really good and Thanx for deticating it to me!!!!!!
*hugs*
xxxx

you're welcome Nikki did you spot you? next bit will have more of you in

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sat next to a girl on a bench she had curly brown hair with blonde and caramel highlights.

ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

your in ther subtly untill next time just writting that up now it should be on soon

cool!

xx

brillant update

Arielle was sat outside Il Nosh when her mobile rang only she didn’t realize it at first “the fish swam out if the ocean, they grew legs and they started walking” she sang “damn that’s my phone” she routed in her bag and pulled it out “Hello”
“Hi Arielle it’s Anastacia”
“Hey, how are you”
“I’m good thanks, do you fancy bringing Rupert round to my flat for a while, it would be nice for Rebecca to have someone to play with”
“Sure, where do you live?”
“In one of the flats above the shops number 14”
“I’ll be round in a mo, were outside Il Nosh so I won’t be long”
“Bye” Arielle hung up and headed round to the flat. She knocked on the door of number 14 a girl answered it she was wearing a pair of skinny jeans and a Paramore t-shirt she had brown hair with blonde and caramel highlights. “I’m here to see Anastacia”
“Just go through she’s in the lounge”
“Thanks” she said and headed through she saw a little girl on a play mat in front of the television
“Hey, just put him down it’s all child safe”
“Thanks, who was the girl that answered?”
“She’s my flat mate, she’ll have been of to work we need all the money to pay the rent, it would be nice to share with someone else but our only choice is the university students and with Rebecca its no good”
“I’d just love somewhere to live, where I’m not scrounging off others like at the moment I’m staying with the McQueen’s”
“Why don’t you move in here? we could do with the help paying the rent and I’m sure Rebecca would love a friend to play with all the time, I’m sure she’d enjoy it to playing with me”
“I’d love to but I need a job first”
“You’ll soon find one”
“Don’t forget I’m doing my A-Levels meaning I can’t work through the day”
“Oh yeah, well I think you’ll find a job soon try Il Nosh or MOBs”

this is dedicated to Tori

brillant update beth please update soon

Give me chance i've only just finished writing that last part maybe more in the morning or tonight depending on how much i get done

Luv it
can't wait til there is more!

xxx

Kieron was pacing round Niall’s flat he picked up his mobile and started dialing the number of his parents house before clearing the screen again he couldn’t do it he’d be ruining their lives again he couldn’t face it they had been so proud when he had decided to be ordained as a priest and now taking it away from them because he was in love it didn’t feel right but neither did being without John-Paul. He started dialing the number again but Niall arrived home for lunch so he placed his mobile in his pocket and headed towards the church, maybe being near the lord would give him the courage he needed. He stood outside the church and called the number. “Hello” a women said
“Hello Mum, it’s Kieron”
“Oh love. It’s nice to hear from you”
“I can’t talk to you for long but I’ve got something to tell you”
“What is it?”
“I’m in love”
“That’s wonderful news let me tell your dad” he hears her calling to his dad and telling him the news
“But that’s not all mum I’m in love with a man”
“Just say that again I don’t think I heard you right”
“I’m in love with a man”
“Oh no” she said and hung up on him. At least it was out in the open that was all he could think of. He unlocked the church and went into the vestry to get ready for the afternoon’s choir service and Holy Communion.


here is a little more it's not quite finished but i didn't know how kieron could break the news to his parents

brillant update beth

Its really good Beth!

luv it!

are you sure it wasn't too blunt the way he told his parents?

this is the last bit off my fic post before

He knew the lord would be with him all they way he knelt at the alter and prayed in the hope that everything would make itself right. He stood up to greet the members of the congregation who were beginning to arrive he was surprised to see that John-Paul was one of them.

love it beth

Arielle left Rupert with Anastacia and went looking for a job as she was stood outside the flat she saw a beauty salon and decided to try there first. She walked down the stairs as she turned the corner she saw Kris what was she to do? She knew she’d fobbed him off last night but everything had been moving to fast seeing as they hadn’t even gone on a date.
“Arielle” he’d spotted her what was she to do.
“Hi Kris” she replied while telling herself to stay calm.
“Can we talk?” he asked her.
“Yes but what about?”
“You know what about” he said and took her hand. He led her to ‘the dog’ and sat her on a bench outside. She was worrying about this talk not the talk itself more to what it would lead to, she needed to think about Rupert before she made decisions that affected his life too.
Kris came back out of ‘the dog’ “I didn’t know what to get you so is a juice okay?”
”Yes, Rupert won’t look after himself”
“Look, what was going on last night? You’ve confused me one minute you’re all over me the next you’re leaving me with no explanation”
“It was just too fast I’ve only just met you, I know nothing about you”
“Okay, I’m an Irish, bisexual, cross-dresser” he said making a joke of himself
“That’s not what I mean, I want to know what music you like, what your favourite film is” she finished “did you just say you were bisexual?”
“Yes I did is that a problem?, my favourite film is it’s a wonderful life”
“No, just a bit of a surprise really, I need to go I’m supposed to be job hunting”
“Can I have your number at least” Kris asked her, she reached into her handbag and pulled out the same notepad and pen before scribbling something town and handing it over to Kris. She walks away from him and tries to find her way back towards the beauty salon.

Hey Beth!

xx

luv it

can't wait 4 more!

xx

well then nikki here's more

She walks into the beauty salon and sees a girl at the reception desk.
“Hello, I’m Carmel how can I help you?”
“I was wondering if there were any jobs going”
“I’ll go and ask the owner I’ll be two minutes, if you’d like to sit down” Carmel left and went into the back. Arielle sat there waiting she liked it here Carmel seemed nice, she was sure she’d fit in. Carmel came back out with another women “this is Louise” Carmel told her Arielle stood up.
“I’m Arielle, it’s nice to meet you”
“I Hear you’re after a job”
“That’s correct”
“What Qualifications do you have?
“English, Math’s, Textiles, History and Science at grade B, German, French and English literature at Grade A and an A* in Religious Studies all at G.C.S.E, I’m doing my A Levels at the moment.”
“You’re not here to offer anything I could use in the salon”
“I was only hoping for something like receptionist”
“Leave your number with Carmel and I’ll get back to you” Louise said before heading in to her private office again. Arielle scribbled her number down yet again and left the beauty salon. She glanced at her watch and saw that she’d been gone for almost two hours so she headed back to Anastacia’s to collect Rupert.

Kieron went into the vestry the service had seemed to last an eternity too him, he knew why it was all because he couldn’t be near the man he wanted. He heard the door of the vestry close again and turned round, John-Paul was there he looked so vulnerable and Kieron just couldn’t help himself, he took John-Paul’s hand and pulled him close and wrapped his arms around him. “I want to be next to you” he tells John-Paul. John-Paul pulls away from him and leaves Kieron looking confused “You say those things but do you really mean them?”
“I’m not some kid who lies to get what he wants, I’m telling the truth to get what I want, actually I don’t want you I need you”
“I do not lie to get what I want”
“I’ve just ruined my family for you and you don’t care, I tore my family apart so I could be with you and be happy, I have to give up my career for you, yet you’re not reciprocating these feelings only when it suits you” Kieron say’s shouting at him, he walks away into the church and prays. He hears John-Paul leave the church, he goes back to the vestry and changes before going back into the village.

Kieron shouted at John Paul!


More soon!!!!!!

NIKKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Louise!!!!!!

*Hugs*

xxx

i know it was scary i wouldn't have liked to be there

i'm very dissopinted in him

Beth

*Hugs*


i hope they Make up!

xxx

me to!!

it won't be nice if they're not together

i'll post the next bit for you