I want to do one with justin and hannah getting together but im not good so if anyone wants to steal my idea pleasee reply x

Justin and katy had been going out for a full year and he thoguth it was ment to be.He was happy with her and wanted to get a place with her but she insisted on staying in the halls with zak because she said he was lonely.Zak and katy were spending more and more time together but Justin thought nothing of it.It was a couple od days before valentines day so justin was out shopping getting Katy her gift she said she was going to see warren.Justin told her he would be back around 5 but decided to surprise her bu going home at 4.He walked in and seen clothes everywere leading up to Katys room Justin walked in and dropped the bag with what he saw Katy on top of Zak.Justin pulled katy of him and started punching Zak until Katy managed to get him off.

Justin:How long has it been going on?

Katy:3 months

J:why did you do this to me we were happy

K:i know i never wanted to hurt you pleasee Justin I love you

J:No you don't you have been taking me for a fool

He starts to throw things He hands katy an engagment ring

J:I hope you and Zak are happy together

He storms out.Katy falls to the ground sobbing she can't believe justin was going to propose

Just a short one

love da start and welcome to the forums!

It was a day before valentines day but Justin was heartbroken.He kept thinking why did she do this there was no reason.He had been a bit pre ocupied helping nancy get custody of charlie.It was around 12o'clock and the village was deserted all apart from someone sitting sobbing at the fountain.

Justin goes to see who it is.

J:Hannah are you ok

H:danny finished with me again but this time it hink its for good.

justin puts his arm around her.

J:would you like to come for a drink at my mates hes on holiday im watching the place.

H:yeah sure.

she puts her arms around his waist as they are walking.

justin gets them a bottle of red wine.

J:do you know why he did it

H:who danny, no he does what he likes remember.

J:don't worry you's will get back together.

H:i don't want to anymore he has finished it one to many times.We're done.Anyway why are you not with katy

J:were finished she was cheating on me with zak(justin wipes a tear away).

Hh im so sorry(she gives him a hug but suddenly she gets feelings in her tummy that she only felt with john paul like she doesn't want to let go but she does).

Hannah stays silent for a little while she is confused she doesn't know how they feelings just appeared.

They are sitting on the couch next to each other listening to music.A song comes on the hannah loves but justin hates but hannah has the control.

J:turn it over

H:no i like it (she has a smirk on her face)

Jjustin laughs)give me the control then

H:no you will have to come and get it

J:right you asked for it

justin climbs over her but she extends her arm.they fall of the couch but hannah lands on top if justin.they look into each tohers eyes and justin leans in for a kiss they start to kiss. but hannah pulls away.

H:ive got to go sorry

J:hannah wait

but she is already out the door.

Hannah could'nt stop thunking about that kiss.she was lying on her bed but Beth could tell something was wrong.

B:whats wrong hannah

H:well emm i kissed justin tonight

B:really omg did you want to

H:yeah but i rushed out straight after it im not ready i dont think.

B:well talk to him about it tomorrow see how he feels ok

H:yeah ok and beth dont tell rhys

Bk i promise i wont.

the next day hannah was watching the shop when justin came in.

J:hannah about last night we need to talk

hannah turns her back.

J:hannah pleasee(he grabs her arm to turn her around)

H:look last night was a mistake i was confused we don't even like each other like that

Jleasee can we go for a drink later just to talk as friends

H:im not sure

Jleasee nothing will happen

Hk but just as friends

beth walks in

B:whats going on here

H:nothing me and jason were just talking

B:hannah fancy going for drink later

H:emm sure you can join me and justin pleasee

B:emm ok sure you dont want to be alone

J:emm actually i need to talk...

H:[hannha cuts him off] no im sure its fine

J:i better go bye hannah , bye beth

B:bye justin

Hannah didn't say bye just looked as he walked out

B:its obvious he likes you

H:shut up he does not

Bh come on are you saying you don't like him

H:well emm

B:see i knew it ill be there tonight so ill sort this out

LOL! halfway through you changed his name to Jason! LMAO!

i a didny mean that !

justin was already at the table in the su bar when hannah and beth walked in.Hannah looked amazing justin thought but he couldn't bring himself to tell her how he felt.

