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When Dave's wife, Julie was sent to prison for trying to kill her lover he decided that it would be best for him and his kids to move, a fresh start. He has 4 kids, Melissa who is 19, Nicole who is 17 and twins Danny and Jack who are 16. When he told them they where moving Melissa and Nicole werent happy as they were worried about there exams. The boys on the other hand were excited. After searching for days for the perfect house for him and his family he found one in Hollyoaks and he decided this was the place for the family to begin their new lives. But whould everthing be a simple as he thought????


Does any1 want me to carry on??????


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♫Croke Park Was Amazing!!!!!!!!

10 More Years please Westlife xxxx ♫


 
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Ohh Love it!!
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what storylines will this involve? ust out of curiosity, or is tis just a family story?

cant wait to read it!
 
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A bit of McDean and Kress and other things 2!!


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♫Croke Park Was Amazing!!!!!!!!

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The Chapters ive got planned so far and which Character are involved!


1. Starting over and Trying to fit in

2. A New Romance (Gilly and Rhys)

3. Getting In to Trouble (Wayne and Sonny)

4. Nicoles 18th Birthday Party (Rhys and Gilly)

5. I Like You But Do You Like Me! (Michaela, Sasha, Amy, Josh)

6. Feeling Left Out (Craig, Sarah, Jp)


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♫Croke Park Was Amazing!!!!!!!!

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sounds good! cant wait for chapter 6 lol!
 
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brill you must continue Big Grin
 
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Starting Over and Trying To Fit In - Part 1

They family had just moved in and where unpacking when Melissa went to Nicole and asked her if she wanted to go for a walk about, Nicole sighed and agreed.

Melissa: Daid is it ok if me and Nic go out?
Dave: Yes but no drinking Nicole, remember your not old enough yet!
Meliss and Nicole: Ok Dad See you later

As the girls made there way in to the village they bumped in to a guy and asked him where the nearest pub was and he offered to take them as he was heading there anyway

Gilly: Hiya im Gilly, you new round here?
Melissa: Hi im Melissa and this is Nicole. We've just moved today and wanted to get out of helping unpack.
Gilly: Cool, Well we are nearly there
Nicole: Thanks

In the Dog Melissa went to the bar and asked 2 white wines, from the bar man who she thought was quite sleazy as he keep looking at her.

Darren: You new round here?
Melissa: Yes, we've just moved
Darren: Well im Darren Manger of this place
Steph: Shit Darren, Just ignore him, he isnt the manager in here he just says that to make you think he's cool
Melissa: I wouldnt have thought he was cool , manager or not

All threee girls laughed as Darren walked of in sulk.

Steph: Im Steph by the way
Melissa: Im Melissa
Nicole: And Im Nicole
Steph: Nice to meet you.

Nicole: You fancy a game of pool, Mel
Melissa: Sure

As they where playing pool Gilly and Rhys had come over to talk, Melissa really like Gilly, he was cute she thought to her self as Rhys tried chatting her up, she was in a daze

Rhys: So do you fancy going for a drink tomoro, just me and you?

Snapping out of her day dream about Gilly she answered yes not realising til Rhys had asked for her mobile number

Melissa: Ok Nicole we better go and help Dad and the twins unpack
Nicole: Ok Bye Guys
Melissa: See You Later
Rhys and Gilly: Bye

After Melissa and Nicole ahd left Rhys was bragging to Darren that he was going on a date with Melissa, which hurt Gilly as he wanted to ask her out, but once again Rhys got the girl


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does any 1 want me to continue???


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10 More Years please Westlife xxxx ♫


 
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yeah please!

am looking forward to reading some more!
 
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sorry i havent done the next part, i tried to yesterday and i couldnt get on Frown


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♫Croke Park Was Amazing!!!!!!!!

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cant wait to read next part xx!


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Starting Over and Trying To Fit In - Part 2

Waking up to the sound of the alarm, Dave frowned as he knew today wasnt going to be easy, it was the Twins and Nicoles first day at Hollyoaks High. First he woke twins, as he knew they would take the longest to get up, he then walked down the hall to Nicole's room to wake her. As they twins fought over the bathroom he went downstairs to make breakfast for everyone.

After breakfast Nicole and the Twins set off for school. Nicole's first class was English, she hated English at her old school mainly because she disliked the teacher, she thought maybe it would be different at this school.

Sonny: All right,sexy
John Paul: Shut it Sonny, are you not meant to be going out with my sister anyway?
Sonny: Ok Gay Boy!
Nicole: Thanks, Im nervous enough without idoits like that
JP: Its ok, Im John Paul by the way, is it ok if i sit with you?
Nicole: Yeah sure.

As Nicole and Jp got to know one another, Sarah and Craig enntered the room, and sat at the table in front of them.

JP: This is Nicole, And this is Craig and Sarah
Nicole: Hiya
Craig and Sarah: Hiya

As they all sat talking away to one another they didnt notice Hannah enter the room, as she made her way to the back off the room she sat next to Sonny.

Hannah: Who's the new girl
Sonny: Dunno, Your gay boyfriend told me to get lost before i could ask
Hannah: Ohh, Ok

As Hannah went into a deep day dream about John Paul, Nancy came up to her and sat down after pushing Sonny away as he annoyed her.

Nancy: Hannah, Hannah are you listening to me
Hannah: Yeah sorry still half asleep
Nancy: Who's the new girl?
Hannah: I dont know do i im sitting up here
Nancy: Sorry, What's up with you
Hannah: Nothing
Sarah: Nancy Hannah come sit down here
Nancy & Hannah: Ok
Sarah: This is Hannah and Nancy, This is Nicole
Nancy, Hannah & Nicole: Hi

As the day went on Nicole was glad John Paul had stuck up for as she really got on with everyone and was glad she had made friends, maybe Hollyoaks wasnt going to be as bad as she thought.

They day been similar for Jack and Danny, the had made friends to with Fletch, Josh, Amy, Michaels and Sasha.

Melissa was even thinking Hollyoaks wasnt that bad she had went in to Evissa to see if they had any jobs going and Louise asked her to help out today and she would let her know at the end of the day.

At home the family where sitting down to dinner when Melissa burst in and screamed that she had just got a new job.

Things were going great for the family, but would it last?


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any1 want me to continue??


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sorry ive neglected this recently. should have next part up in next hour or so if any one is interested???????


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Let me know what you think please


A New Romance - Part 1

Later that night Melissa was getting ready for her date with Rhys, she was nervous, not because she liked him but because she didnt really want to go, she'd rather have went out with Gilly. She knew Rhys only asked her out because he likes to think of him self as a ladies man, he thought all the girls wanted to be with him, maybe some girls would love to be in her position, but not her, she wanted to be with someone like Gilly who would care for her not someone who would use her like Rhys would.

As Melissa made her way to the Dog she bumped into Gilly,

Gilly: You on your way to met Rhys
Melissa: Yeah
Gilly: I'll walk with you, hes already there and he's forgot his mobile
Melissa: That would be nice



sorry its short, ive not got time to write anymore just now, will try tonight if i can!!


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