in and kissed probably the most passionately since that first kiss on 16th May 2007.

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Craig woke up at 2 p.m.. He wasn't meant to be staying.

He kissed John Paul so he woke up and told him he would ring him back
 
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John Paul: Were are you going

Craig: I wasn't meant to sleep. I didn't tell my mum
She will be wondering were i am. See you later.. Love You.

JP: Love you too

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Craig ran home and tried to sneak to his room but Frankie was at his door

Frankie: And where have you been

Craig: Me and you need a chat mum.

Frankie: OK come on into your room.

(Craig and Frankie went into his room)

Craig: Mum, d'ya know when i was with.. John Paul

Frankie: Yeh.

Frankie: Are you back with him Craig

Craig: Well nothing is confirmed yet but I.. I slept with him last night

Frankie: Ok

Craig: What.. your not mad again

Frankie: Why would i Be?? I mean you always have loved him . He means alot to you so i will be by your side if you get back with him knowing he is your soulmate.

Craig: Thanks Mum. I love you

Frankie: Its alright. Love you too.

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SOZ BOUT B4.. MEET ME LATER AT MINE 4PM
LOVE YOU LOADS XXXXX CRAIG
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4 P.M.

John Paul walked into The Dog

JP: Hi Frankie

Frankie: Hi John Paul. Craig told me that you and him " ............... " last night

JP: Yeah, we did

Frankie: Anyway, he's in his room

John Paul went into Craig's room where Craig was on his new Laptop

JP: Hi Craig

Craig: Oh, hi mate

JP: What we did last night. It meant so much to me

Craig: I was just about to say the same

Craig: Can we be together then

JP: No

Craig: Please

JP: I'm only joking of course we can

Craig: Oh John Paul. I love you so much. Thank you

John Paul moved into Craig's terretory and give each other a really passionate kiss
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Later That night thay orgnized a family meeting to tell them that they are an item

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Mcqueen's

JP: Mum , and the rest of you . Me and Craig we are back together. He is my boyfriend

Myra: Im happy for you both Lads

Mercy: Im happy for you John Paul

Michaela: That is well cool John Paul

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Dean's

Craig: Mum, Darren, Jack and Steph . Me and John Paul are back together and i am gay.

Frankie: Im happy for you craig it is up to you love.

Darren: Good on you Big Boy

Jack: Grow Up Darren

Newt: Cool, Craig!
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At The Dog-

John Paul: Dy'a wanna sleep at mine tonight

Craig: Oh yeh My Love

JP: Lets have a drink first

They kissed

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Do more tomorrow or in morning goodnight
 
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That night in bed was the greatest night the two boys have ever spent together.
They are finally a proper couple who can love each-other properly.

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In the morning JP and Craig looked at each-other as soon as they woke up.

JP: I love you

Craig.: I love you too.

They kissed passionately again

JP: Craig

Craig: What

JP: When you were in Dublin, did you ever have someone with you,

Craig: I never wanted anyone. Every Day i would be missing you to much.
How about you??

JP: For a long time i met some people and there was nothing but there was 1 man called Kieron. He was a priest and there was something. Nothing like the way i feel for you.

Craig: Where did he go

JP: He... ....He died

Craig: Aww John Paul How??

(crying) JP: Murder.. a relative.. well my secret brother called Niall murdered him and made it look like suicide. He's in Jail now

Craig: Come here
Its alright

Craig Grabbed John Paul and held him in his arms only in about 5 seconds they ended up giving each an extra passionate kiss and they had sex again.

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