J:hi hannah you look emmm

B:amazing

J:emm yeah

H:thanks

B:ill get the drinks you wait here with justin

hannah knew she had feelings for him but didn't know if he felt the same.

J:look hannah i need to tell you something

H:me too you go first

J:hannah emm i emm

H:come on spit it out

J:right last nightafter the kiss i couldn't get it out my head

H:justin wait

J:just listen hannah i like you ok there i said it

hannah runs out

J:hannah wait

B:go after her

justin runs out he see's her standing outside it begins to pour down with rain

J:hannah im sorry i thought you felt the same

H:i do but

J:but what

H:it wouldn't work [she turns around to face justin

J:course it would

hannah tries to walk away but justin pulls her back

J: pleasee hannah [wipping the tears of her cheeks]

he puts his hands on her face and suddenly goes in for a kiss they begin to kiss passionately.suddenly justin gets thrown to the ground

H:Rhys no what are you doing

hannah tries to pull rhys of of justin but he continues kicking and punching him until finally beth manages to calm him down.

R;what are you doing with him

hannah doesn't answer she is to busy tending to justin

b:rhys who do you think you are

R:beth wait im sorryy

Ooooh! Very good! I like it!



When will you do more?

Wow this is getting good!

When will you do more?

ill do more later no time just now

Ok!

this is fab xx

I didn't realise that before i wrote 2 comments. I didn't mean to! lol

i will continue tomorrow really busy just now really sorry


Chris fountain to win dancing on ice

It's tomorrow and you still havn't continued! :'(

lmao! Only kidding. not that obsessed.

Hannah didn't want to go back to her house as ryhs was there.she hated him for what he had done to justin.It had only been about 10 minutes since justin had been attacked but he had a smile back on his face.

H:justin ?

J:yeah bab..[he screws his face up and starts gasping for air he falls to the ground]

H:Justin wats wrong are you ok justin talk to me please

Justin stops making wheezing noises and his eyes close

H:JUSTIN [she begins sobbing] Help me someone pleaseee

Tony and jaqui run out from il gnosh

T:is he ok

H:no phone an ambulance pleasee

J:look at the state of him what happened

H:he got beat up

T:who did it

Hannah new she should tell the truth but her brother would go to jail.

H:emm i didn't see i wasn't with him

J:hes only a kid it looks really serious ill phone

when he was getting in the back of the ambulance hannah got in to and jaqui a tony followed in carmels car.

C:wat happened to him jaq

J:got beat up

Ch my god of who

J:emm hannah doesn't know

C:wait are they going out

T:no justin goes out with katie remember

Ch yeah well i think they look good together

J:yeah well not with his face like that [she lets out a little giggle]

C:Jaq! that isn't funny im going to find out who did this to him and put them away.

when they arrived hospital tony hannah jaqui and carmel were in the waiting room when a doctor comes in.

H:Is he ok

D:we managed to get him breathing at a steady rate.Just

H:what is wrong with him

D:when he got beat up his chest got stamped on and he broke a couple of his ribs which punctured his lung

everyone llooks around in shock

Carmel:he will be all right though yeah

D:hard to say just now he has suffered a hell of a beating who ever done this nearly killed him

immeadiately hannah starts sobbing jaqui and carmel hug her

H:its all my fault

J:no it isn't you didn't do this how do you no he didn't deserve it

C:jaq! i bet he didn't hes so sweet

H:no but i should have told you from the start

J:told us what

H:it was Rhys

C:what was hun

H:rhys beat him up

J: Oh my god why

H:because he saw us kissing

C:thought he was going out with Katy

H:no she cheated with zak

C:eww he is ugly compared to him

J:i'm starting to think youv'e got a crush on justin yourself

C:no i havent have i

J:jaqui starts laughing that isn't the point just now since we are not allowed to see justin just now we will go and see rhys

H:im not sur..

C:come on babe were going

as they walk out hannah knows she has done the right thing

Ooooh! Rhys what have you done!? I hope Justin gets better

should i stop or continue

continue! lol id never thought of justin and hannah before. ive written a fic but its not as good as this ive only ever done one and no ones replied cos its to long to read lol. but im lovin wat you got

<b>thanks i wil continue tomorrow

should i write more tonight or not