This is my first fic so please don't be too harsh on this. All comment are welcomed!
Warren was not sent down for Clare's murder, although it still remains a mystery who did it, and t's now mainly pointing at Calvin. Sean has since been found alive, but has not been seen since, so it is a mystery to where he has now gone. **************** At the Valentine's
Louise looked at Calvin, thinking could she really spend the rest of her life with this one person? Did she really love him? Deep down she knew she didn't, and she loved someone else, who was always there for her, no matter what happened,ad he had always loved her since he first laid eyes on her.
Calvin : Hey honeu. Sorry but I've gotta go see Sonny this week in Devon. He's got himself into trouble again.
Louise : Ok, fine. I'll see you soon. I need t get off to Evissa anyway.
Louise quickly hugged Calvin and made a sharp exit out of the flat. She stopped on the steps and thought to herself 'I have to stop living this lie. I don't love him anymore'.
This is all I have time for now. I promise there will be more tomorrow morning. Comments please!
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
Ok, This bit is a lot longer than i thought it would be, so bear with me here. ***************************************
-In Evissa- Louise enters - Carmel is already here
Louise : Hey Carmel
Carmel : Hey Louise. I've got great news.
Louise : Ok, that's great. Hang on a mo - How come you're earlier than me today?
Carmel : Dunno. Anyway guess what?
Louise Hmm, (thinks for a mo), No idea, I give up!
Carmel : Well you can't tell my mum because she will go mad at me. Ook, here goes, I'm pregnant, and yes Alek is the father.
Louise : Wow! I can't believe it! Congratulations!
Warren Enters#
Warren : What's all this fuss about?
Louise : Umm, nothing. Carmel can i speak to you in my office please?
Carmel : Yep, sure (goes into office)
Louise looks at Warren guiltily and follows Carmel into the office
Louise : Look Carmel, I know you're pregnant and all that, but please don't say anything babywise to Warren.
Carmel : Okay. Umm Why not?
Louise : *Sighs Because Warren and I have not spoken to each other since I aborted what could have been his baby
Carmel : Ok, I'll try to keep my mouth shut.
Louise : Good, thanks. You can take the rest of the day off.I can do the rest by myself.
Carmel : Aww, thanks honey! Okay, see you later. (Leaves Evissa)
Louise walks into the main part of Evissa, and goes over to counter. Warren walks over to where Louise is and looks at her.
Warren : What is this between us? Why aren't you speaking to me?
Louise : I didn't think you wanted to speak to me. Especially after what I've done.
Warren : Yes, but I forgive you for that, and everything else.
Louise : Why though? I'm horrible to you, I aborted what could've been you're baby, I-
Warren: Because I love you Lou.
Louise looks at him cautiously, beofre Waren leans over anad kisses her. Louise pulls away, leving Warren looking a bit concerned to what would happen next, but suddenly Louise kissed back Warren then walked around the counter and pushes her against the wall, kissing her as doing so. They both went in to the office and...I'll leave it to your imagination here
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
I'll try to have some more up tonight. I'm a bit busy at the mo.
Comments accepted on this
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
Louise woke up next to Warren with a smile on her face. She was smiling, but in her head all she was thinking was about how Calvin would react to this
Louise: Morning you.
Warren: Same back to you.
Louise: Last night was fantastic.
Warren: I think it was a bit more than that.
Louise: I know. Babe,I need you to help me with something.
Warren: Of course I will. You know I'll help you with anything.
Louise: I need you to help me break up with Calvin. I don't love him anymore.
Warren: Ah, thank god, at last you see sense.
Louise: Excuse me? Are you calling me stupid?
Warren: No,no, I was only joking...
Warren kissed Louise on her forehead and went off to have a shower. Louise sat up in bed, thinking about how she was going to break up with Calvin. Little did she know of the disastrous results that would happen to her.
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
-The Valentine's house' It had now been a week since Calvin had left to go to see Sonny, and he was due back today. Today was also the day Louise was planning on leaving him.
Calvin came home, only to see that the house was empty. He guessed that Leo was at the pub, like usual, and realised Sasha was still on holiday with Michaela.
Calvin: Louise?...Lou?
There was a sudden knock at the door; Calvin opened ito see Louise and Warren standing outside the door. Calvin let them both in knowing there was going to be trouble if Warren was here.
Louise: Calvin,sit down. Look, since you've been away, my feelings have changed for you.
Calvin: Huh? Wha-What do you mean?
Louise: I'm sorry. I don't love you anymore.
Calvin:...Then..Who do you lo-...(realises it' Warren)Oh, my- That is sick! You're a stupid, sick-minded-
Out of nowhere Calvin is punched by Warren, and falls back down to the floor.
Warren: Listen, you. You call her anything like that again, and I'm gonna make your life a living hell.
