“you should go”
“excuse me?”
“GO!”
nancy dean hayton couldn’t believe what shed just done.her.justin.bed.
“nancy,I-”
“just go Justin!”she stormed away,and into the bathroom,slamming the door behind her
“nancy?!”Justin called
“GOODBYE JUSTIN!”she shouted
Justin stood in nancys bedroom confused.he quickly got dressed,and then made his way round to the bathroom door.he tapped in gently
“nancy.nancy what have I done?please nanc.”he asked
“just go Justin.just go”nancy answered.she was on the toilet seat crying
“but nancy.I don’t get it.please.”Justin asked through the door,confused
“jake.you.working my way through beccas cast offs arent I!”
“nanc….its not like that,you know it!”
Nancy opened the door,her face covered in mascara
“really?nancy hayton,just a copy-cat of her sister that cant quite fill the shoes”
“….nancy,come on-”
“just leave it jay.go back to katy.today didn’t happen”nancy started to shut the bathroom door again,but he quickly put his foot in the door
“but it did nancy.you cant change that”
“unfortunately,no.now please Justin,please can you just leave me alone”she shoved the door hard,forcing the justins foot out
“nancy….”
“Justin please….and I don’t want to see you at the hospital!”
“what?!nancy!that’s totally unreasonable!!”Justin fued
“no its not!you’ve had nothing to do with Charlie this far,we don’t need you now!”she shouted
“oh yeah right!apart from,to be a donor in order for him to have a chance of having a life!”Justin argued outraged.
“….Justin,I-”nancy heard the front door slam.she shook her head.“nancy you moron!”she thought

~~~~~meanwhile~~~~~

“katy,I cant keep doing this.justins me mate,and I feel awful doing this.”
“YOU feel awful!”katy argued,putting her top back on. “hes my boyfriend and im cheating on him when he needs me the most.your just a drinking buddy,and he always has danny for that!”she picked up her skirt and stormed out of zaks room,slammiing the door behind her,and into hers,slamming that as well.
Zak put his face in his hands and fell back onto his bed. “zachary ramsey you are one prize idiot!”

Dingding1's is better,but i'd already started writing it!

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awww,thankies!!

just a short lil bit:

Justin ran back towards halls. “how could I cheat on katy?I love her.I love her more then anything.I cant imagine my life without her.shed never cheat on me.how could I be so stupid?!”Justin ran straight through halls door,ran down the corridor,and burst into katys room
“katy I love you so much and I am so sorry for everything you’ve had to put up with the past few weeks.I promise that in a….whats going on?”Justin asked confused.katy was huddled in her duvet,sat against the wall,crying
“jay,im so sorry”she whispered
“what?why?whats wrong?”he asked puzzled,walking over to the bed.he put her arm around her and pulled her close.she could her his heart beating.
“im such a bitch”she said even quieter
“what?hey!look at me!”he cupped his hands around her face,and moved her face to look at her. “you are the most amazing person ive ever met.I couldn’t live without you.I couldn’t have coped these past few weeks without you.I love you so much that it hurts.that doesn’t sound like a bitch to me.you’re my princess.”he kissed her forehead.katy burst into tears
“I love you too”she whispered back
"then marry me"he blurted out
"what?"she asked,stunned
"what?"he asked,confused by what hed just said
"marry you?"she asked
"uhh....i think so....yeah.marry me katy.if you lve me as much as i love you then itll be amazing.marry me.be mrs katy burton"
katy sat,stunned
"you know what,forget it.it was stupid.ignore me,im sorry,im just so scared of losing you that i-"
"yes"she said
"what?"he asked
"yes.ill marry you!"
"oh my-thats fantastic!"he kissed her,and they both started crying,while zak shed a tear from behind the door.hed lost her

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Originally posted by Charrlie!:
Wow. wasnt expecting that! Cant wait for more
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lol thanks,i think (<-ive never used that one!) ill write more soon,but babylons on-my other addiction!!

I was so not expecting that!! poor Zak!!

this is a bit,meh,but babylons on,so its not my best!lol

2 weeks later:

Justin was walking through the halls corridor,towards the flat,when he heard raised voices
“look,all I was saying was that I felt guilty.that’s all”zak defended himself
“but you don’t seem to understand that they position im in is worse then yours.justins my boyfriend,no,scrap that-hes my fiancé”
“and hes one of my best mates”
“really?that’s not generally the behaviour of a best mate!”
“and that’s not really the behaviour of a girlfriend,sorry,fiancée!”
“what?twist what I say back onto me?cheap!”
“it’s the truth katy”
“truth hurts”she whispered,a tear running from the corner of her eye,running into her room
“katy?!”zak called. “katy,I don’t understand” zak wasn’t the only one.justin entered halls after listening, and acted dumb
“whats wrong with katy?”justinn asked
“no idea mate.we were talking,and then she got all huffy and we had an argument….but im not sure why”
Justin believed him,after all,it was the truth.
“im going to go see if shes okay”
“yeah,you do that mate.and can you also ask her what ive done wrong while your there?”zak called after him
“will do mate!”Justin answered,giving him the thumbs up.he knocked on katys door
“katy?katy babe,are you okay?katy?…listen,I was thinking we could tell warren today…katy?katy im coming in…”justin opened the bedroom door,where he saw katy,huddled in her duvet,on her bed,in the same spot where she was 2 weeks ago.
