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THIS IS MY FIRST FIC SO DONT BE TO HARD ON ME...

IT WAS SEPTEMBER 20TH 2008.. 1 YEAR SINCE JOHN PAUL HAD SEEN CRAIGS LOVELY BROWN EYES. KIERON DIED AND JP WAS LONELY.

MYRAH HAD DISOWNED JOHN PAUL 3 MONTHS BEFORE AND HE HAD ONLY HANNAH AS A FREIND.

SUDDENLY.. A CAR STOPPED OUTSIDE OF THE DOG AND A SUPERSEXY CRAIG WALKED OUT OF IT AND WALKED INTO THE DOG.

JOHN PAUL HAD NEVER BEEN SO SURPIRISED IN HIS LIFE. HE WANTED TO GO STARIGHT TO HIM AND APOLOGIZE BUT HE KNEW HE WAS BEST WAITING UNTIL TONIGHT BEFORE HE STARTS BEGGING HIM TO TAKE HIM BACK.CRAIG PUSHED JP AWAY AS THEY WERE ON THE STAIRS



......9PM. JP WALKED INTO THE DOG SO VERY NERVOUS HE ASKED FRANKIE IF CRAIG WAS IN AND SHE SAID "NO" BUT JP KNEW SHE WAS LYING BUT THEN CRAIG WALKED DOWN THE STEPS AND SAW JP FOR THE FIRST TIME SINCE THAT DAY AT THE AIRPORT EXACTLY1 YEAR AGO.
CRAIG INVITED JP IN AND THE FIRST THING THEY DID WAS KISS PASSIONATELY. THEY WENT UP TO THE BEDROOM AND HAD A CONVERSATION

"I MISSED YOU" CRAIG SAID CRYING "IF I WENT BACK I WOULS HAVE KISSED YOU ON THE SPOT RIGHT THERE"

"YEH BUT YOU CANT CANT YOU NOT , CRAIG, YOU BROKE MY HEART THAT DAY. ALL WE CAN BE AT THE MOMENT IS MATES, JUST MATES, OK?"

"YEH" REPLIED A DESTRAUGHT CRAIG.

jOHN PAUL RAN OUT OF THE DOG KNOWING THAT HE TOLD A LIE. HE REALLY DOES LOVE CRAIG BUT HE COULDNT SAY IT RIGHT THERE.

CRAIG LOOKED THROUGH THE WINDOW HOPING THAT HE WOULD GET TO KISS JP'S LOVELY LIPS 1 MORE TIME.


SHOULD I CONTINUE IT WAS A SLOW START I KNOW BUT I NEED TO KNOW THNKS
 
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Welcome to the fourums!

good start, can I make a suggestion though, next time try not to type everything in capital letter cus it make it seem like they are shouting everything lol


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nice start, keep going. Smile
 
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thank you for comments! <3
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That night john paul could not sleep so he decided to go out for a walk to the dog (which was closed) for a sit down on the bench to think.

Meanwhile, inside the dog Craig couldnt sleep so he went outside to think.

Suddenly they both walked into each other

"What you doing here" asked Craig
John Paul was crying.
"Ii couldnt sleep, from thinking about you"
"O come here John Paul" said craig.

Craig held John Paul and then kissed his head.

"I can't cope anymore Craig, I still love you more than anyone else but i won't admit itfor some stupid reason."

"Were Mates remember, ill be here for you."

"No Craig, I want to be more than that"

They both smiled and then kissed passionately, then they walked into the dog and into craig's room were John Paul and Craig Slept Together again for the first time in ages.
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omg lov dis fic continue soon ope u write a chapter abt craig not bein scared any more n dat he proposes 2 jp n he says yes


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brillaint =]
plz continue Big Grin


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In bed John Paul remembered the day at the airport then said to craig

"Im sorry"
"What for"
"Leaving you to go to Dublin alone"
"Don't blame yourself JP, I should have kissed you, i really don't know why i didnt. I know now that i would have just grabbed you and kissed you just to be with you because.. I love you more than anything in the whole world" They both had tears running down their face
" I love you Craig"
They kissed passionately again and had S.E.X . JP didnt have to worry about going home anymore as he had been stopping over at Hannahs ever since Myrah disowned him

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In the morning John Paul left early just to be on the safe side as Craig wouyld be in deep trouble if Frankie knew they were having sex before she even knew he was in the house.
Craig wondered wether to tell Fraankie about them or not
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Not very big thnks for comments plaze rite more xx
 
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really good =]


I like nonsense - it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living. It's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope... and that enables you to laugh at all of life's realities.
 
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"Later that day John Paul met up at the SU Bar to go to Chester together. John Paul was thinking wondering if Craig would be able to kiss john Paul in public. In Chester Shoppa-mart they were at burger king when John Paul said

"Kiss me"
"JOhn Paul- Right here?"
")Yeh right here "

"Dont Start all this again John Paul."

"Why should i not ey, we need to be normal couple"

"Give me a week"

"I thought you said."

"Yeh i did but i need you to help me."

"I've been able to admit finally now to my mates that im gay, just give me a week with you're help and i promise to kiss you next Saturday"

"I'm Going Craig"

"No please DOn't
 
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wish that JP would be a bit more understanding

but loving this fic and welcome to the forum

more please




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brillant .....!!!!!!!!


I like nonsense - it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living. It's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope... and that enables you to laugh at all of life's realities.
 
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r u goin 2 continue


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luv dis fic plz continue


Woo Craig Is Returning!!
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r u goin 2 contiue


Woo Craig Is Returning!!
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r u continue


Woo Craig Is Returning!!
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unfortunately ive started a new mcdean fic as i didnt like this myself please read it

it is called "love lasts forever - mcdean" please read it xxx

Sory
 
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