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they were in bed together, and this time was theirs only. no-one could disturb them. no-one could ever know. it would be so weird - the person she hated the most at one point, who had caused her months and months of pain, she was in the same bed with, kissing and caressing. and this wasn't the first time, either.
justin: this isn't right.
nancy: what isn't?
justin: i'm still with katy, no matter what.
nancy: okay.
justin: sorry. i'm torn between you and katy.
nancy: you're going to have to make a choice.
justin: can i think about it?
nancy: okay.
justin left the flat, and went back to the halls. he went into katy's room to find a sinister shock:
katy: justin. i'm so sorry.
zak: justin. she'd told me you two had broken up.
katy: look - justin - i just don't feel anything for you anymore. you've been so distant since the whole thing with charlie.
justin: and...does that mean that i can't be involved with you?
katy: i'm not saying that. i'm saying that i can hardly do anything with you anymore.
justin walked off and, before he knew what he was doing, he was heading to a different place. somewhere which was going to haunt him. but something dragged him there by his ear. and he knocked on the door, and there she stood. nancy. he bent his head and kissed her...


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great start. Please write more soon.
 
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This is Great Big Grin
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it was all they had wanted since the first time - they hadn't realised it before.
a while later, they were laying there in her bed. he was kissing her and all worries about charlie and jake and katy and zak had just evaporated with each kiss. but then, the door opened, and the bedroom door opened and they could see russ.
russ: nancy. what's going on?
nancy: i'm sorry russ. but justin understands me more than you do.
russ dragged justin out of the bed and kept punching him. nancy got out of bed and dragged justin away from russ and kicked him in the b***s. russ winced in pain and struggled out of the flat. justin was a mess, with a bloody nose and a black eye. nancy cleaned him up.
justin: nancy. i can't take my eyes off you.
nancy smiled and kissed him deeply.


*kris fisher is sexy*
*Scunthorpe United foreva*
*Liverpool foreva*
*blackburn rovers foreva*
*mc loz o in da house*
 
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Still Great
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this is good more soon please
 
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really good but if i'm right

Katy betrays Justin
Justin betrays Katy
Nancy betrays Russ?
Zak betrays Justin

There should be a club!!!!! Except everyone would pretty much hate each other!!


***Florky***


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more please!


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luvin Hollyoaks! plz read my most reacent fic its called "Lifes hard when your young".

Nancy & Justin for ever!!!!!
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florky, you're bang on right there! and now i'm going to concentrate on russ today!

russ as at il gnosh chatting to dom.
russ: dom, when you first dated tina, how much love was there?
dom: quite a bit? why? how's things with you and nancy?
russ: okay. but she's sneaking around lately...i don't know what's wrong with her.
dom: she'll probably be a bit wary after the whole thing with jake.


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