“katy,whats wrong?zak doesn’t understand what hes done.whats he done babe.has he upset you?”Justin put his arm around her,but she shrugged him off
“go Justin”
“wha-excuse me?”he asked,taken aback
“I need to think”
“think?about what?….don’t you want to marry me,cuz if its moving to fast that’s fine babe.I don’t want to rush you-”
“of course I want to marry you”katy interrupted. “I just have other stuff going on”
“then tell me”Justin told her
“I cant…”
“you can…if we’re getting married we should be able to tell each other everything”
“you’ve got Charlie to worry about.this is silly stuff.exam worries”
“are you sure babe?is….is it because your not ready to be charlies step-mum,then that’s fine…ill…ill cut him out of my life for you-”
“no jay,its not that.I cant wait to be charlies step-mum.its exam stress.really.please.im fine.please.go visit charlie..ill call you later
“okay…okay,ill see you later,yeah”he moved into kiss her,but she moved away.Justin,hurt,decided to leave her to it. “probably PMT” he thought.

shall i continue?

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Yes!

had a bit of a block,so moved on slightly,but kinda stood still if ya get me?

“did you say something to katy?”Justin asked zak after leaving katys room
“I told you mate,we were talking,then we argued,then she stormed off when I said to her what she said to me.I don’t understand.”said zak,looking up from a magazine
“I heard you”Justin told him
“what?you did?ah,how much mate?”zak put his hand on his forehead
“enough”
“aww,mate.im so sorry”zak moved his head down to cover his eyes,rubbing his temples
“listen,I don’t know what happened,and you know what,I don’t care,all I want to know,is why you both feel guilty.”zak took his hand away from his face
“you what mate?”zak asked confused
“you heard!why are you both so guilty?”Justin demanded
“ahhhh,well….she just feels guilty that she cant be there for you like you need her.she doesn’t knowhow to help you.I feel guilty that I seem to always be complaining about my problems when yours are so much bigger.know what I mean?”zak said convincingly
“….okay mate.its just….you know what im like”Justin replied,walking towards the front door
“of course.don’t worry about it”zak slapped his mates shoulder. “im off for a shower.you going to see in Charlie?”zak asked
“yeah….telling him more about his AMAZING step-mum-to-be”Justin answered,heading for the door
“ey….you do that.how is he?”zak asked,trying to move the subject away from his relationship with katy
“hes….the same.it kills me that I cant do anything for him zak.I love him so much.I just don’t know what I can do to help”Justin replied,holding the door handle
“hell be fine mate.hes in the best place he can be right now.ell be fine.you’ll see it”zak reassured him
“yeah….lets hope so”Justin agreed,looking at the floor
“he will,you see.now-shower!”zak started making his way towards
Justin opened the front door,before stopping himself
“zak!”
“what mate?come on cuz I really need me shower!”zak walked back.Justin rubbed his head
“will you be me best man?”Justin asked,not looking at him
“what?me?”zak asked,confused
“well yeah.I mean,danny….well,you know danny,but I feel you and me….we get on better.got closer recently….danny would probably try it on with katy at the reception!!”Justin joked
“yeah….”zak laughed nervously. “uhh….yeah….course I will….”
“really?great!thanks!”a grin came across justins,like a child with a sweet,and he bounced out of halls.zak made his way towards his room,hitting himself around his head repeatedly with his magazine

anymore tonight ?

sorry!i had an early night,so i didnt catch that post otherwise i would have!!so here ya go,not good cuz i have to shoot!!lol

Justin was standing,looking through charlies hospital window.
“your so blind Justin!”a familiar voice said
“excuse me?!”Justin turned around,but there was no-one there
“im in your head!”she shouted
“mel?sophie?”he asked
“sophie.she needs you Justin.they both do.they have secrets.your in some.some will destroy you.go to them”sophie said
“whatever.this is lack of sleep!I don’t need this today!”he told himself
“Justin,when have I ever lied to you?”she asked
“the day you died when you said youd be okay!!this is all in my head,im being paranoid.im imagining your voice.now if you don’t mind,I need to see my son!”Justin walked into the room
“hey mate.how you doing today?your step mummy is going to see you very soon.I love you know.if you hated her…I….I think id die.I love you both so much.your both my world.one day….she may give you your own brother or sister.although….you’ll never have a proper brother or proper sister….and I will sorry for that for the rest of my life.I love you so much,and if I could turn back time….well,katy might not be an issue and-”
“what are you doing here?”nancy asked crossly
“im here to see Charlie”Justin answered,not looking at her
“I asked you not to”nancy stared at him
“well I don’t care!im here now!im in his life and here to stay!”Justin argued
“we don’t need you.after the case,and transplant,your gone.were gone.Canada with mum.”
“what?nancy that’s completely unreasonable!!i want to be in his life!!”Justin argued
“well I don’t want you to be!”nancy told him bluntly
“fine.then your on your own.after the transplant,im going for custody.there is NO way,im doing this for your you,for you to then cut me out!you cant have it all!!”Justin flug himself out of the door
“justin!”nancy shouted “damn it!”

