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yeah i was planning on putting you in otherwise they're having no food and drink
 
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i'm on page 3 literaly as well
 
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Jacqui came into Il Nosh to work her shift and spotted John-Paul and Kieron holding hands. John-Paul sees her heading for their table and doesn’t like the look on her face. “Are you going out with the priest?” she whispers in his ear the tone she uses makes him think twice about telling her instead he stands up and turns to the rest of the restaurant and pulls Kieron out of his chair “I’m going out with a priest is everyone happy now? You can all stop staring like we’re a freak show”
“You think you’re the freak show look at who you’re dinning with” someone heckled from the back of the restaurant. Annie came over with their drinks, as Kieron pushed John-Paul back into his seat.
“See this is what I have to put up with” Kris said to Arielle
“But I don’t care it’s you I’m after, I don’t care what comes with you” she said and kissed his hand. “That’s a pint for you sir, and a glass of wine for Madame”
“Thank you Annie”
“Can I take you order?” Annie asked
“I’ll have linguine el pesto” Arielle said
“We’ll have the calzone pizza” Kieron said
“Is that one or two sir?” Annie asked
“Two”
“And what will sir be having?” she asked Kris
“Chicken scarpariello please”. Annie went back to the kitchen.

and i'm still the only person on page 3
 
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More soon!


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woo!!!!!!!!

Nikki has joined me on page 3
 
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Kris was hurt by what the people had said about him and didn’t want them to hurt Arielle as well, he’d grown used to it over the years, maybe starting a relationship with her wasn’t the best of ideas not that he knew if that was what she wanted. He knew he loved her only at least he thought he did, he couldn’t stop thinking about her, he wanted to protect her and make her feel safe and if the only way to do that was to be without her then he would be without her. She held his hand she could see he was worrying about something and wanted to let him know she cared, she looked at Kieron maybe he knew what was up with Kris but he was too busy staring into John-Paul’s eyes to notice anyone around them, she drank her wine as there was nothing else she could if no one was willing to talk. She saw Annie heading to their towards them with some food she hoped it was theirs then they would be an excuse for the silence, maybe tonight hadn’t been a good idea,
“Calzone pizza” Annie said
“The love birds on the left of me” Arielle told her, Annie placed the plates in front of them and went to get the rest of the order.
“You were the linguine el pesto?” Annie asks Arielle
“Yes, thanks” Annie put the bowl in front of her and the plate in front of Kris before heading off sharply. Arielle dug straight in the sooner she was out of her the better, instead of being a great night it was turning out awful, she may as well have come on her own.
 
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Really good

More soon!!!!!!!!
 
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ive just caught up brillant updates beth
 
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thanks guys!!!!!!!!
 
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Brilliant Beth!


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Any updates today ?
 
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No not today Nikki
Probably tomorrow seing as i've finished school
 
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No not today Nikki
Probably tomorrow seing as i've finished school




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Ok

can't wait 4 2morrow!!!!!!!!
 
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Arielle finished her pasta and left the restaurant, she couldn’t cope with being in there not when, Kris seemed to be avoiding her, what had she done wrong? She couldn’t answer she wasn’t aware of having done anything. She heard footsteps behind her, was someone following her? It was probably someone minding their own business, she started to fiddle with the rings on her hand when she felt someone sit next to her. “What’s wrong?” she could tell it was Kris from the sound of his voice she snuggled up to him and held his hand. She decided to be honest with him “it’s just you, I don’t know what you want. You’ve confused me one minute you’re all over me the next you’re leaving me with no explanation”
“It’s just those people in the restaurant, I get that all them time and I don’t want them to hurt you too”
“Those people don’t know you, they don’t know that you’re a loving, kind person, all they see is a man dressed in women’s clothing not the real man beneath the clothes, they will only hurt me if they hurt you, so they will always hurt me but it doesn’t bother me”
“I love you” Kris told her “come back to halls with me” he took her hand and lead her back to halls.
 
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“I love you” Kris told her “come back to halls with me” he took her hand and lead her back to halls.



awww! Hug


More soon!!!!!!!
 
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great update beth hope to read more soon
 
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They try and get through the door of halls at the same time and fall through they land on the floor, Kris is on top of Arielle and kisses her sweet and passionate, Arielle pushes him off and heads to the bathroom, she comes out in her jade lingerie and drags Kris into his room. In his room Arielle teases him, she pulls him onto the bed and starts to undress him.

Kieron and John-Paul are sat in Il Nosh staring into each others eyes when Annie comes up to the table “Please can you pay the bill and leave, we are closing” Kieron stands up and goes to the bar. John-Paul follows and takes Kierons coat with him. They head back to John-Paul’s when they reach the house they are unable to keep their hands off each other.
 
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loved it beth ppms
 
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Thanks Michelle
 
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Back at halls Kris heads into the kitchen and takes the bottle of wine from the fridge and two glasses from the cupboard and takes it back to his room. He was exhausted but it was worth it Arielle was one hell of a beauty, he knew he was lucky and wasn’t wasting anytime. In the bedroom Arielle was lead across the bed seductively Kris but the wine down and was straight back into bed he just couldn’t help himself, she was so desirable and he had to have her.

Kieron and John-Paul where caught unaware by Michaela coming in from having snuck out. They both turned round and tried to cover their indecency with each others clothing. Michaela just gave them a look of disgust and went upstairs. Kieron couldn’t help himself from laughing the look on John-Paul’s face was one of horror, he dropped the clothing and wound his arm’s round John-Paul.
 
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great update beth ppms
 
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Arielle woke up it was 7o’clock she left Kris and snuck out of bed she left a note by his mobile and picked her clothes up off the floor. She tiptoed across to the bathroom and got dressed she washed her face and went back to the McQueen’s. She entered the lounge and saw Kieron and John-Paul asleep on the sofa, she woke Kieron and told him the time “Kie it’s quarter past seven, the others will be up soon” Kieron kissed John-Paul on the neck in the hope it would wake him up as usual. John-Paul turned his head round and smiled at Kieron “we have to move it’s quarter past seven, you don’t want the rest of your family to catch us as well do you?” he asked John-Paul reached about for some clothes Arielle was about to pass him his shirt from last night when the doorbell rang she went and answered the door it was Kris he walked in and saw Kieron and John-Paul “couldn’t make it to the bedroom then I see” he commented before kissing Arielle. Kieron managed to find his jeans and put them on he looked round for John-Paul’s and found them by the kitchen he threw them at John-Paul and put the kettle on. Arielle went upstairs and grabbed Rupert from the bed and brought him downstairs.
 
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im little bit more happier please update soon
 
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just writting more
 
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aww, but I love this Big Grin Clapping
 
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When she came down the boys were sat at the breakfast bar with their drinks and chatting about the football game on the television the evening before which they had missed due to their night out and the passion that had followed afterwards. Arielle sat Rupert on the breakfast bar between the boys “look after him while I get changed” Arielle headed upstairs for a shower. Kris just looked at Rupert he wasn’t quite sure what to do “you didn’t manage to watch the football did you?” he asked him Rupert just pointed at Kris and laughed “I’ll take that as a no then” Kieron took