Ok It's been months since i tried one of these so bare with me.

Scene 1 - (Halls Kris Is reading a letter, Zac is sat at the counter and Elliot is watching star treck)

Kris - Well I never!

Zac - What?

Kris - I've only been invited to Malachy's wedding!

Elliot - Oh that's lovely

Kris - Eliot what planet are you actually from? Malachy who hated the fact i dressed in Women's clothe's. Malachy who slept with Jess! Malachy that brother of mine who i swore i would never see again? I cant go.

Zac - Aw you gotta go mate

Elliot - It sounds to me as though he's reaching out to you. your lucky to have a family to rally round you.

Kris - I couldn't go if i wanted anyway. My parents dont exactly know about my unique style and quirky charm.

Zac - put the stilleto's away wash your face and go down to Belfast. We'll all come rally round a few people make a real trip out of it.

Kris - I don't know

Elliot - Yes we will we'll all go down a few of us. Have a bit of a rave, If that's what you say

Kris - well when you put it like that...

tbc

Ok tell me what you think... comments really apreciated

i like it please update soon

Scene 2 - (Nancy is behind the bar at the loft, Hannah and Sarah are sat chatting to her)

Nancy - This is quite possibly the easiest job in the world. I think i could do it with my eyes closed!

Hannah - Yeah sure that'd work out!

Nancy - well maybe not literally with my eye's shut

(Enter Elliot Kris and Zac)

Sarah - oh hello!

Nancy - What can i get for you gent...lads?

Zac - A Lager a Shandy and a white wine please!

Kris - Anyone fancy a trip to Belfast?

Nancy/Sarah/Hannah - What When?

Nancy - And might I add Hell Yeah!

Kris - for a Wedding in a month! My Darling Brother.

Sarah - sounds like a plan to me!

Hannah - Yeah I'm game! After Danny i could do with a little break.

Sarah - aww Yeah Hun.

Elliot - Looks like we're going to Belfast!

Tbc

Ok We're now in Belfast ok

Kris walks out of his bedroom door to go and meet his family he bids his friends goodbye who all look at him amazed at the difference in him.


Walking the busy streets of Belfast alone In Flat shoes baggy Jeans and a dark Hoody Kris contemplates what would happen if his family found out his secret. He walks with his head down his confidence as diminished as his height without his 4 inch stilletos. He Bumps into a woman. She's very attractive with aviator sunglasses on and dark hair cut closely to her face.

Kris - Sorry... No way Jess?

Jess - Kris what are you doing here?

Kris - I could say the same to you?

Jess - You've changed!

Kris - So've you

Jess - You still haven't told me why you're here?

Kris - Nor Have you?

Jess - I'm getting married here if you must know!

Kris felt his heart shatter seeing Jess had stunned him he hadn't expected after all this time to still see what he saw in her. He caught himself quickly and recovered.

Kris - So who's the lucky guy?

Jess (her face faltering) - Oh Kris

Jess wished so much that he wouldn't look her in the eyes. Wouldn't melt her. Wouldn't make her feel like crying and laughing all at the same time. She drew herself up as tall as she could and looked into his eye's his gave unfaltering.

Jess - It's Malachy...

that is good
update soon

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Originally posted by Hollyoaks Hunk:
Jess - It's Malachy...

Oh My God No!!
Thats just wrong she can't get married to Malachy. Kris needs to stop her.

This is great but it needs fixing..Carry on soon!!

More Soon Please