~~~~~meanwhile~~~~~

Zak was stood on the other side of katys door,knocking
“katy?katy please let me in.come on kate.whats wrong?if itss something ive done,tell me and I can apologize….try and make it up to you.is it cuz I said I feel guilty?I do….but I understand it cant be anything like the guilt you must feel”he was now leaning against the door, which katy opened,making him fall forwards onto the floor
“you have no idea do you?”she shouted,looking down on him,before stepping over him and out of the flat

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<3 justin and nancy <3
<3 lucas and brooke <3
<3 amy and josh <3

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i will soon,but tonight,my heart wouldnt be in it and it would crap it up.sorry guys!

i love it

awww thanks!!
i love yours though.im trying to steer it away from yours so they arent the same or similar :S

anyway,i ended up doing some as it took me mind off life!!not good though,kinda,half hearted:

Nancy was running around hollyoaks,searching franticly for Justin,when she saw katy.,leaving the flat,by the allyway,heading towards drive ‘n‘ buy.“this’ll be awkward”she thought to herself
“hi katy.you seen Justin?”nancy asked,with a fake
“funny.I was just about to ask you that”katy told her
“oh”nancy muttered
“he sees more of you then me.maybe you should be his fiancee?!”katy tried to joke
“fiancee?!”nancy stuttered,shocked
“well,….yeah….he proposed a few weeks ago after spending the night at the hospital with you and Charlie.you helped him clear his head and know what he really wants”katy muttered
“really?”nancy asked,surprised how convincing a liar Justin must be
“yeah,he said the other day that’s why he asked me….you helped him,without meaning to”katy replied
“you sound like your guilty of something katy”nancy told her. Katy shuffled past
“is that so?well id love to enterain your thoughts nancy,but I need to find my fiancee”
“itll eat you up katy”nancy called.katy stopped in her tracks,but didn’t face her. “itll eat you up inside,and destroy you and everyone else whos affected,and will make you feel worthless.ask Justin.hes an expert”nancy finished,before heading towards her flat,and katy turned around
“and how would you know then nancy?got a secret youd care to share?”katy bitched
“I shouldn’t have to.Justin should have already!”nancy smirked,before slamming the flat door.a confused katy got her phone out of her bag, and headed towards halls instead