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fab stuff louise. I'm still reading but don't get to comment as often as I'd like!!

but I'm sure you know I love it!!

you're a fantastic writer. Big Grin
 
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YAY FOR THAT CHAPTER
so amazingly amazingly written and you could feel the tention building between them and ooooooooohhhh it was soooo good!!!
yaaaaaaaaaaay


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read it on the dark side Big Grin

c'est fantastique!!!


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Originally posted by Rockit-!:
read it on the dark side Big Grin

c'est fantastique!!!

Couldn't agree more !!!!


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Yey, finally got fh working Smile, just caught up on 'the naughty bits', and i'm so glad i'm not missing out anymore.

all i can say is "WOW"

can't wait for the aftermath

more soon please!! Big Grin
 
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Dirty darkside- it's been a while. But it's not even all the dirty it's really sweet. Love the way you don't make it too perverse...but perverse enough!


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Well personally i believe that if your going to write a dirty scene in a story, then make it a part of the plot and make it show something about the characters. Dont write sex for sex's sake. Hm, if you know what i mean. Anyway, hoping to have the next part up before closing but if not it shall be posted on the Darkside and posted here in the morning!


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lou i so agree with that, i feel like sex scenes should have some effect on the plot also, anyway really looking forward to your next part


I ♥ movies & getting caught in the rain, just hold back on the pina colada Big Grin
There's nothing more sexy than a time travelling glasses wearing time lord Wink lol

There's nothing that can't be solved with a little rock salt, a gun and Sam & Dean, oh yeah! Wink
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Fraid the new part will have to previe on the darkside. A kind of first look if you will, hee hee.


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the dark side it is my dear i look forward to it Big Grin


I ♥ movies & getting caught in the rain, just hold back on the pina colada Big Grin
There's nothing more sexy than a time travelling glasses wearing time lord Wink lol

There's nothing that can't be solved with a little rock salt, a gun and Sam & Dean, oh yeah! Wink
Fanatical about Torchwood & Jack/Ianto-because stopwatches can be VERY fun!
 
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Just read it Lou and I must say brilliant!

And Craig is right - it seems JP is the one who's scared now and running. But devasted as it means Craig is going to run back to Evil, I mean Evie, his security blanket. Silly JP. He must sort it out!

You must make these boys happy!
 
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*takes a deep breath after that marathon read*

WOW!!! Lou's every chapter was amazing!!

more soon!!!


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Crying
beautiful
heartbreaking
wonderful
sad
amazing
Crying


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Ah that chapter was so moving Lou, I really felt for both men and yet somehow I can't see their messed up relationship being anything more than that. Wonderfully wrote as always


I ♥ movies & getting caught in the rain, just hold back on the pina colada Big Grin
There's nothing more sexy than a time travelling glasses wearing time lord Wink lol

There's nothing that can't be solved with a little rock salt, a gun and Sam & Dean, oh yeah! Wink
Fanatical about Torchwood & Jack/Ianto-because stopwatches can be VERY fun!
 
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fab! x


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Well...I would hate you but it was so good that I can't!
DAMN YOUR WILEY WILEY WAYS!

....Greart. Please make them friends again. Please.


"Nobody touches the crunchy nut cornflakes"

It's Caroline by the way..
 
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Wow, what a long chapter full of heartfelt emotion. I'm glad John Paul now knows that Craig came back to him. He needed to know. I only hope they can make up...and quickly. And I also hope Craig makes it to court or he'll never forgive himself and neither will I.

Super Louise. Big Grin


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AH THAT WAS SO SAID HE FINALLY TOLD HIM HE CAME BACK. AND NOW JP IS LEAVING OMG MAKE THE TWO OF THEM SEE SENSE AND LET CRAIG DUMP EVIEPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZE
 
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it's so painfull and beautifull at the same time.

i'm in love with this story and this chapter must have been draining but i csn't wait for the next installment.

if i say you've got a great name, will that help the next chapter along Wink
 
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amazing chapter louise, you are such a good writer, i could read your fics all day.

awww poor craig and poor jp, will they ever get to be happy Frown
 
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Erm, i think this chapter was draining, then you might change your mind after reading the next one...

But sometimes before it gets better, it needs to get worse. Hm. Anyway, trying my best to get this part asap. Oh and we're actually not too far off the ending!


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The ending?! Disappointed I love and yet hate endings all at the same time! I'm sure you'll write it superbly though Lou.


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these last chapters have been wonderful - esp the last sentence of the 'dirty' one!!!


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bump Big Grin
 
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