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hi im doing a new fanfic about well read the title lol
the love triangle consists of - elliot,jess and kris (just an idea i came up with lol)
the love square consists of - jacqui tony carmel and aleksander

hope you enjoy it!



jess had finally come to her senses and found the man of her dreams. elliot. she lay in bed with him one hand delicately placed on his muscular chest (lol). they slept together last night and she decided to get over kris. he was currently seeing no one only the one off time he saw nathan. but that was just for sex. she thought back to the the night they just had.


Flashback

Jess,kris,zoe and nathan was sat in the SU bar. kris and jess was arguing like usual. but this time it was different there was harsh insults sprouting out of kris's mouth not joking ones. he also kept boasting about his relationship with nathan which was really p i s sing her off.
jess: you two really make me sick whod be jealous of gays
kris: you
jess: i dont think so ur the only gay in belfast.
kris: your just upset because no one likes you cos you hideous the only people that would go near you would be blind or deaf people and they would still wear protective clothing.
jess looked at him and anger filled her up quickly. her eyes were full of hatred
jess: well ur just a stupid tranny who no one cares about - apart from that gay b*stard your cuddling up to. i hate you kris i truly hate you
she stormed off leaving a hurt kris.
she ran out of SU crying and ran to halls of residence.
it was raining and she slid down the door. she noticed a figure standing beside her. it was elliot.
elliot: jessica are you ok?
jess: no
they went into halls of residence and sat on the sofa
elliot: was it kris
jess: yes
she cuddled up to elliot. she had been liking elliot more and more these past few days. he had always been there for her and wasnt like mongy kris. she lifted her head and kissed him one on the lips. she pulled away and elliot looked gobsmacked.
jess: im sorry elliot i dont no wot came ove...
b4 she could finish he pulled her him and snogged her passionately.jess was impressed he was a good kisser. he started unbuttoning her blouse and led her to her bedroom. he stopped outside the door.
elliot: are you sure this is what you want
jess: yep positive
he started kissing her again. it was wierd because she wasnt doing it to get bak at kris or make him jealous. she liked him. suddenly they went in the bedroom and clo
sed the door behind them. im sure you no wot happens next ....

Ends flashback

jess looked over at elliot. he had woken. elliot was still suprised jess had got with him. he looked at her and smiled.
elliot: hello
jess: hi ... elliot can i tell you something
elliot looked worried: yep
jess: you no what we did last night dont think it is because im tryin to make kris jealous cos id never do that to you. im with you because i like you.
elliot: oh ok
jess smiled
jess: come on then you we better go get some breakfast.
jess and elliot walked out to find zoe gobsmacked looking at them both.
she mouthed to jess: you and elliot?!
jess nodded.
zoe looked shocked and made them both a cuppa.
jess cuddled up to elliot on the sofa and kris came out of his bedroom.
kris walked past half asleep then suddenly opened his eyes and shook his head when he walked past elliot and jess. he turned to zoe and whispered: jess and elliot god the snob meets alien boy.
zoe turned towards the sink and started laughing.
kris: so u two a couple then, god help you if ur with jess she is a right snob
jess just ignored him. he kept firing insults but jess wouldn't answer
kris: god jess your being a rite spoilt brat.
she stood up and walked to her room not soon after being followed by elliot.


jacqui had been away for the night. no guess were she would of been. at tony's.she woke up and looked over at him. he was alredy awake. he was lookin down at her smiling. even after all they had been through with jail,mandy and now this. 2 years they had to wait before they could get things back to normal again.
tony: so u finally woke up then
jacqui: well a certain someone kept me awake
tony: by doing what
jacqui raised her perfectly plucked eyebrows.
jacqui: do i really have to say
tony: no but you can show me i forgot
she sighed then smiled
she pulled the covers over their head and you know what happens

meanwhile back at the mcqueens household everyone was out apart from aleksander and carmel. they was watching pinocheo (i think thats how u spel it that film wid the wooden boy whos nose grew when he lied)
carmel was crying
aleksander: whats the matter
carmel: he only wanted to be a real boy!
he pulled her in and cuddled her.
she looked at him and they shared strong eye contact. they leaned into kiss but they heard keys rattle in the door.
they sprung apart when myra walked through the door.
myra: just dropping my shopping off
carmel: um....
aleksander: er.....
at the same time: ok then
myra looked at them oddly and walked back out of the door. when they had gone carmel snuggled back into aleksander.
 
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V. different and v.good Smile


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hehe thnx
 
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more more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


thank god kress is nearly back on cant wait for easter ball!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
#1 and founda of the thick club
im gettin married im ingaged
yayyy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my baby fiance valentino i luv him to bits
franny omg that was the funniest moment of hollyoaks ever i nearly wet myself laughfin
 
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This IS Really Good You Doing More?
 
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ye but not now it took me ages to do that i got long false nails on.........glad ur enjoyin it ...... ill do some more later on
 
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