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I could feel an awful banging pain in the side of my head it was like someone was hitting me with a massive metal hammer or something. I opened my eyes slowly so that I could see the area around me. But when I had opened my eyes all I saw was mess, there was cans and bottles and a MICROPHONE. Oh god I better not have used that, I was an awful singer. This place was in such a state that I soon realised that the pain in my head must of been a hangover. I think we obviously had a good night but I can’t remember much right now.
The room was dark but not dark like the night time but dark like early morning dark. It was light enough though for me to make out that I was lying on the sofa. I could see Kris beside me he was fast asleep, he looked so cute when he was sleeping. I saw Zoë on the floor and some randomer next to her. There was no sign of eye-contact Will about though. I slowly started to move from the position I was in while trying not to wake the others up. I sat upright on the sofa my head started to hurt even more; I then carefully stood up without waking anyone up. My head turned to the kitchen; I started walking over with my hand on my head. Then I felt myself walk into something hard and I suddenly went flying. I screamed at the top of my voice, I looked to see what I had just fallen over. I screamed again I had tripped over some man that was lying on the floor. He looked dead but he absolutely stunk of alcohol.

Kris: What are you screaming about.

Kris said he sounded grumpy. I was still lying on the fall, I then turned round to look at all the bodies in the lounge. Everyone’s head seemed to pop up, it was funny seeing all their heads but I was in no mood for laughing.
Jess: I tripped over some dead guy.

I looked over the guy again he still hadn’t moved. Kris moved across the sofa to see the body of some man on the floor.

Kris: Oh that’s Moz. He’s just a heavy sleeper Jess. He’s not dead.
Well how was I supposed to know if he was dead or not. Who the hell is called Moz anyway? I heard Zoe make a small groan and the other guy started to sit up.

Kris: Next time you trip over someone can you please not scream about it.
Jess: Just shut up my head sour. I can’t handle all this talking.

I walk over to the kitchen but this time I checked for any people on the floor. I reached into the cupboard and pulled out some Paracetacmol. I couldn’t remember the last time I had had I hangover.
This was one of those times where I would usually tell myself never to drink alcohol again but I was a student now so I think I deserved to get drunk more often.


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Thanks Holly..x
Two pages!! Razz And I'm not even near the half way mark yet!!
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Haha, thats soo good, means more to come !! Big Grin
Do you know what your going to write about ages in advance?
Because I just make it up whenever I post a reply. I just let it come to my finger tips and I type!
Is that the same with you?
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Haha, thats soo good, means more to come !! Big Grin
Do you know what your going to write about ages in advance?
Because I just make it up whenever I post a reply. I just let it come to my finger tips and I type!
Is that the same with you?
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I know where the stories are going like how its going to end and I know some of like the bigger things that are going to happen. But like with these parts where not much is happening I just type what I feel like typing.
Do you not know an ending to both of yours or are you just going to wait and see where it goes?
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No ! I don't know how to wrap things up. Which is going to be pretty hard.
I just write, start with like a blank screan and let it come to be... i'm weird I know.
I'm excited for more Caitlin.!.
I am so confused about my fic goodbye my almost lover. I have no where to go with it. haha.
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Bump!!!
My Microsoft Word is playing up a bit today so I will try and write more on this as soon as Word starts to work again!!
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Yey, can't wait Caitlin.
Ohh do you know if Megan has been banned??
I just read all the stuff on the Kressian post and I saw the thing about her sister.
Do you know if she is ok ??
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No ! I don't know how to wrap things up. Which is going to be pretty hard.
I just write, start with like a blank screan and let it come to be... i'm weird I know.
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Your not wierd! I do that tooo! Big Grin

Really good! please do more soon!


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Yey, can't wait Caitlin.
Ohh do you know if Megan has been banned??
I just read all the stuff on the Kressian post and I saw the thing about her sister.
Do you know if she is ok ??
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Yes she has been banned!!
I feel so sorry for her. I hope shes okay.


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Aww no.
Thats such a shame!!
If you get banned can you ever get a new account? Do you know if she will?
I feel so sorry for her too!.
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Oh and If I haven't said this before...
I LOVE THIS FIC Big GrinBig Grin

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Thats such a shame!!
If you get banned can you ever get a new account? Do you know if she will?


Some girls on the Kress thread said she was banned for being underage and having multiple accounts. So I'm not sure if she will be able to make another account!!


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A couple of hours later…



My headache or hangover has eased off a little now, the same couldn’t be said for Zoe though, she was still feeling awful. I was put on sick duty which meant that I was the one who had to look after a sick woman and I had the nice job of clearing it all up. I made Kris and Will clean up the flat though. They deserved too.
Fortunately for me Zoe had stopped vomiting. Thank God!!
One of the random guys had woken up and left about an hour ago. But the other random guy or Moz was still sleeping on the floor. I still think he’s dead. The guy hasn’t moved in hours. I’m leaving it up to Kris and Will to get rid of him, seen as they are ones cleaning the place up.

Jess: Zo. Do you still need this bucket? Or do you think your okay now?

I sounded like some sort of nurse.

Kris: She should have finished she’s been in there for an hour and half.
Jess: I know that because I’ve been the one clearing it all up.
Kris: I can tell you stink of sick, Jess.
Jess: Charming, well once I have cleaned in there. (Pointing to the bathroom) I will get a shower.

That’s all the thanks I get for looking after his sick friend!!

Jess: Can one of you please move that thing.
I say pointing to Moz who’s still lying on the floor. They both look at me as if I’m some sort of devil.

Will: I think I will go check on Zo.
Kris: I think I hear my phone ringing. I best go check it.

Men there so damn lazy, if they think for one second that I’m going to wake that beast then their wrong, I’m not even touching him.


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Haha, Brilliant once again Caitlin !!
Pleasee do more soon xx
 
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I felt fresh and clean. I wrapped the soft white towel around my body and turned the door handle and stepped out into the corridor. I walked to my room. I felt goose bumps on my arms and legs. The first thing I did was run straight to the warm heater. I stood leaning on the white radiator. I looked around my now tidy room. The pink radio caught my eye so I decided to switch it on and listen to some music while I got warm and got dressed. I pressed the on button; it already seemed to be tuned in.
I closed my eyes and just listened to the song playing. I had heard it before but I couldn’t remember it. I’ve heard a lot of songs since 2006.
I listened to the lyrics of the songs.


And why d'you say
It's just another day, nothing in my way
I don't wanna go, I don't wanna stay
So there's nothing left to say?

And why d'you lie
When you wanna die, when you hurt inside
Don't know what you lie for anyway
Now there's nothing left to say


The words made sense to me. A tear trickled down my face as I thought about everything. I wanted to stay but I didn’t want to. Why was my life so confusing? I hadn’t forgotten about the mess I was in but I just tried to keep them thoughts to the back of my mind for now.

A tell-tale sign
You don't know where to draw the line

Well for a lonely soul, you're having such a nice time
For a lonely soul, you're having such a nice time
For a lonely soul, it seems to me that you're having such a nice time
You're having such a nice time.


My eyes where still tightly shut. I wasn’t ready to let the world in yet.


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After I had got changed and stopped feeling sorry for myself, I walked out into the lounge area. I noticed that Moz was no longer lying on the floor and the fl