Louise: I'm so sorry Calvin.
Warren: Come on Lou, let's go.
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
Ok, here's the next bit. Sorry to kept you waiting.
It had now been a month since Louise had broken up with Calvin, but Cavin had other ideas to get revenge on Louise. Unluckily for her, she had no idea what was coming her way.
It was around four in the afternoon when Louise locked up Evissa, but she went over to Drive 'n' Buy to get some food to make dinner for Warren and herself.
Once she had finished in the shop, she headed back over to the flat.She had only started to go over when a hoodie came up to her, and started blocking her pathway.
Louise: What are you doing? Get out of my way!
The hoodie came up close to her and shoved her hard and she fell to the floor. He kicked her stomach, and her legs, leaving her there on the floor. He pulled her back up to make her stand up. He was right up to her, and the next thing she knew, she gasped for breath and looked down to her stomach, to see blood pouring out. The hoodie had stabbed her, he then ran off, leaving Louise to collapse onto the floor in a pool of her blood.
Would this the end for Louise?
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
Ok...Here's the next bit. Sorry to keep you waiting.
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Louise was still lying on the floor, hoping that someone would see her. She could make out OB in the distance, and tried to call out to him, but no sound came out. It was about after five minutes that OB saw a limp body on the floor in the distance. When he got there, he was shocked at who it was.
Ob couldn't let Louise die, not in a lifetime. He had already lost Mel, he couldn't lose Louise as well. OB called an ambulance, and he tried to phone Warren, but his phone died just as it started to ring.
OB: Louise, I'm coming with you, but Warren is the one who needs to be with you.
OB: I will, I will, when we get you to the hospital. My phone's dead, god dammit stupid thing..
The ambulance sped off to the hospital, with Louise becoming slowly unconcious, and desperately clinging on to OB's hand.
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Next time: Louise has a narrow escape from death Will Warren make it in time?
You'll have to wait till next time.
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
Ok....Will have the next bit up by this evening. I'm suppose to be at work at the mo, but I've gotta break so I've gone to the library. I promise that there will be some up later.
By the way, Louise doesn't know that Calvin was the one who stabbed her...I'm not gonna say who it is...but you'll probably figure it out....
Anyway, later on in the story, Louise will find out that Warren killed Sean, and Calvin tries to kill Louise again....
Kress - Don't cry because it's over, Smile because it happened. Men are here. We make fire. Cook meat. Then put out fire by peeing, no get invited back. Just Georgia. Holly. Caitlin. Lucy. Forum Buddies. Ly x
Ok, sorry abut the wait- my computer completely crashed over the weekend. Here it is
-Hospital- OB kept trying to get throught to Warren but he couldn't get hold of him so he used Louise's phone instead. On the fourth ring Warren finally picked up. Warren: Hey babe, where are you?
OB: Umm, this is OB
Warren: Oh, What are you doing with Louise's phone?
OB: Never mind that. Listen, you need to come to the hospital now.
Warren: What? Why?
OB: Louise's been attacked and she was left for dead.
Warren: Ok, I'm coming. Just stay there.
OB: Fine, whatever.(hangs up)
OB heads back to Louise's room where a nurse is checking her over. OB sat down next to her, and placed the flowers on the table, whih he had bought for her.
Nurse: Are you her boyriend?
OB: Huh? No, no I'm not. I'm just a friend, I hope. Her boyfriend's on his way.
Nurse: I reckon you are a friend to her. You saved her life. If she had been leftany longer she would've died.
Warren quietly enters, but goes over and sits next to Louise.
Warren: Thanks for bringing her here.
OB: Well, I couldn't let her die, not after...
Warren: Mel?
OB: mmm...Do you want me to give you some time with her?
Warren: Yeah, please.
OB exits and Nurse comes back in
Nurse: Now please tell me you're her boyfriend.
Warren: Yes, Why do you need to know?
Nurse: Ok, well, the next 24 hours are crucial for Ms.Summers. We need to keep a close eye on her.
Warren: What? How big are her chances of suvival?
Nurse: We're not sure at the moment, but we need you to be prepared for the worst.
Warren: Umm...Ok...
Nurse: There's something else you need to know. Before she was attacked, she was pregnant, but-
Warren: Excuse me? She was?
Nurse: Yes, but the seriousness of the attack caused her to have a miscarriage.
Warren: ...Oh...I didn't even know she was pregnant.
Nurse: I'll give you some time with her and I'll be back later.
Nurse exits.
Warren sits down again, looking at Louise, thinking about all their memories, when they first met in Ibiza, things like that. His life would be a nightmare without her. Only Louise and Katy kept Warren going, but just Katy wasn't going to be enough.
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That's all for now, but there will be more up this afternoon.
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